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Reviewer: Anya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

More please.

Author's Response: Soon. ;)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I'm never disappointed in this story and every posts better then the last. Trouble is brewing and some sort of Buffy accident is coming we just don't know what yet. I feel like I'm watching a really good episode and dying to see nexts weeks previews lol. Lovely work on this the first love/scene was perfectl set.

Author's Response: There is no greater compliment than to be compared to the show, so thank you very much, tattooedsiren. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

OMG IT BETTER NOT BE A BAD OMEN!!!! AND ALSO YAY, THEY DID IT!!!!!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. im so glad that she told him shed marry him and that they made love. i really hope that it stays happy and that they stay together. also i hope that if she does get sent back(noooo) or angelus doesnt get her that her and spike find each other and admit they love each other and get together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback, sarah g. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm working on the update now, so hopefully it will be ready in a few days. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

“I know the important things,” he insisted. “I know that you are beautiful and kind; I know that you take care of others before you consider yourself.” Beneath her hand, the flesh of his chest suddenly warmed with embarrassment. He added shyly, “I know that you love me.”

“And that’s enough?” she whispered. She had dropped her head to his shoulder, and she could not see his face, but she could feel him smiling.

“That’s enough,” he answered softly.

This was perfect and so sweet spooning moment

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I love this please add more soon its my favorite story in a long time.

Author's Response: I'm working on the update now. I'm glad you like it, thank you for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Top the tea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Humm when will the time be right and when will you be ready Buffy to tell him everything?

Loving this more then a review can possibly say :P

Author's Response: Personally, I think she's dragging her feet on that one, Top the tea. lol. Thanks so much, what a nice thing to say in a review! I'm really flattered you are enjoying it that much and I hope you continue to do so. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

This was beautiful and now the suspense is killing me just killing me for your next chapter in this.

Author's Response: I was hoping to build the suspense with the last paragraph. I'm glad to know I succeeded. :) Thanks for the review! I will certainly update just ASAP.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

damn, did that poem hit the spot or what? huh, never see here again though, he does see he as spike though, right? hopefully? i can't wait to read more! please update soon! please?

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

yah! another chapter! I'm surprised that Buffy told William that she refused him at first because she was afraid. But seems everything will be right as rain....right?

Author's Response: Well, she was just being honest with him on that, gdo. As for everything being right as rain...well, love and life never goes that smoothly. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for telling me so. :)

Reviewer: Inara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

NOOOOOOOO, you are so wicked... you can't leave us hanging like that... please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm nothing if not evil. ;) Don't worry, I won't leave you hanging too long.

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

UH-OH!!!!! I think I know what's coming UP!!!! Great foreshadowing, fantastic method. :) Love this fic. THEY FINALLY MADE LOVE! Beautiful, beautiful scene-- but I have a feeling that the big badness is coming back! Update soon? Please?

Author's Response: You do, do you? lol. Well, sit tight and we'll see how right you are. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

And I forgot to ask, will there be babies?

Author's Response: Now do you really expect me to answer that? ;)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

OMG that was the MOST beautiful chapter. When he says to her "So tired of being alone...." I found it so moving. This is how I feel William/Spike always is. He is always alone when he really needs acceptance and love, even as a vampire (in the end). Please update this fantastic story soon.

Author's Response: I feel that way about Spike/William, too, Sam. It seems his entire existence has been spent in the pursuit of lasting love. That is what is so interesting about the character. While all other vampires become "monsters," William remains fundamentally unchanged. Capable of evil, of course. But not so different from the human poet, even when he wants to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

First I loved this and second oh God please don't tell me she dies or something on their wedding day!

I don't know Victorian time lines so well but considering their night together I'm sure William will want to push the wedding asap because of not wanting any like scandels or whatever .

Heartbreak is coming but necessary for in the becoming of Spike.

Great job it is so gripping I'm hooked liner and victorain sinker on this.

Author's Response: To be perfectly honest, now that she's accepted his proposal, I think he would be pushing up their wedding date no matter what, lol. But you're right, the premarital relations will just give him all the more reason to. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Ague 77 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I love this fic and I think my fav part was Buffy telling him making love to him was perfect for a guy like William it was the right thing he would need to hear.
Please add more when you can its starting to really heat up.

Author's Response: I will definitely update ASAP. Glad to hear you will be waiting for it. :) Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Aww I think explaining her fears of marriage will make him see how she would say no and it not be his fault or anything to do with her feelings towards him it is just she has no experience of people being happy and married and why she would think no guy stays. In a fairy tale like way you can see Elizabeth being able to marry where Buffy with her life and world and issues never would. Oh and this tooth powder scares me more then I think this upcoming pony ride.


Author's Response: The tooth powder? lol. Well, there's an unusual suspect. ;) Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I kept sneaking online at work to see if you added more and weee you did and it was sooooo worth the wait . Very emotional and innocent in the telling. I think I liked the most about this is he really only thinks she'd ever come to him in his dreams and when he realizes she is really there with him it was dreamy to read and real.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, Ula. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

What a lovely chapter. Buffy handled herself beautifully -- I needn't have worried so -- and his drunkeness will make up for any wonderings about the fact that she was not a virgin. Or at least allow William his reasonable doubt. But, oh, the poetry was a beautiful touch, even if scary at the end.

I did discover what I love most about your William -- his ability to trust Buffy, to trust love, despite how little he really knows about her. And, on a slightly different note, I do wonder now that he's tasted her, if he will be content with just this much before they are married.

Love this so much! Amazing chapter.

Author's Response: Well, he is so enamored of her at this point, it's doubtful he will have his fill of her anytime soon. ;) I'm so glad you like my story. Thank you for taking the time to tell me so! :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wait wait wait don't end there! So beautiful for a first time love scene for a guy. I'm sure for a guy not knowing what to do and fearing a girls expectations of him even in past times had to be hard I thought it was good you described what he was thinking in those moments.
Something bad is coming and William feels it, it makes me wonder more about him like when ever something good happens to him he always fears the worst cause maybe that has always happened to him and it sort of explains why he does have this blinding love towards Elizabeth cause she really is the light in his life.

Author's Response: What wonderful insight into the story, tananore. You are completely right: so few truly wonderful things have come into his life, that William is fearful of this one. He's devoted himself to her completely, but that might not be a good thing. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Beautiful and tender. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Still_A_Thrill Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Elizabeth's tearful apology got to me and then their loving together afterwards was perfect. I think it was good William was a little drunk to pull away a few layers of his repression. If repression is a actual word lol. Flawless romance telling yet again here.

Author's Response: Thank you, Still_A_Thrill. I'm glad it was up to par with the rest. :)

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I don't think there are words to express how beautiful, how wonderful this chapter was. I think you captured them perfectly, their reactions to their love-making so true to what we've seen from the start and throughout this story. The last bit seems ominous, though. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful tale. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you, Dusty, for taking the time to offer me feedback. I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Amazing! I've been waitting for the update and you did not disapoint! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope nothing to terible gets it the way of william and buffys marriage : )

Author's Response: My lips are sealed about that one. ;) But I hope you enjoy it when it comes. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I am so glad Buffy got through to William. This whole chapter was beautiful. I can't wait until the next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fran. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

"Vanished from his sight forever"

This is sitting in my head now and I wanna shake Spuffy Realm to make the next page in this appear. I literally yelled at my VAIO saying "Don't you dare end there! I need more!" and then there was a "Argh!!!!" thrown in there. It is like knowing a Volcano is going to go off soon and none of the villagers are taking any notice. Ok we got

A lovers twist
A pony fall
A maybe field
A vanishing
A maybe run in with Dru and Angel evil
A girl from another time

I feel a portal coming on!!!

And little William losing her and commiting Vamp suicide without her in his life. It's like a Greek Hellmouth tragedy only a stiff upper lip and pretty clothing.

Please Please Please give up meals and sleep your personal life and whatever to just stay at your keyboard and type this masterpeice away!

Yes I know it's demanding but woman you have a public here and we the people need more.

Author's Response: A masterpiece? My goodness, I cannot tell you how flattered I am that you feel that way. :) I am perfectly willing to give up sleep for the sake of writing, but I'm afraid I am rather too fond of eating. How about I just take my meals in front of the laptop? ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)

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