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Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

The conversation after was the most telling how Buffy finds it strange that he never asks her about her life and he always just accepts her I myself am jealous of that for every girl wants someone just like William who just loves her for her. I like how you describe how he just worships her for loving him and how lonely his life had been up until her like he was waiting for her.
This is so perfect I wish it was a episode so I could watch it 100 times.

Author's Response: What a lovely way to put it, Tears of the Moon. I feel that way as well...that he spent his life waiting for her, an idol worthy of his devotion. Thank you as always for taking the time to review. I can't tell you how much I enjoy reading your comments. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Married she said yes, wonder what that will mean for Buffy and Spike, Was it his death or her return to her correct year he was reading about.

Author's Response: smlcspike, it could really go any number of ways right now. I'm not saying which one it will be. ;) Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: entrenous88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh! Now I'm itching to see if she falls off the horse and like dies in Williams time and gets sucked back into the future or what.
I liked the love sceneit was just enough sometimes people go over the top and mess a story up when it comes to that part and you sailed right through it while not changing the rwo parties involved.
I really loved how the poems tie in in the beginning and in the end

Author's Response: I was hoping the poems would be seen that way...as bookends to hold the chapter together. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh thank you for postng I was dying to see a new chapter of this. The love scene was good showing William being unsure. I think what I find most cool about this is that William always goes with the signs he gets about Elizabeth from seeing her on the street one day to the latest thing in the poem in the book. He always follows his heart with her good or bad but even he has a bad vibe now. It will be really cool with the things you have planned coming ahead. I am anxious for more with all these new developments coming.
Great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you, mselfie. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: journey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I thought it was a beautiful moment and yet a sad one too because you know their little world in that house will be changing soon. Please write more when you can its very addictive this stiry.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Addiction is the best form of praise. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: nekokage Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Beautiful and yet tragic cause you can feel the dark clouds forming against them. I liked how you had Buffy ask why he never asks her about herself. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, nekokage. I've had so many people ask me why William never asked her more questions about herself, but this scene has been in my mind since day one. He is a patient man; he is willing to wait for her to open up about her past (or future?) rather than pressing her to do so. I'm glad you liked that. :)

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Graet update! Married! Yay! Spuffyness! Yay! Well... more like... Wuffy. Lol, that sound strange. Anywho, great update! More soon I hope! Also, I can't stop wondering whether or not she's going back to SunnyD... and whether or not Williams going to get turned... hm.... Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

There are so many little twists of fateplaying in with these two there has to be the Powers that Be guiding them somehow with little signs of forshdowing. Excellent update and worth every word of the wait.

Author's Response: What a nice thing to say, Mephisto. I'm glad it was worth the wait. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Bel Canto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

First off so wonderful was the writing on this it was perfect. I think William being drunk will shadow the thinking on the non-loss of Elizabeths virginity. Loved it!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Bel Canto. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I was so glad to see this updated! Love the very romantic first time of theirs, beautiful and sexy.

Author's Response: Thank you, Toni. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Julumba Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

OMG ok I need my boyfriend and I need him now.
Victorian hot-tas-tic!

Author's Response: lol. That good, huh? Well, I'm certainly glad you think so. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wow. This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I'm so pleased that you wrote the sex between them without being extremely pornographic, as if giving us glimpses of their shadows. The end made me shiver, as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hope you had a happy birthday! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you, mwfte. It's not technically until Wednesday, but we went out on the weekend. So far, it's been wonderful. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter. I wanted to show some restraint with the sex scene, since it was written in William's POV. I'm glad to hear you liked it. :)

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

dun dun DUN!! ooh cliffie but it was good! i cant wait to see what happens cant wait caint wait! thanks for updating!! ;) YAyA!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So pleased to find an update on this wonderful story. This chapter was just sublime. Perfect. Thanks ever so.

Author's Response: Thank you, Victoria, for taking the time to offer me feedback. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

love it. i want to see a twist. How about someone come through a portal...perhaps...a bleached blonde?

Author's Response: A twist is coming, although I won't say if it is the one you are suggesting. Thanks for taking the time to review. ;)

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

this chapter was so sweet, but i guess the little clue you left with the poem really tells us something =( cant wait to know what happens next!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh seeing this update really made my whole day - and it was such a good one on top of that!!!! I really hope they do actually get married, although this story always leaves you on edge that something bad might happen! e.g she goes back to Sunnydale, he gets turned etc... I really really love this story, thank you so much for the great update it was very much appreciated. Hope to see more soon (by the way your writing style is just amazing, you can really see where its set and feel their emotions remarkably well) Thanks!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, squawks. I'm glad you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it. I appreciate your taking the time to tell me so. :)

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