You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Barfoot-Spuff-tessa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

My friend called me and told me to read this new page asap!
First I love love love your take on William and how you tell this story and second you gave him every reaction a guy like him would have just as a human would perfectly.
Gru at the end was the most perfect part cause William has given up on being a man becoming a monster now is the perfect answer for him.
Now I'm dying to see how Buffy fairs on the other side.


Author's Response: You have a great handle on William's character, so your review was a pleasure to read. I'm glad you like the story, and thanks so much for offering me feedback. :)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Call me terrible here but I want Spike on the other side of this time portal when Buffy comes thru and she's wearing Elizabeth's dress, in the last thing he saw her in and he does sees who she is. Cause that's gonna be a show!!!
Hot damn this story kicks all kinds of ass!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying that, Delta. I'm so flattered that you think so. :) Buffy and Spike will, of course, meet again. However, I'm not sure it will be as soon as most people hope. But I promise, this story will continue to be a romance in each chapter. True love, after all, is eternal.

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Oh thank you I didn't know how I was gonna make it waiting to see what happened next here. Poor William so much to go thru to lead him o his fate but it had to happen ths way. I think you were dead on in how you had him react your the best Will/Spike writer I have ever seen here. I need tissues and chocolate!!!

Author's Response: A good Hershey or Dairy Milk bar is definitely the thing to ease all sorrow. I'm sorry to upset you, because you're one of my favorite reviewers. But I'm glad you liked the story in spite of all the angst. Thanks so much for the feedback!

Reviewer: Ague 77 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Well I am crying and its a good cry too best story ever wriiten as far as I am concerned.

Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say, Ague. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

You made me weep for William. I could tell what would eventually happen to William but what about Buffy?

Hurry up please with the update!

Author's Response: Buffy will reappear, never fear. But not necessarily as soon as people might think...

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

New chapter, yah! ohhh, poor William. I was afraid you would pull a "Gone with the Wind" and have William shoot the pony. then when Matthew went to check on it, I was afraid he would shoot it.

I don't get why the cook would think William was spoil. He seemed responsible and undemanding. Though I was interrested in he opinions of the servents about Buffy; I like the bit where the cook told Mtthew to press charages. since it gave a look of the working class.

And then Dru. Though I don't remember Dru says "dashing"; could be my faulty memory or you making the time line different. Great chap!

Author's Response: Dru did in fact call him dashing. I kept that one line exactly as it was in the episode, because I thought it was beautiful in an eerie sort of way. The cook was mainly angry because of William's abuse of Matthew. Yes, William treated the servants extremely well, but in Victorian London a lot of servants were mistreated by employers who saw them as little more than cattle (it was a very class based society). When she saw Matthew's face, I think she became disillusioned with her own boss. What she didn't take into account was the extreme circumstances in which it occured. Shooting the pony never really occured to me, although now that you mention it, that was one of the most tragic scenes in "Gone with the Wind." I just think William was more inclined to blame the people involved, rather than the animal. And Matthew works closely with the horses every day, so he is very attached to them. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Woot! You updated again! *Feels spoiled*

This chapter was an excellent followup to the the last one. I love that you managed to work the setting and dialogue from the canon version of William's turning into your own story. It fits perfectly.

Poor William. The way you had him react to losing Buffy was very realistic, considering how repressed he's been. I'm looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, mwfte. Thanks for reviewing. I'm hoping to finish the next chapter by the end of the week; I've got about 2000 words written so far. So just keep just back.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

As much as I knew I should expect Drusilla to show up, it was still so heartbreaking to see William in the alley, wanting to die! Are you going to stay with William/Spike for now and let us see whether/how his unlife as a vampire has been altered because of his love for Elizabeth and blaming himself for her "death"? Or are you taking us immediately back to the present to see if/how Buffy's trip to the past has affected the timeline? How is Buffy doing???? Please update soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: To answer your question, Part Two will be dealing with William and the aftermath of his turning. Buffy will reappear in Part Three. I hope this won't discourage you from reading, because despite the new focus on William/Spike, there will be no lack of romance. I don't think anything would affect or alter his love for her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Oh, that's bad. You so know how to keep me at the edge of my seat. You've done such a great job getting us to this point. I love the idea that Drusilla's voice became his next opiate. This is all shitty and beautiful all at the same time. What of Buffy? You must update soon...again.

Author's Response: Shitty and beautiful huh? lol. Well, I've never had my writing described in that way before, but I will definitely take it as a compliment. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Man, this was so sad! I feel so bad for William. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Susie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

This is so sad. I absolutely love this story--actually I like it better the original version written by Joss if you can believe that! You've done such a wonderful job on this that I can't wait to see what happens when Spike and Buffy meet up again the present.

Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment. I have only the greatest respect for Joss, so to be compared to him is an honor for me. Thank you!

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Oh, I thought I was ready for it, but I wasn't . Oh!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't want to push, but -- more please! Or at least, just tell me, it will get better soon, right???

I will miss William so!!!!!



Author's Response: Tsk tsk. You know I can't tell you that, readergirrl. It would spoil the surprise. However, the update shouldn't be too long coming. I've already written about 2000 words of it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

YES!!! Finally we can skip ahead and see how going back to the future has changed things...William (well he's going to be Spike now) is going to be super pissed off that Buffy never told him the truth about who she was. You must update soon. YOU MUST! Like tomorrow...or Saturday. PLEASSSEEE you must.



Author's Response: And just who says we'll immediately be going back to the future? ;) Unfortunately, this update won't take place until next Friday, unless I have another burst of time and inspiration, as I did with this past chapter. Anyway, I hope when it *is* ready you will enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Miss C Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I gotta say that i am completely enjoying your story.... and i also cant wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad, Miss C. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Alia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Wow. Wow. Wow. Now what? Will she turn him? If she does, will he remember Elizabeth? If he does, will that change the course of Spike's life as a vampire? What? What?? What???

I'm completely addicted to this story and will wait with an ill grace for your next update. Thank you again for your gorgeous writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to offer me feedback, Alia. I greatly appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: xtina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

omg this is brilliant.
Update soon i can't wait any longer - poor buffy!!?! poor william!!!

will spike remember her?!?!

Author's Response: It won't be too long. Possibly Friday. Just keep checking back.

Reviewer: Inara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Very well done... I especially liked how the events of Buffy going missing brought William one step closer to his fate! Now it will be very interesting to see how the rest of the story plays out... paradoxes can always be a bit tricky LOL Update soon!!!




Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Oh, what a heartbreakingly beautifully written chapter. I feel so bad for William, he's so lost and now Dru has found him. I can only imagine what's to come, but I'll be waiting anxiously to read what you have in store for us. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, Dusty. I appreciate the feedback and I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so far.

You must login (register) to review.