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Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

ABSOLUTELTY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Wow...i knew archer had it coming to him. But when he asked to have a railroad spike through his head i could help but laugh and clutch my own head. I guess this is where 'Spike' is now being born.

Love the dream too. I'm glad that Elizabeth is kept seperate from Dru and Angelus...its like his own personal thing that he has only to himself and thats why he holds own to humanity so much (example...eating the apple).

I really want to see if you write about the mine shaft thing...and what Spike did to make Angelus, Darla, and Dru hide away. And i want to see some of the long lost years...like we know Spike was in WWII and stuff...but what about the 1920s and stuff. I think it would be interesting to see Spike meet Billy Idol, since he claimed he stole his look..

Well, keep it up. Even though i'm saddened that Buffy isn't really around for these chapters, i instantly forget that with your great storytelling of the Angelus and Dru years.



Author's Response: I'm glad that the absence of Buffy isn't chasing you away, u2fan. I feel that we need to really explore the William/Spike character now, in order to understand some of his actions later. I'm glad that you're enjoying that. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

I would hate to be Havisham cause all you could think was (Will I be next?) It was cool to see how when William thought of his enemies he thought first of people who insulted Elizabeth and not of people who insulted himself he went out to defend anyone who spoke badly of her. I am liking this book 2 because even though there is no Buffy in it she is always in his thoughts. This is just so good it's like reading a fire you want to turn the page before your fingers burn its just that hot a story.

Author's Response: Yes, I can assure my readers that even though Buffy is not physically present in Part II, the romance of the story has not lessened at all. There might be violence and bloodshed...but there will still be romance. William's dogged passion for "Elizabeth" will follow him into his Spike days and beyond. Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Angelus training is coming in handy I see lol. I like how you made Dru and William much a like in needing each other in like a sibiling type relationship. They seem to understand each other. Love this story I find myself looking for it everyday.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: KitKat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

YES!!!!
Ok I am evil too but I wanted Archer to die cause he was a asshat but wow great new stuff I was excitedto see more today I did a girlie giggle! Love it

Author's Response: lol. I'm actually surprised how many readers are calling for Archer's blood in this chapter. I guess that means I'm not the only one who wanted William to have his revenge. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and, as always, thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Oh, wow-- another fantastic chapter. It's so amazingly morbid, and I love it. No one's captured the four's interactions the way you do, and it's so believable-- the sequence of events in and of themselves, as well as the slight day-to-day changes (and bigger ones, of course) that you made to fit the plot. I'm just in utter awe at how fantastic this is-- I loved the first part, but this one's gotten all the better. Looking forward to more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Devin. You're review was so nice to read. It's a pleasure to know that I've written something that so many people are reading and enjoying. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to review and let me know you like it.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

I like the torture sequence, unlike Angelus's suggestion of intimacy, it was almost the polar opposite with his analytical observance of Archer's slow decline. Enough details for knowing what was happening without an abundance of gore.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Mmmmm - vengeance is mine. Nicely written in a nasty sort of way. Love this story and am waiting for more.


Author's Response: lol. I'm glad you liked it, nastiness and all. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Wow that was intense... I like it, still love william...I'm assuming that time will pass and he will meet buffy as the slayer in the future? Will it pick up in season 2 and go from there. But will she remember that she was sent to the past? Will she regonise william? I can't wait for the next chapter...update soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. I'll update just as quickly as I can, I promise. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Oh I love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Enjoying the story...

Author's Response: I'm glad. Thank you.

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