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Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Great new page! Spikes going all fists and fangs and even Dru tried to comfort him a little and he doesn't give a hang what Angelus does or says.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Spike heeeheeheehee* I love the mob coming for him great cliff hanger please more soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I liked he put on clothes that defy Angelus it says alot about his future clothing as well. Loved seeing him not taking anyones crap!

Author's Response: Yeah, Angelus pushed him a bit too far, and now he's pushing back. I'm glad you like that. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

As gruesome as the story is supposed to sound, I find parts of it down right hilarious.

Author's Response: Parts of it were supposed to be hilarious, so that's okay. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Spike did said Dru was his salvation and he got into scrapes because he was young in one episode of Buffy, and I think your doing a great job of him rebeling his old life and society and fighting anyone he comes across.
Excellent as always

Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm glad you liked it. :) The episode you mentioned (Fool for Love) really has been one of my biggest inspirations for the story. In my opinion it's one of the best in a great series.

Reviewer: Switchblade Kross Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

You can't keep a bad boy down lol. Love where this is going more soon please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 02:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I love the making of a Spike!!! but can't help wondering how he will react when he finally meet Buffy.... probably won't believe his own eyes...poor darling, can't have it easy for once....

Author's Response: Nope, poor Spike has a tough row to hoe. Fortunately, he's a tough boy and can overcome anything thrown at him. I'm glad you like the story, and I want to thank you very much for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

“Spike,” she echoed softly. It sounded good to his ears, although she pronounced it “Spoik.”

I cringe each time I hear Drusilla call him Spoik, but I'm really glad you added this in because it definitely stays true to her character. I love little details such as those :)

I also love the transition as to how Spike is understanding Drusilla now...I always did enjoy the two of them together so reading what's going on in his head is a nice little bonus.

And tee hee to Spike versus Angelus. I remember Angelus in one of the flashbacks yelling at the newly named Spike about his reckless behavior, so it's fun to read the backstory you created for it.

Waiting patiently (sort of!) for the next chapter :) Wonderful work!

Author's Response: I think I may have chased away some readers with the Spike/Dru interaction (there has been a noticeable decline in reviews, at any rate). But I think that his growing affection for her is only natural. What he feels isn't passionate love, but it is affection and friendship. Dru appeals to the side of him that wants to nurture ... and to the side of him that wants to be nutured. At least, that's how I always perceived it to be on the show, and that's the way I'm writing it. It's just that, in my version, as opposed to Joss' ... Spike is in love with another woman. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to review it. :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Rousing good time! This is EXACTLY how I picture my Spike! Your chapter definitely put a huge smile on my face. Right on, man! The man, the myth, the legend...and you know just how to write it.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you saw it that way. I had a huge grin on my face while I was writing it. Although brutal, the chapter, to me, was empowering. Spike may be evil, but at least he is now his own man; he isn't allowing Angelus to bully him any longer. And each step on this path is taking him closer to Buffy. Thanks for the lovely review! :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

It's as if Angelus's 'lesson' has set Spike adrift in a sea of bloody recklessness: he's become an almost swirling dervish of murder and mayhem and brutal fun. This, of course, incenses his grandsire as the Aurelius quartet are unable to remain amongst their potential victims as Spike's antics push the existence of their kind and, moreover, their close proximity into a very vengeful public interest. A joy and a spur for Spike; an unnecessary spotlight and unwelcome vulnerability for Angelus. They flee. Yes, the fierce, immortal demons of the night have to escape London, and settle in Yorkshire. Only, Spike's first action there is to obliterate the clientele of the local pub - and those who escape raise the alarm. Hence, another angry mob.

Spike is now pushing everything to the limit. With hysterical laughter to boot. Like a hyper child, beyond all reason.

William has been tethered; Spike is now unleashed.

Great chapter.


Author's Response: Beautifully put, Sue. Would you like to become my summary writer, because you have a knack for it. :) Really, it's so nice to hear that you enjoyed the chapter and, more importantly, that you got what I was trying to convey. I love knowing that the points I'm hoping to make with my writing have come across to my readers. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I really love that last line for some reason.

Hmm, anyway to the actual review --> I'm not sure just how many times I can say I love this fic, but there I go again so...yeah. Writing is as usual superb and so so so superior to 99% of fics that I've read, and even then its on par with the other 1% of writing that I find amazing. Gah, it's just too good. I really hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Wow, squawks, flattery will get you *everywhere*. :P Seriously, though, your compliments have really made my day. Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! As always, loved it!! More ASAP please!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :) I'll update just as soon as possible -- hopefully by Friday, if the Muse is kind. So, just keep checking back.

Reviewer: Charley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 03:35 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I think I've fallen in love with this Spike.

Author's Response: That's a compliment in and of itself. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

really enjoyable. Esp. the blacksmith trying to avenge his daughter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

LOL.. I'm sure this wasn't meant to be funny but anytime Spke can annoy Angel in any way it makes me smile :)

Author's Response: Nah, it was meant to be funny in bits. lol. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to tell me so! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

This is so great to read and I still have a big grin on my face even after all the killing. Spike is now the proverbial thorn in Angelus' side and it would appear he is not going to be removed easily, if at all. I love the fact that this is so beautifully written I can see it playing out in front of meand if you want to write the next hundred years in full then I wlll be waiting to read it. A pleasure as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sam. For my work to be called "beautifully written" really makes me feel good. I appreciate your taking the time to tell me that, and I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

DAMN that was a good chapter. :o Hilarious in its own way, and just purely the essence of Spike. :) Always looking forward to more from you!

Author's Response: Thanks, Devin. As always, I appreciate your taking the time to review. I'm glad you liked the chapter -- hilarious was just what I was going for. :)

Reviewer: Mag rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

You rock girl! I wonder if they will hide out in a mine as in the original?

Author's Response: Thanks, Mag rose. :D The mineshaft will be making its appearance soon, although the interaction between characters will be somewhat different than what it was on the show. I hope you enjoy that scene when it comes. ;)

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

YAY! I understand that we have to go through the turning of William into Spike, but I can't help fantasizing about what happens when we see Buffy again. Anyhow, you do credit to a backstory that Joss never revealed, and I think it's awesome. Your writing is wonderful, and your smooth evolution of characters is perfect. Waiting for more.

CT.

Author's Response: I completely understand wanting to see Spike/Buffy interaction. I'm wanting to see it, too, and I'm the author. lol. But you're right, this part is necessary, and I'm glad you're finding it enjoyable even without Buffy's presence. Thanks for taking the time to review and let me know. :)

Reviewer: agora Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

you know, i really love this story. seeing how spike's character fleshes out and turns from being william to spike is such an interesting trip. i loved seeing the "fun" evil spike start to poke his head out. he makes me giggle.

Author's Response: lol. Evil Spike is fun, isn't he? I had a lot of fun writing him. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Very funny. Looking forward to more. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: bel_amour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

OMG i loved it it was sooooooooo good i can not wait until you update. please do so soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Yey! An update, written beautifully as usual. I really enjoyed William's transformation into the working-class Spike; you handled it very well. I wonder how long it will take him to realise that, despite what he appears to be wishing, William is still a part of him.

Update soon, please! :-D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Even though this story about Spike has no tender moments with Buffy but instead full of violence and hatred, nevetheless im very captivated! It is because it is so graphically well written in detail and every emotion is so real i could see it so clearly in my eyes and i could feel it so strongly in my veins.

Very very good!! Please give us more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you haven't been turned off by the darker tone of Part II. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I love the irony of the way Spike torments Angelus with a bitter teaspoon of rebellion. Angelus who plans, schemes and stalks his victims and is used to being feared and obeyed. He broke Drusilla and in a way I think that by turning William she is inadvertently paying Angelus back for the crimes he commited against her. She cultivated a man who had so much potential to be her dark knight to be the strength that she never possessed to throw in the face of her daddy. She is a naughty child and has delivered a challenge to Angelus that may break him instead. Love the characterizations which we barely saw a glimpse of in the TV show. Looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Your insights into the characters' motivations are a pleasure to read. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

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