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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2013 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Holy crap, I should not like this Spike as much as I do. Right now I could give a rats ass about Buffy.

He may be a sick murderer, but he is so ... Alive. Yeah, I think that's the word. Pure entertainment.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

“Of course, it isn’t something even to be considered,” continued Darla. “Drusilla, surprisingly enough, had a rare moment of lucidity."

Hee. I love Darla. Did she say this on the show or was it something you made up? Because it's definitely a Darla-esque thing to say. Overall though, I really am enjoying how you're writing her. She's one of my absolute favorite characters and you're definitely doing her justice.

This story is really taking shape and with the help of Angelus, Drusilla, and Darla, William's transformation to Spike is coming along quite well. I can't wait to read his take on the slayers,especially since little does he know in a matters of years, he'll realize the love of his life is one.

Besides loving this story, I'm also loving the fact that you respond to the reviews we post. It makes the story more real to me, reading your insight. The story itself seems difficult to write because of it's rich detail, so I just want you to know how grateful I am that you're sharing it with us, and that you're taking the time to write back when we review :)

Author's Response: I made that line up. I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks so much for mentioning my responses to the reviews. I was wondering if anyone actually read them, lol. I love how you guys take time to break down the chapters and tell me what you like (or, even dislike) about each one. My new chapter is at the Beta's right now, so hopefully it won't be too long until I can update. I hope you like the new chapter when it comes!

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Awesome! Brilliant chapter. Them leaving as they did was wonderful. Does he find the Slayer? Or does she pass before he gets to her? Is that how he ends up in China during the Boxer Rebellion? Because the Italian Slayer died? Hmmm.. More great transitioning into Spike becoming his own vamp. His reputation is becoming increasingly well earned, and Angelus.. ouch! That's hilarious, how Spike put him down and all, unmanning him, after a fashion. He's such a pussy! LOL! Love it and waiting for more.

CT.

Author's Response: Not many people have mentioned Spike mocking Angelus' manhood (I think the North London scene garnered more attention) but I laughed at Spike's cockiness there. He could have let the rape cow him, but instead he's using it as a weapon against his grandsire. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

So Spike found out about slayers... and is willing to try to fight them. He fights for the joy of the fight, to pit his strength against the slayer. And so it begins...
~ Caught up at last. Looking forward to Part III because Part II is harder for me to read; I don't like S/D even if this is endurable and I'm sure Part III won't be walking straight into fluffy spuffy.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it's harder to read, but I understand why. I promise it will be worth the wait when Part III comes. Althought you're right, it won't be fluffy. ;)

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Again...another chapter of debauchery and coming into one's own self for Spike. Such a bleak time that causes him to reinvent himself. Masterful writing. So fun to read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Deb. I'm glad you think so highly of the story. :)

Reviewer: Insomniac Spike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

There is a real intensity to this story and not just from the romantic begining it really has a whopper of a plot and is so well told.
I'm new to reading this authors work but for a first time reader this is a phenomenal undertaking and does not disappoint.
I hope to catch more of this soon it s by far the best story going



Author's Response: What a nice thing to say about my writing. Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I really like this its a intense romance as well as a action packed emotional story really great reading is to be found here

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: LoVe Epics Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Really a good storyline I'd like to read more of it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I lioke how you've made him stand up to Angelus and watch over Dru. And the battle with him against the crowd was good for him it showed him he is strong and can come out on top. I love your story because it never lets me down and each new page tops the last I just love running across the new updates. Great job and morre soon please I cant seem to get enough of this

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad to hear that I'm living up to your expectations with each update. I appreciate the review. :)

Reviewer: buffy25122003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

loved it when is part 3 going to be up, i wonder how things are going to be dif for Buffy and i hope you put in how Buffy and spike met in season two, but of course with the twist. gr8 chap

Author's Response: Part III will be coming up just as soon as I finish Part II ... I'm about halfway through Part II right now (give or take a few chapters). I know you're excited to see Buffy again, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story in the meanwhile. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Great chapter as usual.
Your chapters are the kind of chapters that you have to read at least twice. And not because they´re not understandable, but because they have so much information, so many "pearls" to read so yes, I least I have to read them twice. The first time goes fast, because I want to know what happens next, the second time to really enjoy the interaction between them. And everything is important.
I was a bit disappointed that Angelus didn´t talk about the slayer he had met in London or that he didn´t find it unusual that knowing there was a slayer in Rome as they say there was, there also was one in London.
But I do understand that Darla wouldn´t send Spike back to London. Better Rome, I suppose she want´s to get rid of him, and that makes sense...to send him far away....


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I always love hearing your thoughts. :D To address a couple of your comments ... Angelus refused to give Spike any information about the slayer, which was why he never thought to mention Buffy (although, honestly, I doubt he would anyway, given the fact that he came out worse for wear in the experience). Darla and Dru didn't know she was a slayer -- by the time they showed up Angelus already had her down, and he never mentioned the word "slayer" in front of them. Darla definitely wants Spike as far from her as possible, and part of her is hoping that he will get himself killed by the Italian slayer. What Angelus will feel when he learns of all this, it remains to be seen. ;)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

He's thinking of a battle with warrior, but I wonder what Slayer it is the Dru sees. The girl would have to know that he will never quite be hers, lost his heart somewhere else. And the flashback to that mine scene, I think I'll have to watch the episode tomorrow. I love it. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so well. As always, thank you for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Such a rebel boy our Spike is please more as soon as you can

Author's Response: I'm trying to update once a week, so hopefully I can have a new chapter cranked out by the weekend. Glad to hear you'll be eager to read it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Locketz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

blood , comedy, slayers, Angel made fun of and a road trip , can I just say this rocked!
pleas more sooner then later

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lilaclily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Really good story on the turning of Willioam into Spike I miss the romance of the begining but I know it takes time to get back to the future and a past builds the man he will be

This took me all of yesterday and today to read but it was time well spent please continue with this I would really like to see him get back to her and how it will all turn out

Lily

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. And have faith; the romance is coming back in Part III. In fact, I don't see the romance being gone from the fic, just altered. He still loves Elizabeth, after all, even when he's doing things she obviously wouldn't approve of. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Follow me Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

This is lonnnnnnnnggggggggggggg
But so worth reading this is my new favorite fic on the board a must read for anyone reading the reviews

Author's Response: And getting longer every day. ;) I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

He didn't expect to live and he didn't expect help and is surprised when he makes it thru so the next challenge would be seeking out a slayer and defying A. & D.
Solid writing and great telling of the Spike saga here I love reading your work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you think so highly of it. :)

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Hot chapter!
Come on Rome!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: TrenchCoatVixen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I loved this chapter. They way you incorporated the lines from the show; made it all your own. Your decription of that slayer was also very well done:

"He closed his eyes and tried to picture her. Little Italian girl—according to Darla she was no more than sixteen or seventeen. Long dark hair, peasant clothing, eyes like onyx. Lithe and smooth, her skin the color of light coffee. Quick as a viper and twice as dangerous."



Author's Response: As much as he would like to shed his William persona completely, Spike is ever the poet, isn't he? I'm glad you liked that. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

opps, I forgot to mention how I liked how you expanded that part of "Fool for Love", and also the others telling Spike his accent is North London. Hee. Also because this is from RL, that James Marsters picked up Spike's accent from Anthony Head, who has a North London accent.

Author's Response: I'm glad you appreciate that. I had a lot of fun writing those scenes, and playing with them to match my version of events. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I'd be in absolute shock too maybe Angelus now see's William has sort of a death wish and has no fear cause he has nothing to lose. In a way I hink he has no value on his non-life so death or death is no big thing to him at all where as Angelus is more of a survivor and enjoys his evil life.
I keep picturing Spike and Dru sort of as a evil Hansel and Gretal off to Rome to find their house made of candy and the slayer being the biggest treat of all. Spike is good for Dru in the fact he gives her a bit of a life ither then being A.'s whipping girl.
Great chapter and great turn of events for William.

Author's Response: I love the Hansel and Gretal anology. How very apt, especially in regards to Dru. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Darla is up to something and it is just not good cause either way I see
1. Andel killing Spike for taking Dru
or
2. Darla sends him off to his maybe -death in slayer chasing not really knowing all of what a fighting slayer means

I'm biting my nails till the nexy post of this I think

Author's Response: Glad to hear I'm keeping you on your toes. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Oooo! The Slayer! Yep seek her out go go go Slayer chasing! It all leads back to the woman you love~
Im excited to see what they do next!

Author's Response: You're entirely right. He's on the path to Buffy, now, although the journey will take over a hundred years. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: KitKat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Naughty naughty little William is such a bad boy!
More
More
More
More
!

Author's Response: He is a naughty boy. But that's all part of the loveable Spike package isn't it? I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Burns2Touch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

0I always saw Drusilla more as Williams friend then a real love/couple relationship as well. I really love reading this story because it always seems to go the way it should and never spins off halfway in the middle you always seem to stay right on track and true to keeping William himsel even in being turned into another soft of life form he is always honest with himself and sees thru other people ok I could go on and on but you get the jist of it in my saying this is a great story and I love reading it


;D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm flattered you think so highly of my story. :)

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