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Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

My Apple Jack and Forward to Time Past this is turning into a good morning. Ooooooh Spike took Drusilla with him and they just took off and now I'm wondering if Ang. and Darla will follow cause I kinda got the vibe Darla was setting Spike up for this trip just so she could go there and maybe Spike would get himself killed off.

Author's Response: You're exactly right. Darla wanted to get rid of Spike any way she could ... and if he gets himself staked by the slayer, I doubt she will care very much. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: y0un3v3rkn3wm3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

LOL LOL LOL LOL
LOved the shocked look on Angelus face! Best scene!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I really like the way you are evolving William into Spike. It's hard to make this convincing, since the change is usually attributed to the demon, not to decisions by William. You're doing a very convincing job of explaining this process. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Pin. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

wonderful, I love the way you portey Spike's history
looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm trying to post about once a week, so it shouldn't be too long until an update. I hope you enjoy it when it arrives.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Thank you for the update!!!

Great re-working of the mine scene. It was hilarious when they talked about Spike’s North London, amalgam of an accent.

So interesting that even though Buffy is not mentioned explicitly, she remains a glaring/blistering presence in the story. Wonder if Drusilla saw Buffy (blistering sunshine?) in his mind, not the Italian Slayer. I wonder if he will ever come to suspect at all that Elizabeth was a Slayer once he learns more about them and meets some of them.

Anyway—just wanted to say I’m really enjoying this story.


Author's Response: You're right. Even when he struggles to forget her, Buffy remains very much in Spike's thoughts and his motivations. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: anabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

grat update!!!!
this it is the birth of a true worriwr!, spike is not scared to him to deat, savors and enjoys the flavor the fight, it sees the death like a lightening, to perhaps meet with Elizabrth? He makes fun of of the fear of Angelus, makes fun of of a very sensible and masculine thing: so feared, mentioned and deceived the so large one of the penis, this is something very falico, to make ridicule of this between men, is as much as to violate, to humiliate and to offend at the same time, a very delicate subject between masculine prides!
I have observed that in this update, to make use of original dialogos of the Cannon, this brings another thing to my mind, in the fisical and of behavior descriptions of spike, always we used parametros pertaining to the actor who I interpret it (james (James Marsters) the til of the head, to bend an eyebrow even the outbursts of laughter, during a conference, Joss Wedon declare, that almost all ideocincaias of Spike was contributed by James, in my opinion he made a exelente work, but this does not give you a little freedom, to create differences? after all, your Spike, does not have to be the same one of James
continues working like thii, you write wonderful! i love your novel
p.d. and again, sorry by my english

Author's Response: Don't worry about your English. I know what you mean, and I really appreciate your sharing your thoughts with me. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

HELL YES, im so glad that spike/ williams becoming his own person and that hes decided to go after the slayer. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i just want to say that i understand that spike doesnt love dru in the way he loves elizabeth and im glad that he loves her as a friend. also im happy that dru went with him and i can wiat to read the interaction between him and the slayer. i really hope that things keep going well and that he continues to keep loving buffy. please update as soon as u can, i cnat wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Brilliant, as always =D Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

so happy to see that you've updated! please do it again soon? i can't wait to read more of spike's adventures. i'll give you a cookie, a big one, nice and tasty! think about it!

Author's Response: Mm ... cookies. :P I'm hoping to upate by the weekend. I hope you enjoy it when it comes. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Glad to see an update so soon. :-) I love how you've developed the relationship between Spike and Drusilla, and I'm looking forward to learning what will happen to them now that they've split from the group.

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

yah another chapter! I'm not surprised the others ran. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

The story is great, but when is Spike going to get back to Buffy?

Author's Response: As I said in the author's note at the beginning of Part II, Buffy won't reappear until Part III. We're about halfway through Part II now, so it shouldn't be a great deal longer. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Oh I love it


Author's Response: I'm glad you do. :)

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