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Reviewer: KitKat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

(It just means that I can’t fall in love with you)

This made my hear pitter pat for Spuffy just cause he will never love anyone again the way he loved her.
It is true you never forget your first love and nothing else is like it again.

Author's Response: I agree completely. First love is something very special. Doubly so, for William/Spike, because he is so naturally dogged in his affections, anyway. I'm glad you liked that -- and the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Fantastic as always I love this story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: LoVe Epics Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Eww Angelus always makes me sorta sick when he shows up on the scene I like knew he'd chase them but I'm hoping the gypseys catch him in rome and soul him up and he can suffer for a while and lay off on his victims.

Author's Response: Well, in the canon of the series, the gypsy tribe resouls him in Romania, not Rome, Italy. (Romania is in southeastern Europe, near the Ukraine). But in the canon of my story, you never can tell what might happen. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Drus dolls and her secrets I wonder if he secret is she sent for Angelus to find them. I like Dru but I would not put it past her because she's so crippled by Angelus she does not know any bettyer.
Great writing and great fight scenes.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Love this and how he is growing and becoming a new part of Spike each new page of your story it it great to see him grow as a demon-person lol.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I like that his fantasy is still being with Elizabeth and that they would maybe live there and that his mother too would be there and that they would live there and be happy together. You know he fastly assumed she was dead I mean there was no body and William didnt seem the type to give up on love so soon. I feel bad for Dru cause she knows she will never be to him what (the other woman was) but she still tries in her crazy ways to love him.


Author's Response: One of the reasons he was so quick to assume she was dead (other than the fact that the police could not find her when the horse came back riderless) was that he had been expecting something terrible to happen to her for weeks. It made him all the more willing to assume the worst. And he hasn't given up on love ... he will never stop loving her. But he also never thought himself worthy of such overwhelming loyalty and affection from any woman, let alone Buffy, who he adored. In a way, he always knew it would never last. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Ah Spike is beginning to see that Dru can kinda see into the future and read people really well. That might come in handy for him in dealing with Angelus or in finding himself another slayer to try and kill. This made my morning thanks for a great new chapter to read.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

After that, Rome lost much of its appeal. It ceased to be a battlefield and became, instead, a tormenting bed of fantasies and regret. Without the Slayer and without her, what did he have left? Nothing but Drusilla, and poor Dru seemed an inadequate substitute for glory and passion.

This is the best line because tight there you see how unhappy Will/Spike is with just how things are and like how the Slayer gave him a distraction from his unlife for a while. Best story by far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: ZzzHollowSleepszzZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Ugh... You can never get away from Angelus and Spike was having a good time too probably Darla tipped him off on theri location just for spite.

I hope he kicks Angels butt outta Rome!

Author's Response: lol. Yes, Angelus can be rather pesky, can't he? Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Insomniac Spike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I love it when Spike shows his honorable sides mixed with his bad boy side I just love coming across this story it always makes me smile I hope you continue with it this summer it is a great tale

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I will definitely continue to work on this story and, Muse willing, I'm hoping to continue to update every week or so. I hope you'll keep reading. :)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Great as always!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This was another wonderfully entertaining chapter. The deep melancholy Spike feels is beautifully conveyed, and then disposed of. The confronatations with the Italian slayer were sharply choreographed and very entertaining. Spike trading insults and quips in Italian painted a charming picture of the battles not described. The first meeting with the slayer set a code of honor that I hope follows through to Spike's other pursuits.

That first battle also gave Spike something to "live" for: " In the flush of the fight, he had found something to give meaning to his existence, and he didn’t want to surrender that meaning just yet." Nice job effectively shelving his pesky death wish.

Edith was a lovely detail, and Dru's explanation for the gag and blindfold rings true. I'm really enjoying the dynamic you've created between Spike and Dru in this story. It's more a sibling relationship, seeking comfort from one another. I'm looking forward to what's in store now that Angelus is back on the scene. I'm sure that he's going to be pretty miffed...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a wonderful, detailed review. I always love reading your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

and why the hell is the annoying one back??? they were doing fine without him! wonder where is Darla? Because I am sure it wasn't her idea to go after them. I guess I will have to be patient to find out!

Author's Response: You didn't expect Angelus to give up his "masterpiece" (Dru) without a fight, now did you? ;) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Great new page and finding out more and more about spike and how he thinks and acts and now Angel has tracked him down I feel a fight coming on or a soul.
I am dying for your next page

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you are; it means I'm doing my job as a writer. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to review. I always love reading your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: Popcorn Papoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Oh yes my favorite story ever more please!!!
Best story here!!!!!!

Author's Response: Your favorite ever? How incredibly flattering! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I think it is good Spike and Drusilla talk and she does know there is another woman and that he will never love her the way he loves another woman. I think it saddens Drusilla but she accepts it. It is a pity she is crying for Daddy but then I thought she would poor thing shes just so twisted by Angelus she falls apart.

Please continue soon.

Author's Response: I'm working on the next update now. I'm hoping it will be ready to post by Saturday. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

It's almost like this Slayer was enjoying her battles with Spike in his learning to fight harder and learn on his feet I was sad to see her get killed myself.
Spike seems to be caring for Dru like she was his sister and she on one level realizes he will never truly be hers cause his heart belongs to another. Hreat stuff this story is!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Awww Spike goes off to kill the demon for killing the slayer in a unfair fight. I know hes evil but I love him anyway for his code of honor. Lovin this as always!!!
:)

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you are. Thank you for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: y0un3v3rkn3wm3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I love how you give Spike respect and a gentilemans honor with rules towards fighting. Love to see more soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: buffy25122003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

loved it thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: bel_amour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

i loved it i cannot wait until you update, so please do so soon i love this story.


Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: SJR Duarg Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This reminds me of Pj's Playing on the Darkside in just how well it is written and such a firm understanding of Spike. I lived your romance between Elizabeth and William and how both of them loved one another against time. Lovely and dynamic story here I really want to see how it all comes together and if they ever get back together again.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me feedback. :)

Reviewer: Chocokats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Oh no Angel is back!!! Spike kick his ass!!!
Please more this is too good!!!

Author's Response: More soon, I think. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Missy X. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Such a beautiful story with romance and longing and then the new twist with him becoming Spike I love this story it made my afternoon
I would really love to read more and see these twon get back together


Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: saradane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I am sooooooooooooooo glad you came back to Spuffy. You left 2 stories unfinished and honestly I'm amazed at how well I've remembered them. You are an amazing story teller. I would love to know more about you. Don't forget falling.

Author's Response: I haven't forgotten "Falling," but I have put it on the back burner for now so that I can focus on this story. "Forward to Time Past" has such an expansive plot, it's hard to give it the attention it deserves if I'm also working on another story. As soon as this fic is finished, though, I fully plan to go back and finish "Falling" (probably give it a bit of an overhaul, too.) I'm glad to hear you like both stories. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

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