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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2013 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I get every reaction Buffy had here. As much as I can anyway. To me none of it rang false, and that made the entire chapter work so well.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I LOVE this fic!!!
I found it first on an awards site, or archive, and wanted to check for more on your website, not knowing how old the fic was, etc....but the link to your Tripod, I think it was, site was no good, and I was devastated, not to be able to read more of this fantastically well-written period fic!!! That is, until you began posting it on the well-known archives, such as here.
Your grasp of Victoriana is great.
At first I thought you were going to make Angel into Buffy's "confessor" (which is so tongue in cheek for him!) role, which Spike had been on the show S6 post-resurrection. I'm taking it the "The Gift" won't happen at all, and her time in 1880 replaces her time in "heaven" (well, her time w/Wm. WAS a stress-free/calling-free/responsibility-free heaven and haven to this Buffy). But after re-reading this chapter, I realize that Angel was just being his mean self in the possessive smirk he gives Spike in his typically high-schoolish manner. That Bastard! For a moment, I thought he was gonna be decent and let her honestly spill her guts to him about her 1880 experience, as she did to Spike on the show/S6, and that Angel would actually make amends and actually help her and Spike/William back get back together now in the current century.
In addition, Angel, even tho' she's washed, etc, should have been able to smell the smells of London c. 19th c., and probably Will, too; as well as have been able to smell the injury on his childe. He could have gone to him with blood to help him, but is that like Angel? I think NOT. Nor is actually HEARING WHAT Buffy is telling him when she says it was terrible. HOW long has he known her now? And he is still this dense, or using selective hearing, and even more selective compassion?
I'm off to read more chapt's....
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic. Thank you! I have absolutely no talent for web design, which is why I eventually gave up on the website. But I'm now archiving over at Live Journal, Bloodshedverse, and, of course, here. All these sites are updated at the same time, so you can always catch the newest chapters on any one of them. I absolutely adore the Victorian age, and I did a lot of research while writing the first part of the fic, so I'm glad you think I did well. Thanks so much for letting me know. :-D

Reviewer: Celia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

please finish really soon it seems to be ending they both know about each other and are now in the same time so get them together but don't try doing it to quickly and the story ends suckingly, also, just intuition, that Angel isn't going to be happy about Buffy and Spike can you write that realistically and not make Angel the ultimate psychotic sadistic bastard like a lot of others do about him, make it in his character. I also think it would be cool if Buffy was pregnant and it would make sense, in 1880 they did have sex, unprotected.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Okay. I definitely need your address so I can come and haunt you until I read the next chapter. This was wonderful, as have all your chapters been. Sad and bittersweet, and painful, and the realisation of Willow's need for control must kill at least Dawn and Spike, if not Buffy, once she realises too. I can't wait for the next chapter.

CT.

Author's Response: I'm having laptop issues, which is why the new chapter is a bit delayed. But hopefully, it won't be too much longer. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

another great chapter. I'm just glad that Spike didn't hear the "It was terrible" line.. he has enough to deal with! lol


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so. :-)

Reviewer: Becca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Your comment to one reveiwer really made me think... how Buffy views the vamipre as completely separate from their human side. I understand how Buffy would separate Angel and Angelus in her mind - she wouldn't want to admit that Angel actually could have been responsible for those horrible things Angelus did. But you are right - if she admit that, then she would also be admiting that her William was a killer. How could she get past that? Wow - I have to compliment you on how multilayered your storyline is here. Kudos, and keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I'm a few days late in seeing you posted more but it was wonderful

Please more!

Author's Response: I'm working on it, but laptop issues are slowing me down just a tad. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: belledaynight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

this is so amazing! ack! I wish you had the story completed up here. it was perfect how you blended the past to the present...just absolutely amazing. so much depth to spike and buffy's characters. just...wow

Author's Response: Thank you! How incredibly nice of you to say. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2007 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Every little step just makes this better and better. The idea that Buffy has decided that Spike is not William, the same way she has decided that Angel is not Angelus. Hopefully she'll learn. And Spike struggling to get to her to only find Angel being a right ass and staking his claim. Not to mention Spikes rant about Willow messing up his life, how very true that is. I can only imagine what happens next. And I can't wait for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I continue to entertain you in the future. :-)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Brilliant and brilliant and brilliant and ((((punches Angel in the head)))) and I can't say enough things about this story ((((kicks Angel in the shin)))) best story in the Realm ((((shoves Angel back to L.A.))))

Alright sorry I had to get a few licks in just for Spikes honor once more you outdo yourself and keep me guessing and crying on a small Sunnydale pillow wanting more.

Author's Response: Ouch! You're really laying into Angel, lol. Of course, after the little smile he gave Spike, I can't say I blame you. It's great to know you're still enjoying the story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :-)

Reviewer: TheC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

A quiver of a smile... ? That does fit to Angelus. I would LOVE to see him appear DO update quick!

Author's Response: Update is coming very soon. I promise. :-)

Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

No! I get to the end here and just cry out No! No! No! Don't end there I need to see what happens!!

More please its killing me!

Author's Response: More soon. I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Angel really is a wrench in the works alright but maybe if Buffy sees Spike she will stand up for him and send Angel home. I don't get the impression she wants him there shes just like whatever. Spike is falling apart and in a weakened state but still has to go to make sure she is ok because he considers her his even with all that has happened to him and to her. I desperately want Buffy to notice him or his injuries and have some reaction to him even if he is not the William she just lost. Come on Buffy choose comforting Spike over this things with Angel for once just see him and not a monster.

Author's Response: You're right in that Buffy probably wouldn't have called Angel herself. But now that he's there (and behaving in a far more positive and understanding way than the Scoobies) I don't think she's sorry he came. He is, after all, a convenient shoulder to cry on. Thanks so much for your review! :-)

Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I like how Buffy isn't fooled by anyone she is just calling it like it is with Willow and then seeing thru Angel. This whole experience has made her stronger and clearer and I'm hoping that extends toward Spike.
Lovely as always and thought provoking I love finding a new chap. on this it gives me such a delight.

More when you have a chance and have a great weekend.

Author's Response: It's great to know you're enjoying it that well. I'm having a wonderful time writing this fic, and I hope you continue to have a good time reading it. Thank you so much for your review. :-)

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I couldn't love this story anymore if I even tried. It is just brilliantlydone.
Spike get your girl!

Author's Response: That's great to know. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Spike is so tore up Buffy better do something cause Angel plus Spike always equals bad. Spike being jealous was cool though Im really waiting on the next page of this.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Looking forward to all hell breaking loose!!!!
More please more more more!!!!!

Author's Response: More soon, I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Brilliant update. I can't wait to read more!!!*

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Angel is always there to twist the dagger in my vamp boys unbeating heart.
Really a deep down juicy chapter though I just did not want it to end please more when you have a chance I love seeing what they do next.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Man og man Spikes taken a lot of hits lately please dont let Angel be another one I was cheering as Spike was angry and jealous and heading to her house.please God don't let him walk away please let something happen

I'm pulling for Spike!

Author's Response: Spike is really taking it on the chin, isn't he? Luckily, he's a survivor ... a very hurt, confused, and battered one. But he is a survivor. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Awkwardness is right I wonder how much of what went on Buffy will tell anybody I kinda want her to confide in Dawnie just because she's so put off by her friends right now and Dawn would be the most understanding. Willow and Tara need to move out and Buffy needs to take back her life and her Vampire hee hee!

Just love reading this and have to ask for seconds and thirds!

Author's Response: Seconds coming very soon, I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: limpfish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I'm so glad Buffy told Angel she was the gitl he attacked in the past. I think it's great shes not looking at him with blinfers on and I have hope for Spike. I want Buffy to see him and see he is hurt I wanna see her react to pull her out of this gloom.

This so made my weekend love your writing :D

Author's Response: It's absolutely great to know that you do. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Oh how mean you cannot just end there lol I an hanging by a thread waiting for buffy to turn around.

More please and fast!

Author's Response: lol. I am mean, aren't I? But I'm working on an update now. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

"Spike’s expression was one of such raw emotion that it left his grandsire in absolutely no doubt of what he was feeling.

His arms tightened around Buffy’s shoulders possessively, and as he continued to stare at the younger vampire, his lips quivered in what might have been the shadow of a smile."

Ok I wanna punch Angel but I see where he is necessary in order for Buffy and Spike to move forward but I still wanna punch him just for being there.
I was so excited and dare I say giddy to see a new page of this and now I'm wanting so much more!




Author's Response: lol. Judging from my other reviews, I think everyone is wanting to punch Angel right now. I can't say I blame you guys. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: LoVe Epics Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

No no no no no don't end it there please!!!
I need more!

Author's Response: More is coming soon, I promise. Thanks for the review. :-D

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