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Date: 03/26/2013 - 06:53 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Huh, ok I didn't see that coming.

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Date: 09/02/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

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Reviewer: Fiona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I LOVE this story... the amount of nights ive gone to bed late after getting engrossed by it!!! Please, please, please update lots soon.

Author's Response: I'm so flattered the plot has gripped you that completely. Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me so. I hope you continue to enjoy my writing. :-D

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2007 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

More soon please! I worry about stupid Buffy and the even more moronic Scoobies trying to interfere.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. :-D

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

wow! that has to be the BEST fanfic i have read in a loooong time! to twist s6 like that is genius! when i got to chapter 47 i wanted to kill the screen cous i have to wait for the next chapter! ahhh! i have no patientence where this story is concerned! must read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is so sweet of you to say. It's great to know that you're enjoying my story so much. I'm hoping to finish chapter 48 very soon, and I hope you like it once it is posted. ;)

Reviewer: computerbunny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Wow!!! I love this story. You have done such a good job of weaving cannon into it. Keep it up

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-D

Reviewer: ochit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Buffy is so horny for William that she is willing to pretend it's him she is sucking instead of Spike! This is so unexpected. She acted so high and mighty in the beginning then ended up jacking Spike against his will just like she did with William. Poor Spike! He wont get over this if Buffy rejects him once again after using him!

Author's Response: What you say is very true, but Buffy isn't intentionally being unfeeling. She's just become so caught up in her own pain that she can't see Spike's. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: October Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

ok so I've rad this entire thing in the last 2 days... ok that might be a small little lie I skipped a few chapters in part 2... I couldn't help myself I wanted to get to the future. I love the story. during the first part I missed spike, good ole rugid spike, during the second part I missed buffy, now I'm just good and happy. lol. What does bother me though is that Angel went straight to 'pregnant' I mean hearing that the loveo f his life and he childe did the dirty hundreds of years ago before he knew her... i wouldn't think he would go straight to pregnant... but i love the story. and it would be kind of ironic if William's innocent virginal seed did gt her pregnant... then there is spike... every mans worse fear.... have sex with a girl almost two hundred years ago and you get that call of shame... lol. I'm loving it. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Well, Angel was using the "PPD and pregnancy test" line not to suggest that Buffy actually has TB or is pregnant (although both are definite possibilities). But the last thing Angel heard from Spike was that he (Spike, William) had slept with Buffy. Angel's pregnancy test remark had more to do with jealousy and a desire to "out" Buffy's relationship with William than any certainty that she is actually pregnant.

Reviewer: Vinity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Catching back up on this lovely story :D I had gotten quite behind cause I was waiting for part 3. I did read part 2, altho I don't usually do those stories, I did think this was handled very well, I do confess to waiting till I could read it thru in one swoop and get back to present time.

Anyway, very lovely, as always. I feel for both of them.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did decide to read Part II, although I understand why it might have been a bit difficult to handle. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

This story makes me loose my breath!! Its just so amazing. Love the strong feelings between the two here - hope Buffy comes to her senses soon and realizes that Spike and William can be the same. Kind of detest the Scoobies here - but since thats what you intended ; )

Author's Response: lol. Yeah, the Scoobies aren't on their best behavior here, are they? But I'm glad you're enjoying the story anyway. Thanks for reviewing. :-D

Reviewer: Amelia H. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I started on this last week and just got to this page today. Heavy stuff and such a hearbreaking but beautiful story it's like reading a rollercoaster ride I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I greatly appreciate your taking the time to review it. :-D

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I'm on begging kness here myself wanting to read more.
I think it is good Giles and the gang are seeing Buffy as being more back in time then another world finally.
She keeps running away from her problems and ironically running right to Spike.

Author's Response: He does seem to have an irresistible draw for her, doesn't it? Thanks so much for the review! :)

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

That was just evil! A cliffhanger of all chiffhangers to leave off on well.......that lol but still I can't wait to see if they go further or what they do!

More soon please!!

Author's Response: I'll be adding more just as soon as I can. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. :-D

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

That is not what I was expecting. This story has a very sad tone to it. I enjoy reading it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story in spite of all the angst. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :-D

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I love this it just gets better and better everytime I read it please more when you can.

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Author's Response: That's so nice to know. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Wow, wow, and wow.
I didn´t see that coming. I really thought she was going to go to him to pick up a fight...
I read this chapter several times and I don´t get tired of it. It´s very hot, but it´s sad to think it might be like 6 season all over again. I really hope this goes a little bit different this time around . Don´t let her be to mean to him afterward please, please, please. As usual. Love this story.

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Author's Response: Well, don't worry. This won't be *exactly* like season six ... or even mostly like it. There will definitely be some similarities (already are, actually), but the nature of Spike and Buffy's relationship will be totally different. Thanks so much for reviewing. :-D

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Awkward beginning and smoking hot ending here I think I need a personal Spike moment here myself. I laughed with the PPD thing and Willow taking a few days before saying anything to Xander or Giles. I am glad Angel is gone off again cause I just like Buffy and Spike alone again and I am still not ruling out a spuffy baby yet!


Author's Response: No, you can't rule out anything at this point. lol. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Well Buffy that is a good way to stun a man speachless I'll say that much lmao. I am starting to feel bad for the Scoobies , cause in their own clueless way they are trying to help. Granted shes so confused right now she can't see it.
This was a great chapter I love to see what you have in store next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad to know that you're looking forward to more. I'm working very hard to deliver a new chapter soon, and I hope you enjoy it when it comes. :-D

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Oh yes you are back an back with a spark. I loved everything in this from start to finish. Please write more soon I need another fix.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: ochit_duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Oh my! I couldnt think at all also after that!!!! What a cliffhanger!!! You must update soon!

Author's Response: As soon as I possibly can, I promise. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Giles seems to be aware more happened with Buffy then they all thought. Great humor mixed with conversation with the gang and I always love Anya. I think they would get more out of Buffy if they would stop crowding her so much.
I want this sex scene to be good for them but I do no t know where it will lead but I cant really wait till you put up more. Thanks for a great reading.


Author's Response: Anya is so much fun to write, although it's a little frightening to me how easily I can slip into her voice, lol. It's wonderful to know that you're still enjoying the story and are looking forward to more. As always, thank you for taking the time to let me know. :-D

Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Wow wow wow things are heating up I just hope they both dont hurt each other in the process. I noticed she stripped away his outter Spike layers so he was only was wearing his William shell. I really want to see Spike make her see its not pretend.

Author's Response: Squee! I'm so happy you caught that metaphor! Her stripping away Spike's defenses (in the form of his coat) was probably one of my favorite things I have written, so it's nice to know that readers are picking up on it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review and let me know. :-D

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

This desperately sad Buffy breaks my heart. Her declaration that she just wants to pretend does not bode well for her believing Spike's assertions that he and William are one and the same. Her aggressive seduction is going to pull Spike in even further, but she's still emotionally aloof. I wonder how you're going to believably bring them together emotionally. I'm looking forward to finding out.

Thank you for updating this wonderful story. It's always a pleasure to read more.

Author's Response: It's great to know that you're sympathizing with Buffy. I was a little worried that some readers might be angry with her for her "pretending," but so far everyone seems to understand her motivation. Like you said, she's sad and desperate, and that is keeping her from thinking clearly about the possible consequences of her actions. As always, your review was a pleasure to read. Thank you for taking the time to leave it. :-D

Reviewer: nae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Oh my gosh! So good! I'm so happy for the update. I've been checking a lot. This chapter was absolutely fantastic. The emotions are so powerful. I can hardly wait for more.

Author's Response: That's wonderful to know. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Nooooooooooo don't end it there it was just making my computer screen fog up with its hotness. Is it Tuesday yet? I need more!

Author's Response: lol. Wow, fog up? I didn't realize it was that intense. That's awesome. Well, I'm writing now, so hopefully it won't be too long until I can update. Thanks for the review. :-D

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