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Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Such intensity this has with the Spike/Bully/William/Elizabeth dynamic in a good vs evil romance that questions Buffys calling and challenges all of her preconceived ideas on vampire history and folklore. I've been following this story for a while now and it is written with such finesse and heart.

Author's Response: Thank you! You're always so kind to review each chapter, and I just want to let you know that I really appreciate your taking the time to do so. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :-D

Reviewer: MJMILLER12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Really a phenomenal story and I will be looking for it from now on. I would reccomend this to eveyone as a standard in fanfiction.


Author's Response: How nice of you to say! Truly, I am very flattered that you feel that way about something I wrote. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review. :-D

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Poor Spike and poor Buffy they both bring out each others insecuritites I am cheering that there love will transend death and that they can find the way back to each other. Finding this made my day this morning it is so very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I always enjoy reading your thoughts, and I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. :-D

Reviewer: dinker1inAZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

This took me a couple of hours to ewas but it was really worth it . It kinda reminds me of a minseries of the Sunnydale variety
Very cool and love labor intense

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :-D

Reviewer: Sunshine Blind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 06:24 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

THE HOTTEST FIC AROUND!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. :-D

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

This was a interesting love scene in the fact that she makes him just as unsure of her as he was all those years back when he was just William. She makes him quiver and gasp and melt under her touch. Even when she gets up and runs off his reaction and trying to figure out what went wrong is just like he was as William. I got the feeling her intense stares at him after the act was her looking for some sign of her William still inside the shell she perceives Spike to be.
--- He had that same look in his eyes now—that very same look. William’s eyes in the shadows of a sleeping rose-tree: desperate and hungry, pleading with her. Hardly hopeful. How was it that Spike could so perfectly mimic that expression? Was he doing it on purpose? It didn’t feel like an act, but she couldn’t understand how something so wicked could look so beautiful, so soft. For a moment, she could almost believe---

It was like for a second she could see him and want to believe he was still there inside of him. There is a lot of grey areas to their relationship cause you see it all from both sides.It broke my heart to read the Tara and Giles parts and how much she wants to go back to save her love. I am really enjoying this story with all of its stuggles and strife and can't wait till you post some more.

Author's Response: You picked up on every single emotion I was trying to convey, which is just wonderful for a writer to know. It makes me feel as if I've done a good job. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Ok maybe not so great of a thing to hear is that the 100 years he was doing horrible things he was thinking of her but I think he meant it if a different way and maybe she misunderstood it and ran.

::::: But his reaction to her touch was the same erratic squirm—the same hoarse groan—it had always been. She raised her head to watch him, and for a moment, she thought she might cry.::::::

This was my favorite part.


Author's Response: I think you're right - he didn't intend for it to sound the way she interpreted it. The part that you mentioned as your favorite ... well, of everything I wrote in that chapter, that was my favorite as well. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: BluePiano Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

This is very pretty I would love to read more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you. I should have a new chapter finished shortly; I hope you enjoy it when it comes. :-D

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

May be it is time for Spike to be a little hurt and angry for Buffy does not see how she lead a part in his demide in becoming Spike I mean is it fair of her to reget him in the being he now is from the man she played a part in, in his becoing? My friend and I have been following this story and were discussing it and debating angles on it oday over lunch and it made for such a fun topic.
In his way Willaim dd transcend death to be with her and may be somewhere down the road she will see that his love for her never faded.
I am sure you get tons of compliments but this is the best work of the realm.

Author's Response: The best work on the realm? What a wonderful and flattering thing to read. Thank you! I hope I can continue to live up to your expectations in the future.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Her struggle is almost tangible; her desperation and subsequent rage is at last out in the open. I hate myself, I hate this, I want to go back, to then, to anonimity, to caring: to love. A spell and a fateful coincidence gave Buffy everything she missed in her modern-day existence. The feel of him now, so like then. The look in his eyes, his response and even now, his clumsiness at expression that shatters the pretense:
"All the things I did."
but in her dream she remembers him once saying:
"love can transcend death."

A chapter of intensity: the intimacy of lovers, the cold slap of reality, the cold words of Giles, now privy to her secret. But for all this, the situation is beginning to open up. There can be no more misunderstanding or denials; from now on, things will have to happen, either good or bad. She may sleep and dream but when she opens her eyes ....... well, she's really going to have to finally see .......

Fantastic.

Author's Response: I just love your reviews. You put so much thought into them and into telling me what you liked about each specific chapter. Thank you so much for taking the time to do this. :-D

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Yeahz! Giles is back I think this was great and I look forward to the next page in this every new page gets better and better.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm flattered that you think that. :-D

Reviewer: LoVe Epics Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

I loved this chapter everything about it was just perfect!
Please add more when you can it is by far the best Spuffy story I have ever read.

Author's Response: The best you've read? I couldn't ask for a better compliment. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

This was perfect I was so excited to find a new page tonight and you never disappoint.

Spike go find your girl!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :-D

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

I am so sick tonight and fighting the flu and thic fic may just cure me it is that good.
More please it's great!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear that you have the flu, but I'm glad that the story helped take your mind off it for a little while. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Feel better soon. ;-)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Buffy making love to William in her mind even as she's lulling Spike into believing she sees him made my heart hurt for the both of them. When she came back to herself, really seeing Spike, you can feel her emotional retreat.

The confrontation with Tara and then Giles was also heart breaking. Buffy's so filled with pain she's not being rational. I loved this: “Your problems will still be here tomorrow morning, Buffy. You have a destiny as surely as Spike—as surely as the rest of us. You can’t escape that just because you feel it is an unfair one." Giles is right, but what will it take for Buffy to realize it?

The dream was certainly a step in the right direction. William's bloody knuckles and his final line show a melding of William and Spike in Buffy's subconscious. I'm looking forward to how this affects her waking life.

Thank you for another sharp, emotional chapter here.


Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your reviews are always such a pleasure to read, because you really delve into what spoke to you in each chapter. I hope I can continue to stir your emotions in the future. :-D

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Loved it!! As I always do! Please, update again ASAP.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll update just as soon as I can. :-D

Reviewer: Aidan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Oh wow. Here i was thinking that I was terribly out of the loop. I just had a baby and havent had much time to read anything. Im glad that you updated. this is a beautiful story that just keep getting better. Love can transcend death.. beautiful words that im sure fit perfectly with what she saw in spikes eyes. Aww.

I wouldnt mind another update soon to keep me company at home all alone. lol. :)

Author's Response: Congratulations on your new baby! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you continue to do so in the future. As a new mom, I'm sure your life has gotten hectic, so I'm doubly appreciative that you have taken the time to review this chapter. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: SnowyOwl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Ahhhh that is the pefect way to phrase it love transcends death that is the perfect scenario.


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :-D

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Oh God Giles found Buffy's picture of Spike on her pillow in her room! Id be mad too. The Scoobies moving into her house then Willowing spending her mothers money, Giles thinking he can invade her personal space and Willow doing a spell to throw her in another place? Gee I don' know why she won't talk to you all and want to go back to a place where she felt she could just be and have someone else look after her. I read this and thought these restrictions Giles talks about on women in that time era would they be so bad for Buffy. It be the first time in years she was not responsible for the world and her friends safety and someone would look after and care for her. Imagine the culture shock for her to have someone like William put her each and every happiness and need above everything else. Yeah Giles and Tara she is such a selfish person to want to throw aside being a hero and a selfish lil fool. Ok my rant aside I LOVED the Spike parts and the ending of this made me tear up please continue to write this it is just too epic!

Author's Response: I'm so glad the last section of the chapter resonated with you. It was actually a cut scene from Chapter Sixteen. That chapter ran long, so I removed it and always felt bad that I did. When I was thinking of an appropriate memory to end the chapter with, I went back and reread it and it just seemed perfect. Thank you so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Giles is showing all the signs of the disappointed father figure. With the show I sometimes hated the fact he never went the extra mile in trying to understand her relationship with Spike instead he just wrote him off as evil and nothing else. You played Tara really well as the understanding and caring person that she was and with Tara Buffy was able to break down a little bit before Giles came in with his "Your a Slayer get over it authority" and I really liked the flashback part it makes me believe more and more that Buffy and Spike and William and Elizabeth have their own Powers that Be destiny and a reason for their connection. Maybe in the big picture Giles and the hang are going to have to face the idea that maybe Spike is Buffy's future.

Author's Response: I always liked Tara as a character, because she was rarely judgmental, and I think if Buffy were going to break down in front of anyone, it would probably be her. I'm glad you think I did her justice in this chapter. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

I loved the fact he grabbed here and didnt want to let her go and kissed her and kept tellig her he loved her. He does cherish her and they both want what they had I am a fool for love stories and I want then to get it.

:D

Author's Response: I'm a fool for love stories too, so I'm very happy that you're enjoying the one I'm writing. As always, I really appreciate your taking the time to leave a review. Thank you!

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

I love this it is my fav. fic it is beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are so nice to say that. :)

Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Even in death all he could think of was her and his love for her she has to see that! Come on Buffy let yourself give him a chance even a small one and see who he has become. Not the Spike you knew but the mix of both men and see if you dont find love. Please more it is so good I hate to see the chap. end. :)

Author's Response: Don't worry - she can't deny the truth forever. And we all know that as much as he's hurting, Spike is also stubborn enough to wait until she is ready. Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

The more I read this the more I think Buffy is his destiny and it was suppose to happen her going back in time to love him. Even her time with him in these flashbacks we now see and all the story of this we have read it's like William and Elizabeth/Buffy are connected and that their time together always has a sort of foreshadowing to it for future events. Even if I did not follow the BtvS universe or never save the show this story alone makes you fall in love with their storyline.
Giles is in sort of the dark only going with the facts he knows on Spike being a killer. I think it would go along way for Buffy if she would open up a little with Giles. I see she is angry with the world. Angry with her friends for what happened and then angry with her friends for taking a happiness she never thought she could have away. I see why she just brushes things off because she's mad at all she has lost. I mean she runs home and begs Tara to be returned and you cannot blame her cause in the past she found true happiness and a romance and a normal life.
Beautiful story telling here.

Author's Response: Oh, I am so glad that you said that about Buffy's character. I was hoping that my readers would feel that way when they read the chapter. Thank you for letting me know that you do. :)

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

This has to be the best fic I've ever read. I cant get enough of it, it's so perfect!
I really hope that Buffy recognises what her own subconcious is telling her- that love really can transcend death. I feel so sorry for her. I sort of understand where she's coming from- I guess it's almost like she's afraid that she's betraying William by being with Spike. She just needs to connect them both.
Cant wait for another part; it's a stunning piece of work.

Author's Response: To call it a "stunning piece of work" and "the best fic you've ever read" is just so incredibly flattering for me. Thank you very much for making my day better with your kind review. :)

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