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Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Thanks for the update. This story is so heartbreaking.
It is difficult to read but I won't stop reading because I hope there will be somewhat of a happy ending. Please update son.

Author's Response: I know there's a lot of angst lately, but just trust me. I promise ... well, I don't want to give anything away. But just trust me. And thanks for being willing to see it through - and for the review. :D

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

God, what a mess! Pain, pain and more pain. Poor Buffy. Poor Spike.

Author's Response: Just trust me. ;-)

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

You're forgiven, because it was worth the (VERY) long wait!
Lovely part. I'm sort of hoping that Tara agrees to send her back to be honest. I keep thinking about poor lonely William... :(
Or that she'd at least just see Spike for who he really is. I have a feeling that all of this is leading up to something pretty big. A revelation, or possibly an even bigger arguement...
Cant wait for more already! Dont leave it too long this time; I think I'm a bit obsessed with this fic!
Oh, and out of interest, have you written any other fics, and if so- where would I read them? I just love your writing style.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it that much. FtTP is the only fic I'm working on at the moment, but once it's finished, I'm sure I'll be writing another one. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Oh this is the best morning surprise ice and snow and cocoa and a warm great fic to read. I'm reading this and thinking that Spike can read pregnancy on everyday normal woman but what if a slayer and pregnancy gives off completely different signs? Spike has come into contact with a lot of Slayers in his time but when has he ever run into a possibly pregnant one to compare her with a non-pregnant one? I mean it could gives off completely different things that maybe vampire senses would read differently and to be honest in the short spans of time these two have come together it's been volatile either in arguing or pain or then in need so quite possibly Spike wasn't picking up on anything being out of the normal because he was so focused on other things.

This was the most poignant part:
“William wasn’t anything like Spike. You know that he couldn’t be like Spike. Vampires are just demons who take over a body when the soul is gone. They don’t have anything to do with the people that were there before.”

There was a pause. Almost infinitesimal, but it made the hackles on Buffy’s neck rise. Her eyes slid around to the windshield again, and she barely heard Giles’ voice as he said, very softly, “You’re right, Buffy. They don’t.”

Because if you are a Watcher or a Slayer and killing vampires is what you have to do you cannot look at them as being anything other then full on evil because if you let yourself see they have any part of their own humanity left in them it would make yourself really question who you are and what you are doing and your calling. In this perspective Buffy's theory about she herself being a killer is then dead on.

I really love these exchanges between Dawn and Spike because she gives him all the information we want him to get. She feeds his need to know and gives him time to process whats going on with Buffy. He now knows she did love him enough to run home and want to get back in their time to save him from being turned.

I want to write more but I have to get up and moving but I love this new chapter and it was so worth waiting for.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely, long review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm not going to address your comments specifically, because I'm afraid I might accidentally give something away, lol. But I really do appreciate the comments. :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

OH so Spike says she is not pregnant, It would be interesting if she was.

Author's Response: I'm not disagreeing with you there. It would be. ;)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Good angle of Dawn inadvertently keeping Spike informed of just what is happening at Revello and with Giles and the Scoobies ..... and Buffy. Insights into the girl's emotions whilst away from him, how she is coping - or not - what she is NOT managing to file away .......

The web is tangled and not getting unravelled anytime soon. Which means that Buffy is still holding on to her past, their past; their connection, now.

Well, good. Actually, it's great. Fantastic. More, more more, please! This is a wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just posted the new chapter and I hope you enjoy it. :D

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Thank you, thank you and thank you! I love it when you update this lovely, wonderful, perfect story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

No TB... No Baby.

And like Buffy tired of "the group" putting Spike/William down..

And especially tired of Giles. William taking advantage of Buffy..hmm

Enjoying.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are. Thank you. :D

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Despite how my heart breaks a little every time Spike is hurt by people he genuinly cares about, this was definitely a Sunday-morning treat, and I loved it!!! Hope to see more soon,

XXX

Author's Response: I've just posted a new chapter. I hope you enjoy it and thank you very much for taking the time to review this one. :D

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Loved it, but I wish she would have been pregnant. I can't wait to read more so please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Poor Spike. So many dreams and doubts. Tis truly a wonder how he keeps from smacking some of those poeple around, chip be damned. And Dawn is so often the one to bring reality crashing on down. What happens now that everyone knows, and they both know that everyone knows. Seems a bit like a whole new game. Amazing story, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always enjoy reading your thoughts. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

AWW I FEEL BAD FOR SPIKE, NO ONE TRUSTS HIM, although given his past he does have a point to question if he deserves it. i LOVE this story and am SOOOO happy that u updated. im kinda sad that buffys not pregnant but by how everyone reacted to the idea, its better that she isnt. i really wish that buffy would realize that vampires hold their human traits after theyre turned and that spike still had william in him. also i hope that she gives in to loving spike soon and that things work out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 05:14 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

I hope Spike is wrong on this one. The thing about Buffy being not pregnant. I mean Dawn has a point that if he was around pregnant women he would know. But by the hatred that he displayed at the end, we know he didn't ever kill a pregnant woman. So how would he know about the senses being different. Plus, wasn't Buffy like...JUST brought back...she'd be like 2 weeks pregnant-- since i remember she made love to William like a few days before she disappeared (correct me if I'm wrong). And looking at wikipedia (hehe) it says that fetus develops around 8 weeks and thats when the heart beats. So...are we still open to the fact that she could be pregnant still? Hope so!! I'll let you deal with my wonderment.
And please tell me we'll have Spuffiness soon...waited around 20 chapters for it. Or can u give a ballpark of how many more chapters there are left?


Author's Response: To tell you the truth, I'm not really certain how many chapters are left in the story. I'm sorry you're growing impatient for the spuffyness; I know it's been a long wait. But I hope you'll keep reading. Thanks so much for the review. :D

Reviewer: aj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Yay! you've updated!

Author's Response: And I hope you enjoyed it. Thank you!. :D

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