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Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

You are one hell of a story teller. I honestly never have any idea what to expect next and I love every minute of this wild ride that you have put us on. Please update soon!

Author's Response: You are so sweet! Thank you! I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to your review; I was so caught up in writing I let myself get behind again. But I hope the new chapter will help you to forgive me. :-D

Reviewer: You_gotta_love_bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

This is gonna break up everyone I see huge reprecussions coming for this man....

Author's Response: My lips are sealed. Thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Buffy is gonna have to choose a side she is gonna have to make a choice either to be a council puppet and a pupet pulled by her friends strings or to choose to snow all about William and his becoming of Spike and accept him anyways

Author's Response: You're completely right. Buffy *will* have to pick a side, and if she is going to pick Spike's, then she will have to come to terms with the things he has done over the years. That will be incredibly hard for her to do -- it won't happen overnight -- but I have faith in her. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Holy cow Giles is playing dirty and Buffy is gonna lose it with seeing all his kills were of woman like her and she will mistake what he did not that what he did was right but he killed those women for not being her but that is so so so not gonna go over well

Author's Response: Well, Giles thinks he knows what is best for Buffy and he is willing to resort to any means to protect her. The problem is that he is trying to protect her from all the wrong things. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

I think Buffy and Spikes relationship just exploded!

Ah the pain! hurts so good

Author's Response: lol. Could be. ;-) But don't explode yet - you've got to find out for sure. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

GOD! I AM FREAKED OUT AND LOVING IT!!!!!


Author's Response: lol. I'm glad. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

OK I'm hyperventilating over what all of this is gonna mean!!!

::Faints::

Author's Response: Eep. Should I get smelling salts or just say thanks for the review? :-D

Reviewer: Burns2Touch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Giles you evil and yet loyal to Buffy figure. It is true and it is fact and I have no idea how Spike can redeem himself in Buffys eyes after this.

Author's Response: Exactly! Giles' actions are wrong, but his intentions are good and he does love Buffy. As for her relationship with Spike, my lips are sealed. Thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

And yes I understand but Oh God!

Author's Response: Just breathe, mselfie. Breathe. The darkest hour is just before Dawn. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Oh god... I hate Giles. Could you please kill him? Shove him off a building? Or plain bleed him dry? Ok... I'm a little violent right now... but I hate his way. He's manipulating Buffy so much into doing what he wants. And Willow?? Not better, always talk behind Buffys back about her. I would kick her out off my house.
So... but now... before I talk more about these persons... it was a wonderful update. Its nice to know Williams point of view of meeting Buffy. And its nice that he wants to support her. But one question... where is his money? He had a lot when he became a vampire... did he lost it all?
Sadly I wont read your story for the next three weeks because I will not have internet. But right after I come home I will look for a new update :)
Great job so far with telling us your story.

Author's Response: ROFL - I know Giles is being a jerk, but murder isn't really in the cards at the moment. As for Willow ... I agree. If I was in Buffy's situation, her arse would be out of my house. We'll just have to see how things go. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Sometimes I like Giles, but this is definitely not one of the times I do. I really don't like him right now. What a ridiculous proposition. I hope she doesn't agree to it cuz she'll be dead a lot quicker without him. It's not like the Scoobies are volunteering any money or help. I hope she kicks them all out!!!!

Author's Response: He certainly isn't behaving in a very likeable way, but he does have good intentions. He loves Buffy and doesn't want her to be hurt, but what he isn't taking into account is that she is an adult and capable of making her own decisions. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

I loooove the first part. I love Spike, but William I just want to hug. And you describe him so that we see his feelings, see how gentle he is.
Oh, blackmail, Bad council/Giles. So iether Buffy will say no, or else she says yes, but latter she says no.
Oh, gross, kittens' blood. Great chap.

Author's Response: William is a sweetheart, isn't he? I didn't realize how much I missed him until I wrote that scene. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Oh I hope she doesn't listen to Giles.

Author's Response: Wait and see. ;-)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Loved it, you showed who Spike really was and didn't soften his character, which way to many people do. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've noticed that some writers tend to gloss over Spike's past, and while I understand that, it's his ability to change that made him such an amazing character. I'm glad you think I'm getting that right. :-D

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

When we have reached a point where we think all is good...sigh...Please oh please god don't let Spike get the job of holding those eggs. All through the bar scene i was like 'please no eggs, please no eggs, no eggs come on I don't want to read something about eggs!' And now with this folder of photos tempting Buffy to change her thoughts of maybe Spike can't be good....AH MAN!
I want Buffy to tell Giles that he can cry 'Monster! Monster' all he wants but nothing will break her belief that Spike is capable of good...that he he's a man with some monster inside him and not the other way around. I want Buffy to also broadcast her two cents of what she thinks of the Council and tell them she doesn't want a penny from them. Let's have Buffy pull out a file and see what Giles did in his Ripper days...and ask him 'are you still evil?'

Author's Response: Spike's job is going to remain a mystery for a few chapters, but however it turns out, I hope you enjoy the journey. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Four

Oh Dear Lord, this does not bode well for our blonde duo, does it? And here I thought a happy ending was near, but obviously not. We all know that this is going to cause Buffy to rethink her decision to be with Spike, right?

Damn Giles, damn him straight to hell. Grr. And, damn her friends, too. Righteous bastards. Now I'm all pissy. Blech.

I will, however, wait patiently for the next update to see if maybe...just maybe Buffy will keep her head from crawling up her ass. Toodles.

~Serenity


Author's Response: ROFL - Buffy's head does have a habit of doing that, doesn't it? However, the main difference between my Buffy and the Buffy of canon is that mine has learned that she *isn't* incapable of tenderness and love. William taught her that. It may take her a while to fully remember the lesson ... but it isn't something she has forgotten for good. Thanks for the review. :-D

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