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Reviewer: Jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

eek-- rather concerned about spike's little business endeavor... and man will it get old fast if he has to run every single action by "his moral compass".

I am so glad to see this story back... is there a posting schedule I'm just not getting? haha. I love your writing and I love this story so much-- I normally don't read WIP's, so I always hold my breath when several days go by without a new chapter. :)

thanks for a great fic!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

What is he doing. I'm dieing to know what Spike has decided is the better plan. Don't quite know how much forgiveness Buffy could have in her, especially when all of her friends turn the other way. Great chapter, please, update soon.

Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Wonder where Spike is taking this guy to and what "You know what to do means" if Spike has to lead him to something he must not know where whatever he is looking for is. I am looking forward to seeing what this job is and how it will effect S/B.
The past few pages have had so much detail and goodness it is hard to come to the end of the page.

Reviewer: Mrs_JQuest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Awesome chapter!!! I love this story so much! But please, you have to finish writing the lovemaking! Don't cut us off like that!

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

“No wonder you went mad,” she whispered, mouthing her way up the line of his throat until she found the sweet spot. “You were so trapped back then. Did you love me because I set you free? Because I touched you and let you out of the agony of being a gentleman?”


Hottest thing ever written

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Can this story go on forever? Pretty please! Love it!!

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I may go blind from reading this on my laptop at work but it be worth it just to see the latest in FtTp Buffy seems to reconise Spike is evil she is not making excuses she is just accepting him for who he was and is in her life.
Now how they will all handle it is a whole other story lol this was great in how it was written

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

What ever this job is, when everyone else was sitting around talking about what Buffy should do to serve them and take care of them Spike was out trying to take care of her. I hope that goes a long way it always bothered me Giles never offered to help he too just pushed Buffy out to support her friends and save the town at the same time.

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I liked the reference to Wiliams innocence and Buffy sort of admiting she knew it at the time and how Spike has no real control over what he feels towards her. I especially like Buffy being level headed enough to bring up the way they accept Anya but not Spike. Sort of a scale of justice in how they measure evil and past wrongs into who is and who isnt accepted into their little group. Giles is really angry but I hope he takes time to condier or at least all of them do. Let us just hope Willow doesn't pull another spell gone wrong whammy.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh please don't let him ass everything up.

Reviewer: SowyOwl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Lovely!

Reviewer: Guy of Gisborne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Perfect little part with Spike showing his unsure William side to Buffy in trying to make clothing changes to please her and Buffy showing him she just wants him for him and never mind the bullock dockers

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I loved that you made Buffy call Giles on a few things like the fact he himself has lied to her about what he does tell her about vampires always on the show I wanted this kinda thing to take place with the slayer and watcher and it never really happened to the degree this did. Great update and intense chapter.
Please more when you have the time

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I will take a Spiked sprawled out chapter any day of the week!
Finally! Buffy has made up her mind and is not gonna be swayed by anyone in going for who she wants and what she wants in her heart of hearts.

Reviewer: Switchblade Kross Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh I could just hug you this was so perfect all the way around seriously the best story on the board.

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Best story ever!!!!
Please more I know I know demanding fans but I love this!

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I always feel so repetitive when I review your story, but great chapter as always. I love the line "She was seawater to a thirsty man." That whole paragraph was a wonderful description of his feelings for her. It’s a little scary for both of them, though. Spike loses himself in that love (that doesn’t seem a strong enough word) and on Buffy’s side it’s a lot of responsibility to be the focus of all that feeling.

I liked her confrontation with the Magic Box group and I loved Anya's reaction. It was perfect.

I'm worried about Spike, though...

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Dawson Creek reject!!!!
the visual on that has me falling to the floor and laughing this made my lunch hour and Xander being at a loss for words was priceless but I'm waiting to see what Willow says since she was kinda void in the scene there I cant wait for more I love your writing

Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Why is it I feel like Spike is working for the Cheese guy I keep picturing him in my head.
So many great parts in this update its hard to pick out the best ones but I will say Buffy just got me back on her team and Giles needs to come to terms with the fact he cant dictate Buffys life or calling and find a new role in her life as a friend and watcher.

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I know that. But, in here—” she placed a hand over his unbeating heart “—you’re exactly the same. You tried to tell me; I just wasn’t ready to listen until now.”

He swallowed. “Yeah. What does that—” he began, but she preempted the question.


Ah I so wanted him to finish that sentance but Buffy said all the perfect things it was a total fangirl moment for me

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Loved the couple moments with Buffy and Spike discussing his shirt and not changing and saying she loved him as is.
Mine mine mine lol Oh you bet he is.

Perfect chapter.

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Huh to get what things going I wonder
Demon fight club?
Kareokee bar?
Mutant hotel?
Fast and the dead Furious?

My mind is dying to know lmao

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Are they speaking latin? Im hoping this works out for Spike he so wants to be the man Buffy needs him to be its very much like when he was William and wanting to provide for his family. I loved seeing Buffy take a stand it was a long time coming and well worth the wait. Bravo!

Author's Response: The phrases spoken at the end are indeed Latin. Spike's new employer tells him that "time waits for no one." Spike replies with: "Now let thy servant depart," which is actually a quote from the Bible. (Luke 2:29, "He blessed God, and said, Lord, now let thy servant depart in peace, according to thy word.") Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Ha ha ha ha gotta love Anya she's not bothered in the least and even she sees Buffys point of view. Giles seems to be feeding off his hate of Spike makes me wonder what gives there I mean if Angel is so good what is his reasons to back that up?

Loved reading this

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I am concerned on this job and Spike lack of thinking it thru but then it looks like he has some idea of what he will be doing I so want him to keep Buffys trust in him.

Great post!

Author's Response: Well, Spike is wading into dangerous waters with this new job of his, but that's all I can say about it. His lying to Buffy about the money probably isn't going to lead to a good end either. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

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