Date: 05/02/2008 - 07:51 pm Title: † unforseen †
I'm trying to catch up with your story :)
So Spike doesn't have the chip any longer well he doesn't need it. ~ I loved both POV at the begin of the story / this chapter.
Date: 01/16/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: † unforseen †
Spectacular beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 01/16/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: † unforseen †
I really love this so far! I like how you are seeing the situation from both sides of the coin.
Please continue soon!
Author's Response: *clears throat* Something else that Joss Whedon failed to do...
Excuse me, I might be just a tad bit bitter toward a certain series creator.
Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 01/16/2007 - 04:05 am Title: † unforseen †
great start to your rewrite - looking forward to reading the next chapters - Hope we won't have too long a wait.
Author's Response: Oh, no, not too long at all -- I'm trying to at least edit some bits of the chapters every night. So, all in all, I should be done revamping the chapters by, give or take, the beginning of February, and hopefully, by then, I'll also have Chapter 13, as yet untitled, finished as well. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/16/2007 - 12:53 am Title: † unforseen †
Great start, looking forward to reading more...
Author's Response: Thank you!