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Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 01:32 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

aww great another update! I LOVED it, as always. Spike was a bastard, especially with Angel and I LOVED the last scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Give your muse a candy cause he did a amazing job!

Author's Response: Yup, Spike got served in this one - and rightly so. Glad you enjoyed the little fight scene, he needed to be taken down a notch. Mmmmm, the muse likes candy, thank you and thanks for the awesome review hon, smooches.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 01:18 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

lol. oh yeah, spike really got his ass handed to him in this chapter. I LOVE IT!!!!! he so deserved it. as mean as he is to buffy though, i'm really not srprised. this is spike we're talking abot here. on the show he was this badass, couldn't care less about nayone but himself vampire. that's kinda like how he is now. all it took was buffy to make him want to change. i mean, yeah he's got to want to change for himself but buffys gonna make him think about it. she's gonna make him want to change for the better.

I'm so loving this story and it's only the second chapter.not really all that shocked about that either. i mean, YOU did write the story and all of your work kicks ass!!!!!! lol. give ur oh so amazing muse a big smooch on the lips for me. as always, he delivered. more soon.

Author's Response: Hee hee, he sure did - mission accomplished, at the cost of some blood and pride. Oh yes, his personality is pretty canon with the show in here. And just like the show, he will eventually want to change, but it won't be for quite some time, sorry. You'll enjoy where I take them after a few (fic) weeks, giggles. LMAO, you are so very sweet, I'm blushing here from your compliment and my muse is puckering up to recieve his dose of kissage. Thanks for the review hon. Big hug and a fat juicy kiss from my muse.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 01:10 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

hell yeah she kicked his ass. good for her.

Author's Response: LMAO, indeed she did. Thanks sweety, more to come soon.

Reviewer: mellissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 01:07 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

Loved the brawl at the end. Spike was really a bastard though, especially with the cheese incident.


Author's Response: Giggles, glad you liked that little scene. Oh the cheese thing was soo gross, but I absolutely loved the 'cheese guy' during that particular btvs epi - made me laugh. Thanks for the review honey, kisses.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:56 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

Oh, this chapter ROCKED!! So glad to see Buffy kicking some ass in this one. :-D And I think there's something wrong with me that the meaner Spike gets, the more I'm getting a special tingle.

I like the introduction of Lindsey as a character who preys sexually on recruits. I'm sure it will make for some interesting moral dillemas for Spike when he decides to act on his lust for Buffy. Ooooooooh...

And finally, I think you are doing a great job of working the military details into the story, like by way of the letter to Angel. You're getting techinical information across while making it seem like a natural part of the story (Jeffey Deaver and Michael Crighton use this technique a lot), so it doesn't seem dry or boring. Great job on something that is not easy to do!

Author's Response: Giggles, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Spike deserved a little ass-whoopin after all he's done to her. I know all too well what you mean about that 'special tingle'. There's something about a bad boy that when he gets mean, you just LOVE to hate him - I'm right there with ya honey on that one. Ah yes, Lindsey - a little additive to make Spike a little more possessive over his recruit - giggles. I'm really glad you liked the incorporation of the military info. Definetely a dry subject. I'm not familiar with the gentlemen you mentioned but yeah, using a letter was the only way I could think to really get what was necessary across while still trying to make it fun - by using Buffy's valley girl attitude, lol. Thank you for such a wonderful review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:47 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

This story is awesome, I love it!

And thank you for your service, I appreciate every person who puts on a uniform and fights to provide us with the freedoms so many of us take for granted.

Author's Response: Very cool, glad you're enjoying it darling, it's been an absolute blast to write. Thank you very much for your own thanks, it was an honor to do my part and I would glady do it again if given the chance to go back. Thanks for such a warm and lovely review sweetheart, big hugs to you.

Reviewer: HELTERKSKELTER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:42 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

MAN this chapter made me which she were a slayer! hahaha
and- how exactly do you pronounce speichart?
spy--chart?
speech-art?
speckart?
SO GOOD. keep going. yum.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, if she were the slayer, he would have been pulverized. But at least she is finding herself in all this. Spike did right by her in at least that aspect, only problem is, he got what he wanted... right in the nose, lol. Oh, Speichart is pronounced... Spike-art. The 'h' is silent. Thanks for the review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: readergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:24 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

It's different, and I like that a lot. This Spike is snarly and yummy at the same time, and I'm very interested to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, glad you're enjoying the angle. It's definetely not your average story, but I sort of like taking the path less traveled. I hope you enjoy chapter 3 once it's up and thanks again, hugs.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:16 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

Hee, your muse can be a very , very naughty boy, but I adore how his mind works. ;) I had so much fun reading the chapter, especialy that last part, it was superb, funny, the action scenes wonderfully depicted, plus it gave me a warm fuzzy feeling that Buffy got a bit of compensation after all that Spike has put her through. More please? *battes eyelashes*

Author's Response: Oh indeed he can, he went very evil on this one. But of course, Spike needed a little comeupance and so hey I let Buffy have one good day of her own, giggles. More coming soon sweety, you know it. Thanks for all your help my dear friend. Hugs and kisses.

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