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Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 03:44 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

using THAT time of the month into your story- genius! and very realistic as well- keep writing, i love this story

Author's Response: hEE HEE, i REMEMBER HAVING TO GO TO MY OWN DRILL SERGEANT WHEN THAT HAPPENED, THOUGH NOT IN THE SAME EXACT WAY... HE DIDN'T WANT ANYTHING TO DO WITH IT EITHER, HE JUST SAID "VERY GOOD, ho- shit, I hit the stupid caps button, sorry. Basically, he said "Hoo-ah. run to the store." giggles and that was that. Thanks for the awesome review hon, glad you like it so far and the stayfree moment. Smoochies.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 03:34 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

GOD WHY CANT THEY JUST ADMIT THEY LIKE/WANT EACH OTHER!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really want spike and buffy to get together and am glad that he is starting to be nice, although no where near being nice enough to her. also i thought it was so cute that he was jealous of lindsey touching buffy. i really hope that they admit they have feeling for each other, at least to themselves and that he starts to be nicer to her. also i hope that everything works out and that they end up together and happy. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Hahahaha, it's fiction, that's why, but also I'm writing my first UST love/hate relationship here. Gonna build it up to the breaking point this time. Oh yeah, Spike is getting just a touch possessive/jealous when it comes to Lindsey getting near Buffy. Poor delusional boy, if only he would be nice to her. He may be just a tad in the near future, but the smut will take awhile to get to then the spuffy luvin a bit longer than that, giggles and winks. I'm very happy you're enjoying the story so far hon, thanks so much for the great review hon, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 03:20 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

Oh my god... Great chapter. :) Hilarious title. :) Fantastic story! You are so creative, I just love your fic premises. This one is so fantastic, and I squealed when I saw you'd updated.

Author's Response: Tee hee, glad you liked the chapter hon. I found this one of the funnier ones to write so far - had a blast doing it. WOW, you're so sweet with your compliments, I'm blushing and will continue to try my best. Thank you from the bottom of my heart darling. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:53 am Title: A Stayfree Moment


Great job showing the more human side of Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, smooches.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:04 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

so we're starting to see the softer side of Spike, very nice chapter :)

Author's Response: Yup, just a sneak peek for now, lol. Thanks for the review sweets.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 01:41 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

LOve it, so Spike does have a soft spot for her as well, Why am I thinking his transfer is goning tobe where Buffy is going.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chappy hon. Yeah, SPike had to soften a little, it was time. Bingo - your right on the money with your assessment of Spikes transfer, good for you. I have some awesome plans for when they meet back up. Thanks for the great review sweetsy, smooches.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 01:01 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

Fun chapter, I absolutely loved it! Spike and Buffy's interactions sure are entertaining! I also like how Gunn's character is fleshing out, and the scene between Spike and the twins was so sweet. Great update! :D

Author's Response: Hee hee, they keep having those little moments, whether embarassing or otherwise. I really like Gunn's character and I was happy to finally include him here in one of my fics - I think his personality suits the story and it's ultimate goals well, so I'm happy you like him. Thanks for the great review darling. I hope you enjoy ch 4 once it's ready. Hugs.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:21 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

I just read the 3 chapters and got to say I love it. Funny, well written, lots of details and just great !! I can't wait to see how it will evolve. Really enjoyed the glimpse into the softer side of Spike, very touching. And I have to tell you that your banner is so drool worthy, my oh my !!! Oh and thanks

Author's Response: Awesome, I'm very happy you're enjoying it sweety. I've had the most fun writing this fic with all it's quirks and humorous moments. Oh dear lord, that banner is sooo delicious - it's my wallpaper for inspiration, giggles. Thanks so much for the lovely review sweety - big hug and a kiss for you from me and my muse.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:07 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

What a wonderful finish to my weekend. I thoroughly enjoyed this new chaptert. Spike was so sweet to take her 'off base' to the shop for the tampons. Methinks that Buff'y's growing feelings for Spike will mean that she works and trains as hard as she can and will 'pass out' with flying colors. I would luv it if a 'joint mission' feature's in their future. I'm sure you've got something good planned. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Yay, glad I could make your weekend a bit more enjoyable honey. Yeah, Spike was a gentleman about the whole tampon ordeal, even if he was a bit embarassed, lol. Buffy is most definetely sitting up and taking notice of Spike - as for when they get together as a couple... much later down the road after the smut. I have a deliciously funny plan for our couple before the bliss of true love blossoms. Thank you very much for the awesome review, smoochies to you sweety.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:59 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I was so happy to see an update!
I'm happy that you're writing this story with an experienced 'pen'. It's more likely to provide us faithful readers with more believable scenarios--and more UST, I can imagine :)

Author's Response: Awww, thank you sweety. It definetely helps having been throught the real deal myself. Yup, I plan to build the UST to a boiling point, then look out - fireworks, lol. Thanks for such a great review, smoochies.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:27 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

that was too funny. i had a girlfriend that was too embarrassed to buy tampons in front of her boyfriend, she had me buy them for her, i had to have my boyfriend drive me as i did not have my drivers license at the time. she got mad at me when i took them out of the bag and tossed them to her while she was standing next to her boyfriend. like he did not know what happens every month, yeah right. lmao. now she yells at him and tells him he better not forget her tampons after 30 years of marriage still lmao. i know and hope in spuffyland that they will end up on the same post or base after basic training and hope that lindsay does not get hold of buffy of if he does she is saved in time. cant wait for your next post. keep up the good work, also looking forward to posts for TE and LFL

Author's Response: Hee hee, oh yes, many a gal is a bit embarassed by the monthly purchases. That is too funny about your friend getting her stuff thrown at her, lmao. As for your wishful thinking about B&S being on the same post later - BINGO, ding ding ding, you win a cupie doll for guessing my strategy hon, well done girl. You didn't think it was just going to end when basic did, did you? Giggles, thanks so much for the funny review sweetheart, smoochies.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Hmmm, why's he transferring?

Very cute, including the interaction with the kids.

And oh, goodness, would that be embarrassing! I don't even like going into the line with that stuff when there's a male clerk!

Author's Response: Well, the gov't reassigns soldiers to new posts and new jobs roughly every 2-3 years. Being a drill sergeant is a very temporary thing. Glad you liked the kiddie scene, that was fun to write. Giggles, I know most women at one point in their lives hate going to buy tampons and such, I couldn't resist bringing Spike down to earth on that one. Thanks for the awesome review hon, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Glad to see that Spike doesn't like the stick thin look. Thought it was hilarious when he started to slap himself.

Lindsey creeps me out - hope that nothing bad happens there. More importantly, I can't wait for spuffy, but I'm nervous that Spike might get caught :-(

Author's Response: Nope, Spike is not a fan of skin and bones - he needs him a handful of something to grab - it's healthier. Oh god, I couldn't help writing that whole 'slap myself silly back to my senses part'. I could see him doing that given his situation. Yeah, Lindsey is a real creep, but it brings out the protective/possessive Spike - which is a good thing. Oh, no worries on the whole Spike getting caught when it comes to the smut - I got me a plan that covers that area. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading the chapter sweety, thanks for the awesome reivew. Big hugs.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Well I see you got this posted already, LOL! Well Hon I have to tell ya, this was an amazing chap and I LOVED workin' with you. We always have such a blasty-blast on the phone and it helps to get my butt in gear as far as tryin' to get my own writin' done ;). Kuddos on another job well done!

Author's Response: Giggles, I'm just so excited over this fic. I get goofy grins when the muse comes up with stuff. THank you, thank you, thank you, sooooo much for all the help honey. I soooo love chatting on the ohone with ya. Big smoochies to you for the lovely review my friend.

Reviewer: survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:50 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I'm going to join the rest of the world and say "More please!". The story is original, fast-paced and highly entertaining. It's a real treat...

Author's Response: YAY, thank you so much honey, I'm thrilled you're enjoying it b/c I'm having a ton of fun writing this one. Thanks soooooo much for the great review, smoochies to you sweety.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

First blood? *gg* Yeah, Buffy did that. *g*
I had to grin while reading that Buffy checked out Spike on her way to the shower.
So Gunn got tired of babysitting? After seeing how Lindsey used the opportunity of Spike gone and Gunn distracted? I can only say Spike is right to watch him.
Loved the little scene with Spike and Lilly & Logan and his slip "bloody ponce he taught them. *gg* And that he was smiling, showing Buffy another side of him she didn't know yet.
Fun too when he tried to stop thinking of her and slapped himself *grins*
I wonder if Spike will be transfered again before Buffy's training is over (she has nine weeks, we're at week six that means three left. That's around the time Spike will go).

Author's Response: Hee hee, I couldn't help it - she needed a nickname after surprising the hell out of everyone. Oh, Buffy ain't blind, I mean, this is Spike we're talking about here - yummmmmmy. Yeah, Lindsey has the potential to cause some trouble, but it does bring out Spike's possessive/protective streak, which is a good thing. Yup, Buffy needed to see a softer side of Spike, and his interaction with Gunn's twins was just the ticket. As for Spike's transfer - that will come into play in a most unique way, you'll see. Thanks so much for the lovely review hon, I always look forward to yours - big smooches to you.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

good update

Author's Response: THanks sweety, smooches to you.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Really didn't think I was going to like this but I LOVE it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Squeeee, I'm thrilled you're enjoying it sweety. I think this has been my fav to write so far. Thank you so much for the great review, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Love this story.........finally a softer side of Spike. When is he just going to give in to it??? Spuffy soon please!

More more more!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked seeing his softer side. Wellllll, it's gonna be awhile before he gives in - politics and all that of his position. Just trust that it will most definetely be happeniing. Just got to let them reach the boiling point first so the sparks really bring the house down, giggles. Thanks for the awesome review, hon, hugs.

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:13 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I was prepared not to like this and instead found that I lolved it and want more to see where it goes. Excellent job
4 Stars this is orginal :)

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad this turned out to be something you can enjoy. I love to entertain people thru stories and humor. Thanks so much for the review sweety, the next chapter should be up by the end of the week. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:11 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Wow. i was in such a bad mood after reading the latest updates to "His dirty little secret" (which i was glad to see) and "love island" (which latest chapter is the reason for my bad mood) I found your update and am feeling much better now. Althoigh I miss TE this fic IITAN as me enthralled but how is it going to work if Spike is reassigned? can't wait for next update.

Author's Response: Awwww, I'm sorry you were in a bad mood sweety. It's hard to read fics that have angst in them and you really want to know what's going to happen next. I'm just glad I could lift your mood a bit for you. Yes, I need to get back to work on TE. The muse, for whatever his fickle reason, needed a bit of a break. Hopefully by next weekend I can update that and perhaps even LFL. As for Spike being reassigned, not to worry, I have some pretty cool plans for our couple beyond basic. Thanks so much for the lovely review hon, kisses.

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

good story thus far. Keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: You got it sweety, hopefully by the end of the week. Glad to see you're enjoying it hon, thanks for the awesome review, smooches.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Oh, wow! I've just started reading this and I am so thoroughly glad that I have! This is superb.

The first chapter did an excellent job in laying the scene and allowing the reader to build empathy for the characters, Spike included. The sparring in the second was wonderfully cathartic and vivdly written. For that moment, I was Buffy.

I'm pleased that Buffy is now getting to see more of Spike(!) in terms of the different nuances of his personality as well as in the more literal sense. And the scene with Xander: hilarious! In fact, I am still on a high...

Just to make it abundantly clear: I am loving this story and can hardly wait for more!

PS. The banner is all kinds of sublime.....mmm




Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you decided to read and am thrilled you're enjoying it honey... this has definetely been my fav fic to write so far. I think the first chappy was the hardest b/c of the dry material, but I'm glad you understood it served to set the atmosphere for the story to take place in. Oh, I loved writing the part where Spike gets his comeupance - he soooo needed it. Yup, little glimpses here and there for our couple, getting them to think, even if just a little bit, about one another in a different light. Oh the banner, once kitty finished it and sent it to me, well, let's just say its my laptop wallpaper - totally droolworthy. I'm very pleased you like it so far hon, and I hope you like ch 4 once it's ready. Thanks for such a wonderful reivew, big hugs for you.

Reviewer: lidija Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

this was so funny, slap slap, oh, and like he is gonna forget about buffy, bet he is gonna imagine her in that porno. cant wait for next chapter, slap slap hahahhaha

Author's Response: Hee hee, I loved writing that little SLAP himself back into his senses part. I could so see it happening. Glad I could make ya laugh, sweety. Thanks for the review and I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. Smooches

Reviewer: Jaesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Have I mentioned how wonderful your writing is...? I know I've been horrible about reviewing, but I gotta tell ya, I love your work.

I'm happy you decided to post this. It's moving along really well, the pace is perfect. Keep up the great word-slinging and I look forward to your next update.

~Jaesha

Author's Response: Awww, thank you hon. I'm far from perfect but I practice by writing at least a little something everyday. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying my work, I love to entertain, especially using humor as the main tool. Thanks a million for such a lovely review, hugs and kisses.

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