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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 05:10 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Bothered by Spike bothering her, and now she'll be completely bothered by his ignoring her. Love him coming to some kind of sense. Great chapter.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHHA, isn't it ironic? Just wait till the next chapter, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweety. Huggles.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

“Thought you might.” He couldn’t help himself, wasn’t even aware of it when it happened... he tilted his head to one side and smiled at her.

omg, mini-orgasm!!!

and BEWARE THE TAMPON!!!! MWAAAAAHHHHH!!! LMAO

Author's Response: Hee hee, mini-o indeed, he slipped, he's falling for her. Of course I couldn't resist the tampon thing, evil here, Mwahahahahahah. THanks darling, I adore your reviews. smooches.

Reviewer: carla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 12:17 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

woh ho hoo.
Interesting, very interesting, flirtatious banter, cheeky warmth, red hot thoughts and anger all in one chapter - how delicious... ;) x

Author's Response: Giggles - and so it begins, the time where Spike realizes how much he wants her. I really, really can't wait to see your reaction to the next two chapters - I set it up so Buffy gets ultra mad, *winks*. THanks for the review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2007 - 12:22 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Enjoyed! Off to next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Great! Things will pick up after next chapter - it's the set up to 6. Thanks again for all your reviews, I enjoy knowing your thoughts on each individual chappy. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: cherie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 06:16 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

I cant wait to read more, keep up the good work :)


Author's Response: Thank you sweety, glad you like it. Hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

'Asian' porn? Hehe indeed no danger to see Buffy's face in another blond actress. Funny titles *gg*
Buffy? She is in ER? And again they left Lindsey with her even if Spike said not to do it. Mmm and he is more worried about Buffy (and not only the stitches) that he likes to acknowledge.
Good that Gunn told Buffy Spike's background; it's indeed easier for her to understand (at last a part of him now). [I remember an episode of J.A.G. ... there is a problem for the army when two people that are involved work together or are married? Against the order = not aloud? Because Gunn said anyway the change to meet one another later is slim. And in this case impossible because of their different work.] ~ *gg* 2:0 for Buffy now, huh? (the tampons). Oh yeah, Spike has to suffer a bit (fighting against himself) when helping Buffy to dress. 3:0 with the poker *grins*. And she really led him into temptation *gg* Good that Buffy can't read his thoughts ;-). But anyway, he won :) So 3:1 then? But for him Buffy won. And he noticed now what he really wants and yet knows that he can't have it. A sad thought ~ but a good chapter. Till the next one :)

Author's Response: Spike and Buffy, being placed in neutral territory, are forced to be, at least semi-civil to one another. 3:1 seems about right, lol. Well, 2 people in the military shouldn't have any problems being married and in the same unit - technically speaking. Giggles, glad you liked the chapter hon. I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks so much for the review, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Iza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 11:17 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Loved the way she hustled him at poker ! Also love the way he's realizing what he's getting into but, poor soul, hopes to get away with it. Men can be so dumb... Can't wait for what's next, he he !
PS : such good porn movies titles (giggles)

Author's Response: Oh yeah, men can be very dumb indeed. Spike appreciated the fact she can hustle him, even if he acted differently. He enjoys her spunk and her strength - part of his attraction that goes beyond the physical. LMAO - those porn titles, I had to have Beasleysmom help me out with those, it's odd how hard it can be to make things up like that, giggles. THanks for the review hon, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it so much. Smoochies.

Reviewer: mellissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 04:00 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Yeah, I bet Buffy will be shock when she realizes that she's going to miss Spike being around.

Author's Response: Giggles, she'll be frustrated over the lack of attention for sure. Thanks for the review sweets, hugs.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:02 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you sweety. I should be updating sometime this week. Hugs.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 05:29 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Perfect chapter! Ut oh... Spike's thinking, not a good thing... and it looks like he's going to honor her winnings.

Great job!

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, Spike, thinking, unmixy things - definete trouble. Thanks hon, hugs and smoochies.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

The accident was an excellent plot device to bring them together outside of the fishbowl of training. Spike's actions and reactions were a delight, and I love how you've believably given Spike some perspective about his behavior. The chink in his armor about the blood and needles was also charming. This was a very entertaining, well paced chapter. Buffy was open and relaxed and it gave Spike the chance to relax, too. It was a nice breather from all the tension.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review hon, I'm happy you like Spike's development - he is a good guy underneath it all, but of course it takes Buffy to draw it out of him. Remember those needles, particularly when Spike and Buffy meet back up in the future, giggles - I have some fun plans. Smoochies.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 04:25 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Love your story - very cute = Please write more soon!

Author's Response: No problem darling, I'm currently working on chappy 5 and should have it out in a few days. Thanks for the great review, kisses.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:25 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

oooh loving the angst to come ;)

Author's Response: Giggles, I have a trick or two up my sleeve. Thank sweety, hugs.

Reviewer: Unbridled Brunette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

This is such a wonderful fic. :) I love the original plot of Buffy being in the army. Also, your characterization of Spike is wonderful. Like canon Spike, your Spike has his flaws (porn addiction, general meanness toward women) he is still a very likeable character. And his antipathy toward women makes sense, given his broken heart.

I hope to read more soon. You are doing a great job. :)

Author's Response: Squeee, music to my ears that you don't mind the setting for the story, I realize it wouldn't appeal to everyone, bu I tried to infuse it with humor and fun antics. Poor Spike, he really has had a rough time with love. In a way it's not his fault, but it will take Buffy to make him want to change - though I can promise the road will be long with lots of struggling. Love/hate, hate/love, it's the relationship they start with that will evolve whether they expect it to or not, giggles - oh the plans I have. Thank you so much for the wonderful review sweety, smooches.

Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Gah - liked the last paragraph especially, but don't leave us hanging for too long!!

Author's Response: Giggles, I won't I promise. Just gotta get the next chappy polished and beta'd - should be out before the weekend. Thanks sweety, huge cyer hug for you.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:07 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Hilarious that after watching all that Asian porn so he would not think about Buffy, he managed to come up with new ways to torture her. And, oh god, please tell me you made up those porn titles? If you did, they were brilliant, if not, I seriously wonder about our society sometimes. Loved his reaction to the Lyndsey situation, how he at first was concerned for her safety from the man, but quickly it moved into, "What if she likes him?" Also, that he is starting to find common ground between the two of them, even if it is that they were both cheated on.The card game was a another great opportunity for Spike to see how Buffy could challenge him. Not in a conniving way, like his ex-wives, but in a fun, "I am not going to let you get away with anything' way. I do believe that strong men, like Spike (and strong women too) are never happy with mates that are weak and that they can walk all over. I think they are happiest when they are with someone who will stand up to them. I know I am. I loved how Spike realized some of the depth of his feeling toward Buffy and cannot wait to see her reaction to his "leaving her alone." Somehow, I think our dear Buffy will be bothered by the sudden lack of attention. Great chapter and great way to put a new spin on our favorite love birds.

Author's Response: LMAO - yup, I made those porn titles up - with a little help from Beasleysmom of course. Oh yes, Lindsey pushes his buttons on a personal level, especially when it comes to Buffy. Buffy is starting to get under his skin, but in a good way too. He finds her strength, personality, many things about her as a person very attractive - perhaps too attractive, thus the leaving her alone decision. I agree with you 100% about men and women enjoying a strong mate vs a weak one. Giggles, I know my husband gets flustered sometimes that I don't take his shit, but he loves me for it. Buffy will suffer from the lack of attention, that's a gaurantee, the thing is... how far will she take her frustration??? *winks* - cryptic foreshadowing for next cahppy. Such a lovely review you've left me sweety, my muse and I thank you kindly, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 05:19 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Just read first four chappies. Fantastic fic so far, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you sweety, I'm thrilled you're enjoying it. I should be updating sometime during this week. smooches to you and have a wonderful week.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 04:00 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Loved the update! I'm curious to see where you take this after graduation :)

Author's Response: Giggles - oh the places I'll take it, my muse is grinning like the cheschire cat. I think you'll truly enjoy their interesting future after graduation. THanks for the review hon, big hug.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 01:59 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

A very fulfilling chapter. You are very detailed in Spike's thought processes so that we know him very, very well. your narrative is well thought out and very credible and all the strands of conversation and action between them go towards, shall we say naturally develop the inevitable depth of their relationship. Because it is a relationship; Buffy is friendly to both fellow soldiers and sergeants alike, but with Spike - there isa complete spectrum of response and reaction. And vise versa. She looks at him; no, really looks at him. And we know that he's looking at her.

Great. Just Great.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the lovely review hon. They most definetely have a relationship whether they realize it or not and for now it's love/hate - they love to hate each other and eventually, they'll hate themselves as they come to love eachother - sorry, going cryptic here, giggles. Chpater five should be up sometime during the week, I do hope you enjoy it - lots of action planned for that one, *winks*.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 01:50 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

I always make you laugh?!?! I hope it´s a good thing, isn´t it?
I love this story. I really do love it. You´re so good in describing things. And to see both of them acting normal, at least they´re trying, is fantastic. And now he´s allowed to do anything he wants. But what did you say?? He is going to ignore her?
But I think that after her graduation she IS going to see him again. Even if she thinks he is a pain in the ass.
Well, I´m waiting for next one and I love it that you´re chapters are that long.
Hug you tight. Smooch

Author's Response: Oh sweety, it's a great thing - I love to laugh and of course make people laugh. *Grins*, I'm very happy you're enjoying everything so far - I'm absolutely giddy with excitement over my plans for chapter 5 and what you'll think after you've read it. Oh yeah, they got a little deeper glimpse at one another and Spike is attracted to her strength and spunk - much to his dismay. So he'll leave her alone since he knows his hormones are a wee bit outta control around her. Giggles, you know me well. I have many lovely plans for our couple after graduation. Thanks so much sweety for the awesome review. Chappy 5 should be up sometime during the week if all goes well. Huge hug and a big wet kiss.

Reviewer: Tina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 01:23 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Awesome chapter! Want.more FWAHAHAHA

Author's Response: Giggles along with your laughter. Oh yes, the next chappy is coming very soon and I definetely have some treats planned for it. Thanks for the review sweety, hope you enjoy the nummy bits coming up this week in chapter 5. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

asian porn? lol

'Why couldn’t she smile like that around him? Maybe because you live to make her miserable?' smart guy! ;P

i liked this chapter so much! spike's obviously worried about lindsay, but it's clear (well, maybe not to him) that he is quite jealous of how buffy interatcs with lindsay, and with the other men in general.

of course, it's all his fault... lol. And 'poker night' just shows that: buffy can treat him normally, and even enjoy his company when he is not acting like a total jerk. and i love when she get the upper hand... and i suspect spike likes that too!

so he had just realized he picks on her cuz he likes her? kinda like a 4yrs old that pulls the plait of the pretty girl at recess? oh, that's cute!

ok, maybe not for buffy. but if he's gonna keep his word (cuz he did lose!) i think buffy will be more frustrated at him ignoring her! lol

hugs sweetie! this was really a great chappie!! :D





Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh sweety - you know me and my sense of humor, tee hee. Spike is most definetely the jealous type, even if he won't admit it to himself and he's very much attracted to Buffy's strength and personality. She's sort of slowly worked her way under his skin, in a good way, before he even knew it. Yup, he's acting like the typical little boy with a crush - picking, teasing, purposefully putting himself in front of her, giggles - silly boy. Frustration, hmmmmm, that's safe to say, BUT, *winks*, I have a few tricks up my sleeve concerning that frustration. Big smoochies to you my friend, thanks for the lovely review - chat with you soon.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 08:22 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Loved spike being hustled by buffy, enjoyed the whole chapter.
looking forward to the next one, also love the long chapters it realy works.

Author's Response: She got him good didn't she? Tee hee. Glad you liked the length of the chappy. I figure if I'm going to jump forward in time then I may as well put as much into it as I can. Thanks for the great review, smooches.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 06:43 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Yep, attention is attention, so she's still going to miss it, LOL.

I'm surprised she gets away with not wearing a bra around guys....or would want to there.

Ah, so back to regular duty in a unit....

Aw, Spike, you're still better than Lindsey, since you're not a player. You're aware, and still trying to do the right thing.

Author's Response: Boy did you hit the nail on the head sweety. She'll be missing it once it's gone. LOL, the bra thing. it was the time frame in which he noticed... in the middle of the night when women don't usually wear one and then in the hospital when she was dressing to stay in bed. You can bet no woman in her right mind would go without during boot camp, that would be painful and most embarassing too, giggles. Yes, Spike's time is growing short and he'll be moving onto his next assignment. Giggles, he's just distraught that his hormones are outta control when it comes to Buffy. Thank you for the lovely review sweety, hugs.

Reviewer: zoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 06:08 am Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

awww...update soon please? i love this story :)

Author's Response: THanks sweety and yes, you can count on an update sometimes during the week. Hugs.

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