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Reviewer: SBLuver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 01:03 am Title: Cold Shoulder

Arghhh!! This story is too good! I wait for yet dread every new chapter because I know that we're so close yet so far away. I wish there were ten more updates to read.

Spike was so sexy in this chapter beating the crap out of Lindsay. Lol He finally showed his true colors. Gunn gets major props from me for just standing back. :-D

Poor Buffy. She's so confused. lol I can't wait to see what happens and what she has to say to Spike in the next chapter. I just know it'll be good!


Author's Response: Hee hee, very close now, I promise. Oh yeah, sexy possessive Spike beating the crap out of Lindsey - I couldn't resist writing that. I truly enjoy writing Gunn too, he's a doll and so easy to work with. Next chapter will definetely hold a showdown, *winks*. Thanks so much for the awesome review sweety, smooches.

Reviewer: e-mis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 12:04 am Title: Cold Shoulder


you are evil.

the next one? when?
see? you sent me to monosyllabic land. it's just not fair. you won't leave us hanging too long, right? RIGHT?
please...
i know i'm beeing selfish here, but i had a crappy week and it's still not over and the weather is cold and my boyfriend is still abroad so please... (*puppy eyes* and all that rot)
(yes, your guess is good... it's spikeilitis. or the lack of it? anyway, please, more.)
e-mis
P.S.: "if they could keep from killing one another during the courting process" and the buttplug? definitely ROTF LMAO.
and last but not least thanks for the update.

Author's Response: LOL, on the monosyllabic land. Sorry, I just wanted free reign to make the next chappy as long as I wanted. I promise it won't be long... perhaps this weekend if all goes as planned. Awwww, I feel for ya, the bo being gone and all. I know what that's like. I'm very happy you got some laughs from this - life in the Army really is funny when it boils down to it. Thank you so very much for the wonderful review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

D'oh! Double d'oh!!
I sense a showdown of sorts, and I bet it's gonna be a doozy...

Author's Response: Oh yes, it will be a showdown of epic proprtions, gauranteed, *winks*. Thanks so much for the review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:43 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Yeah, cliffhangers are evil, but being an author myself, I know how much fun they can be to do. ;)

Excellent chapter!! I was laughing SO hard at some parts. Like when they're all "camping" and the MREs with a side of constipation.. oh man!! That was great!

Looking forward to see Buffy give Spike a piece of her mind!! =D

Author's Response: HAhahahahaha, a kindred spirit indeed. Yes, evil cliffies do serve a purpose, but I truly didn't want to cut off anything of the next chapter just to make it fit, *winks*. So glad you liked it hon and thanks for understanding and the lovely review. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

This is such an incredible read!

Absolutley adored the letter tearage; Spike's somewhat possesive freudian slip; Buffy's attention depravation...in fact, just about everything. Thank you.

I also sensed a serious anti-MRE vibe...

Nevertheless, you are the epitomy of evil.

Author's Response: Giggles, oh yeah, I've never been a fan of the MRE - no matter how far they've come in recent years, blahhhhh, blahh - in Buffy terms. Spike was very pleased she tore the letter up, after all, he did work hard and land flat on his back with a bleeding nose to get her over him, giggles. I promise I'll try to update over the weekend to make up for the cliffie - just have to refine and polish it some. Thanks for the lovely review sweety. Kisses.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Glad Buffy tore Angel's letter. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, she is soooo over him... much to Spike's happiness. Thanks for the review sweetheart, hugs.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:07 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

AH!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!! UBER soon!!! More now, please?? Soon!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, soon, I promise soon, Thanks for the review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh God ! i can't believe you left it there . You had to chop up the chapter, ok does this mean we can have the next one tomorrow ( please say yes , please say yes) and your at chapter 5 and not hing spuffy yet, not reallly complaining , i love this story. Please , please update soon.









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Author's Response: Well, soon, maybe not tomorrow, but very soon, I promise. I had to build up the UST for the story's sake first, but I think you'll enjoy the next chapter, at least I hope so. Thank you so very much for the great review darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

ok, your description of MREs was so funny (especially the constipation). Again, I was never in the armed services myself, but have heard so much AND I've actually eaten MREs - my dad thought it would be fun when we were teens to "show" us what he had to go through when he was in the Army. I believe MREs have improved since then but hey military government issued food is NEVER anything to plan a cordon bleu restuarant around! But my favorite was an unidentified can that when opened contained a VERY HARD round soda cracker, an equally hard and round slab of chocolate, a small "tin" of peanut butter and, here's what really cracked me up, a packet containing a stick of gum, utensils and TOILET PAPER! So the food was really bad, but hey, the military truly does think of everything! It was great fun (even if not so tasty).

Yippee that Spike got to pummel Lindsey and he can't do anything aboout it! What fun! I can't wait for the next chap or two to see how they handle being alone in the barracks and still fighting their attraction. I can picture buffy laying into him with a tirade of choice words to vent her frustration over his last couple of weeks of ignoring her and then yelling out she was his for all the world to here and I can't wait to see what Spike's response is and if he'll get a chance to use his condoms!

Such a wonderful tale told by a fantastic story teller! Thanks so much for the laughs and the memories! oh and I loved the "uniforms are like monets" reference - so very true!

More please! and hurry (LOL) hugs!

Author's Response: Giggles, those MREs are awful, at least they were in my day. OMG, that's so funny, your description of the soda cracker and stuff - I can so relate... horrid crap indeed. Oh yeah, Lindsey got a good ass-beating. As for being alone in the barracks - you know that can only result in sparks flying - of the good and bad kind, *winks*. Tee hee, yeah, Monet pretty mush sums it up, doesn't it? So glad you liked the chapter hon. I should be updating hopefully over the weekend. Thanks hon, for such a wonderful review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: maraina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Oooo errrr! From getting the cold shoulder to watching Spike's hot ass hmm? Can't wait to see what other body parts might come out to play in the next chappie! Really did enjoy getting to see some of the softer inner workings-of-the-mind of the sergeant from Hell. And just how WRONG is it that I get all hot when he gets all caveman-violent with the suspected threat to (see 'competition for') the object of his affections? LOL. Last chapter I would simply have deemed it (i.e. Buffy) the object of his desires but like I say, seeing into his head and how he finds comraderie with Buffy in having been betrayed by an unfaithful lover, it definitely seems like he has some real affection for her. Just lovely. More please!

Author's Response: Ooooh, I'd say it's a safe bet there will be lots of parts coming out in next chapter, *winks*. Yes, there are definetely some feelings coming out on Spike's part, but of what, he can't understand just yet as lust has dominated his mind so far. LMAO, I get that, with liking his primal caveman side, very hot indeed. Glad you enjoyed the chapter darling, more to follow soon. Hugs.

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:48 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Great story. Update soon please. I beg of you. I need some spuffy lovin soon,

Author's Response: LOL, ok, I promise very soon. Hopefully this weekend if all goes as planned. Thanks for the review hon, smooches.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:38 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Buffy being all put out because Spike stopped harassing her is funny. Spike's fight with Lindsey was certainly revealing and deserved. Lindsey made his crass observation to just the wrong person. This was another highly entertaining chapter. Buffy giving Spike a piece of her mind should be a lot of fun. I can already picture it!

Author's Response: Giggles, oh yeah, she misses the attention. And of course, Lindsey's big mouth got him just what he deserved, a good ass-whooping. Glad you liked the chapter and of course, next one will have Buffy giving him more than a piece of her mind, *winks*. Thanks for the review, hugs.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 10:25 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

I like most MREs... some were like chef boyardee but some were like nasty canned meat. I like the oatmeal cookie bars tho! Yumy!

Bad cliffie!!!

Author's Response: Wow, you're the first person I heard say that. Of course I'm positive they've come a long ways since I've had to eat them, but I'm not going to bother to find out, LOL. I'm happy you liked the chapter hon, and thanks so much for the review, hugs.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

oookkkaaay that was evil to leave it there, pls update soon, you have me addicted.

Author's Response: LOL, yes, it was, but it had to be so I could write the next chapter as long as possible. I do hope when it's postedm that it makes up for my sutting this one off here. Thanks so much for the great review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

So. Freaking. Evil. To. Leave. It. There. But since it's another brilliant chapter, I guess I'll have to forgive you, LOL. :-)

Spike going psycho on Lindsey and basically admitting his jealousy out loud was awesome, and something I didn't really see coming. I guess as an excuse, he could say that it meant she was his soldier, or his responsibility, or something. But we know the truuuuuuuuth!

And I loved Buffy and Spike's unspoken communication with Angel's letter. You described it so well, I actually felt like I could see the whole thing in my head.

I hope you have more coming soon, before I expire of anticipation!

Author's Response: I know, I am truly sorry, but the next chappy should hopefully make up for it. Ooooo, yay, I like that you didn't see Spike's jealousy coming, I like delivering the element of surprise. Glad you liked the Angel letter scene. SPike was really holding his breath on that one. Thanks so much for the wonderful review sweety. Many hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh, come on, you GOTTA post the next chapter! Soon, I hope? I can't wait to see what she has to say to him! Should be a hoot, more please!

Author's Response: I will, I promise - hopefully by this weekend. I do hope you like the chapter just as much as this one sweety. Thanks for the great reivedw, hugs.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

wow.spike actually went through with ignoring buffy and it actually worked.....well up until now of course.oh, spike kicking lindsey's ass was....i'm sooooo not ashamed to say that i smirked my ass off the whole time. lol. this update really cheered me up. as always, your muse delivered. i bow before him in all of his fantastic glory!!!!!!!! more soon. AMAZING JOB!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh yes, he ignored her for his own sake and hers. LMAO - I'm glad you liked the ass-kicking of Lindsey, he so neede it. Giggles, you bowing before the muse.... he's the one who is truly humbles sweetheart. And he's very glad to have entertained as well. Thank you so much for the lovely review, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh I can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder what Angel wanted.

I hope Buffy and Spike will be at the same place.

More please.




Author's Response: LOL, well, naturally Angel wanted her back, but Buffy is a tough ARMY girl now and she knows she can do better... and of course she will, *winks*. You can bet on Spike and her meeting up again in the future, I'm not ready to end the fic just yet. Thanks for the review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:08 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

wonderful!! cant wait to know what happens next!!

Author's Response: Thank you sweety... soon, very soon I'll update. Smooches.

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:04 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Arrgghhhh! MORE MORE MORE, please!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok, I promise soon, hopefully by this weekend honey. I am thrilled to bits though that you're enjoying it so much. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the lovely review.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

damn right youre evil!!!!! more more! Does that mean you've already got the next chappie almost done??? oh i hope so. love this fic so so much. I love that she tore up angel's letter - great!! and his possessive use of her name in front of everyone lol. Great great great update, can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I know, I'm ducking my head in shame right now, but I do hope next chapter more than makes up for it, I really do. It will be one helluva ride, *winks*. Oh yeah, she is very much through with Angel and much to Spike's personal approval too. Glad you enjoyed the chappy hon, thanks for the awesome review, hugs.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

I enjoyed the Lindsey punchage, that sleazeball totally deserved it! I also liked that Buffy completely blew off Angel's letter. Can't wait to read more. Loved the update!

Author's Response: Giggles, I enjoyed writing Lindsey getting his ass beat - he so needed it. Buffy is definetely over Angel - as fr as she is concerned, she has no need for a guy like that, especially after all she's been through. Thanks so much for the great review sweety, smoochies.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

Evil cliffhanger? You? Never! Or is it always? *giggles* Don't mind me I'm in silly mood now. I loved the chapter, I loved how Buffy is now more aware of Spike than she would have liked. I loved jealous/possessive Spike and how he hurt Lindsey and how he called her 'his' without noticing that he had. *melts* And I truly can't wait for the delicious chapter I'm sure will follow this. *smooches* Mari

Author's Response: LOL, ok, sometimes, a little bit, every now and then a cliffie. Buffy is definetely more aware of him than she'd like to admit and of course that will come into play soon. Indeed, yummy possessive Spike is my kind of Spike. Lindsey deserved what he got and I hope it pleased you he got beat to a bloody pulp, lol. Hopefully this weekend I'll be ready to post the next chappy and yes, you're right, it will be, hmmmmm, shall we say, tasty? *winks*. Than you so much for the wonderful reveiw darling, smooches.

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

When's the next chapter up!? Sorry -- very impatient, LOVE the story. Can't wait to see how the whole relocating thing is gonna work out!

Author's Response: No problem sweety, I realize I had to leave it at a cliffie point, but the next chapter should be over the weekend if all goes as planned. Oh yes, I have plans for the relocation, you can bet on it. I am very glad you enjoyed this one and thank you so much for the review. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: daisy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: Cold Shoulder

ohh your evil. cant' wait for the next chapter. soon please

Author's Response: Giggles, I am sorry, but I hope that next chapter more than makes up for it. Thanks for the great review sweetheart, hugs to you.

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