[Report This]Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:22 am Title: One Good Day
WOW. I just read the entire fic in one sitting - and I *need* more. This story is just amazing. It's so different and I can't wait to see what comes next. I have a sneaking suspicion about something that may come up, but for now, I'm just gonna sit back and watch this unfold. You've got me hooked, girl!
-Alyx
Author's Response: Oh cool - I always like reading an opinion of someone who reads it through and I am so thrilled you enjoy the setting and the story. I do hope to post soon, but I have some RL stuff on the burner this week. I hope you continue to enjoy the story hon and thanks for such a lovely review. Smooches.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: One Good Day
Always the cliff-hanger... but the sex was hot! I hope they encounter each other again. :)*
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. You can bet they'll meet up again, *winks*. Thanks for the review dalring.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:43 pm Title: One Good Day
OMG get our hearts racing just to break them. They HAVE to meed again it cant just end like that.
Author's Response: I promise it won't be the last time they meet, *winks*. I do prefer a spuffy ending myself. Thanks for the review honey, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: One Good Day
you seriously have to update again today! I need more of this story
Author's Response: LOL, I'll do my best hon, thanks. Hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: One Good Day
You are THE evilest (if thats a word) person on the planet!!!! you cant leave me like this!!!!!! I need more!! this story is like crack to me!! please put up the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Giggles, I can be pretty naughty at times, as well my muse. I'll try to post the next chappy as soon as I can hon. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: One Good Day
Well, Golleeee!!!!!
Wow that was uhm, pretty damned hot!
Okay it was scorching.
I hope Spike doesn't just leave her there, at boot camp and......
Okay, he'll be back, right? Tell me he'll be back, please!
spuf
Author's Response: LMAO, glad you enjoyed their little interlude. Nope, Spike is moving onto huis next assignment, gov't orders and all that rot. Meanwhile Buffy has to go to school for roughly four months. But of course it's not the end of the story, *winks*. THanks for the review sweets, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 07:10 pm Title: One Good Day
Wow after that hot chapter that was some ending. Gonna have to talk to Beasleysmom about what she got so riled about, sure made for a great chapter.
Author's Response: Hee hee, well, I suppose everyone has a bad day and Beasleysmom vented in a healthy way - by helping me out, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the results sweety, thanks so much for th review, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: One Good Day
Ahhh! A clifhanger! Lol. Still amazing as ever...and it just makes me want to ready the next chapter that much more! :)
Author's Response: Giggles, glad you enjoyed it sweety, thanks for the review, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: One Good Day
WHAT?!!!? why'd he leave?! ohmygodd...what's gonna happen next?! update update update!!!!
Author's Response: Well, in essence he had to - plus awkward moment. Rest assured they'll meet back up again - it's far from the end of the story. Thanks for the review hon, kisses.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 05:35 pm Title: One Good Day
Wow! I've read it several times now and the heat on those pages just doesn't lessen any!!! Your smokin girl! You threw everything in there and it all mixed together to perfection imo. Spike was so marsterful and it was wonderful to see how Buffy could let herself go. You could imagine his parting image would be burning into her retina! Please don't let her be too broken. Give her and us some hope she will hear from him soon?
Author's Response: Giggles, thankee - I was aiming for some hot monkey-love. After 9 weeks of UST, I felt they deserved, well, one good day. Wow, this was such a wonderful review, you made me blush with your compliments sweety - thank you so much. You can bet the story is far from over, *winks*.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: One Good Day
great chapter, i really hope spike's not leaving, =(
Author's Response: Thank you hon. Well, as the Army dictates... Spike has to report to where he's assigned, but it's definetely not the end of the story - I promise.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: One Good Day
Well, what a way to say Happy Graduation Buffy!! How come I have the feeling that this is not the last time our couple will have a huge fight that becomes foreplay for an animalistic coupling? After the last chapter, I wondered if the UST would finally explode. I was not disapointed. Actually, it is a little scary how what I had come up with in my head, you closely mirrored. Great, smutty minds and all.;-) I can't wait to see how you get these two back together. I think our girl might have a thing or two to say to the Sarg about how he left things...This has become my favorite story of yours and a bit of an obsession, so once again thanks for an amazing installment. Your greedy public awaits the next.
Author's Response: Oh my - you hit the nail right on the head sweety - bravo. Yes they will meet up again and yes, they will have plenty more fights as foreplay... giggles, I like writing them like this, what can I say? I'm so glad you enjoyed the chappy hon - thank you for such an awesome review, I loved it, smoochies.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: One Good Day
Thoughts? I have none at present. You made my head explode!!!
Ok; take two, with post-cigarette calmness:
Fantastic row in the first half, with some great one-liners;
Amazingly vivid and passionate second half - I could SEE the pictures crash off the wall, I could see Spike's dog tags hitting his chest as.......yeah, that's when the brain combustion-thing happened.
You do this wonderfully well. I hadn't been expecting an update for a few days yet and following a crappy start to the day I actually squealed when I saw this.
Thank you, thank you thank you!
Author's Response: Giggles, sorry about the head exploding... can I offer you a light? Tee hee - I just hope all the UST was worth the wait? I did try to go pretty vivid on this one I think because of all of Spike's fantasizing and well, Buffy just plain needed it, lol. Thank you so much for the lovely review sweety - I'm glad I could help your day start off right. Hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:56 pm Title: One Good Day
Wow, that was HOT, as I knew it would be after so much UST. She's gonna find him someday, or he her, and they'll be together and have a lot more hot sex! Update again soon, please!
Author's Response: Giggles, thanks hon. Yup, they'll meet back up, but as for more sex - well, maybe not right away, *winks*. Smooches.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: One Good Day
The A/N: "later down the road"? That sounds as if they'll meet again :) I hope Beasleysmom feels better now (mood) even if it was good for your chapter.
Oh argument! Buffy wants to know what's the what but Spike is playing the ball back into her court.
*gg* Too bad Buffy didn't hear him call her looking perfect when she said that she was fat :)
Duh.. and now Buffy coaxed the truth out of Spike (that he wants her).
Oh boy that was hot. Well Spike waited a long time for that :)
I don't think this will leave Buffy unaffected now.
I hope they'll meet again soon but with Buffy's medical school and Spike going away I guess it will take some time. It will be sure worth the wait.
Good update again :-D
Author's Response: Oh yes - they'll definetely meet up again. LOL, yeah, Beasleysmom is feeling much better. Of course her venting helped the chappy out, giggles. Thanks for the review sweetheart, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: One Good Day
oh and I don't like this "goodbye Buffy" at the end!! Fix this soon ;);)
Author's Response: LMAO - no worries, a new chapter and a different setting is in order, smooches.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: One Good Day
ugh... I'm sooooo gonna need a cold shower after this review... How do you do this, seriously how do you do this ??? I looooooved it but what else is new ? ;) And I love the fact that this sergeant/subordinate was not forgotten in the steamy sex scenes :) What can I say, I love controlling Spike, he can be so tender, sweet, cruel and rough! UPDATE SOON, give your muse some sweets but write, write, write! Thanks for this update, can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Hee hee, sorry bout the cold shower there. How do I do it? Hmmm, that is a tough question to answer. I suppose shutting my eyes and imaging the physical surroundings, the tension involved and how the personalities would best work in the given conditions. Glad you liked the sergeant/subordinate inclusion into the sex - he is a bit of a control freak huh? But it worked for her, lol. Yummy, my muse thanks you for the sweets - and I thank you for the wonderful review - smoochies.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:00 pm Title: One Good Day
OMG. I am reviewing after my second read because it was too amazing to just read once - does that make me a bit pervy!!!? Buffy's men always leave her but not Spike (well not unless it's life or death). Anyway in your notes you said something about Spuffy loving coming later so my glass is half full (unusually). I'm not sure you can top this but please please please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh wow, twice??? THat's awesome, I'm very pleased you liked it that much hon. Nope, you're not pervy, giggles. You can bet they'll meet up again and there will be more spuffy luvin, it may just take a bit to get there. Thanks for the awesome review darling, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:35 pm Title: One Good Day
Oh I love it, but I feel so sorry for Buffy they just shared something and then without talking he walks out of her life. I feel like crying for Buffy, if it was me I would go back to my bed and have a nice cry,
Author's Response: Naaaaaah, Buffy is a tough girl in this one - I think you'll like where I go next with this, *winks*. THanks for the review, hugs and kisses.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:24 pm Title: One Good Day
Well! Please excuse the pun, but this ' Drill' Sergeant has screwed Buffy every which way. On the chair, on the desk, in her mind, in her heart. Finally - yes finally - they come together, and his idea of post-coital bliss is "Goodbye ...."
Her Army training? The physical overload, the mental pressure, the pain thresholds ...... all a piece of cake.
This man, Spike? Nightmare. Dream, nightmare, whatever. He commands her every waking moment and now, he has throroughly invaded her. Mind and most definitely body. Then Adios. If she wasn't angry before, then now she'll be beyond the fight. She'll be shattered.
He may understand the recruit. Lot to learn about women, kiddo.
Fantastic chapter. Can't wait for your update.
Author's Response: LMAO, I like the pun. As for the goodbye, he wasn't quite sure what to say, but he did have to leave and so the kiss was the only thing he could come up with at the time.
You pretty much summed it up, that he understands the recruit but not the woman. As for Buffy, well, she's a tough girl, she just may surprise you, *winks*. Thanks for the lovely review darling, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 12:40 pm Title: One Good Day
ok, first of all I'm still fanning myself, congratulations!
and then, please tell me they'll meet again.
this story is too good for you to leave it like this; I'm not sure if the plot was to arrive at this unforgettable shag of the century: but you can't possibly want to leave us with a non-spuffy ending!
pretty please :D
can't wait for the next upadate and TE's new chapter ;-)
keep them coming :P
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks honey - glad I could deliver. Yes, they'll meet again, and I do hope you like what I have planned for them. They'll be on a slightly more level playing field this time, *winks*. Thanks for the lovely review hon, hugs.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 11:59 am Title: One Good Day
Great build up! The heated argument was awesome and so hot. Especially liked his 5 word summary as to what he was doing... hee hee. Go Buffy for not holding back and really letting him have it.
And you covered everything -- 3/4 way through I was thinking, "I wish he'd push her against the desk and take her"... and then, couple lines later, yep there it was ;-)
I can't believe he left like that!! She should hunt him down.. "One Better Night"... that'd be a good next chapter! Post soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the argument - I really felt it would serve as the perfect catalyst to an explosion of sexual heat, giggles. The 5 words or less line - one of my favs from the show. LOL, glad I could deliver what you were hoping for - desktop hardcore sex. Well, I think, for their next meeting - you'll like how she takes her revenge, hee hee hee. Thanks for the reivedw sweetheart - smoochies.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 11:53 am Title: One Good Day
Wow... enjoyed. But what Buffy must think. Great Sex and then .. Bye and walk out the door. Girls gotta think she has been used.. ever so much!!
Author's Response: Oh yeah - and just think, he left her with a right mess to clean up too, lol. Well, he did give her a gentle kiss and said goodbye - and there's a reason for it, but as always, the road with them is never an easy one. I'm glad you enjoyed the wrap up to boot camp sweety, thanks so much for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 11:47 am Title: One Good Day
Yeah, the new one´s here. Finally. This was such a nice ending. And I´m that curious when and how they´ll meet again. She pushed him very far and then he had to show her how much he wanted her, already wants her. But they do not have the chance to talk about their feelings and what they think so the reunion will be an awkward thing.
Loved it and want the next one as fast as possible and btw: you do not have to pay for my thoughts. *gg*
Love ya and smooch. Caro
Author's Response: Oh yeah - the reunion... let's just say it won't be roses and professing of love. Hee hee, I'm going evil again. Awwww, I love your thoughts sweety - always a real pleasure to read your review - thank you. Smoochies to you my friend.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 10:38 am Title: One Good Day
GAH!!! Loved it! Can't wait to see how they end up together again!
Author's Response: LOL, thanks hon. I think you just may like my plans for their next meeting, *winks*.
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