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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2011 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Hehe...Scottish market!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

I don't think the characters are acting naturally in this one. If someone would have jumped me like B did, I would retaliate and not feel guilty afterwards. And why the hell did B jump him like that anyway? As if he'd hurt her really bad, which as far as the story has gone thus far, he hadn't.
Actually they are both acting as if they had gotten hurt really bad some time in the past. But you haven't disclosed anything of the like so far. Maybe it's coming. If not, then their animosity is really over the top.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Ooh, love the update!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: Taylor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

more please!! loved it!!!

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

lovely lovely lovely!!! cant wait 4 more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Spike should make up his mind on whether he hates her or not. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Okay, now you have built suspence long enough - what exactly is the history between Buffy and Spike?! Come on, I can't take this any longer. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2007 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Seems as if both of them a hurting... And Spike was caught. I bet he didn't think that the truth would come out so soon. Too bad for him he didn't knew that Buffy knew and lied again.
*g* And the attraction is vice versa :) Good for later because I think it will take some time for them to get together.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2007 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

good update

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Hey,
I'm really glad you updated... Good chapter with a drunk Spike!!!!

Keep on writing and posting!!!

Reviewer: peroxide_dreams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Great chapter! just found ths fic and I love it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Oh, it’s you

Enjoyed..

I think I read you had a baby... Glad you had a litle time to give us a new chapter.

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