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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

Yay update! That was an intense chapter! I wasn't expecting such a terrible fight, maybe some awkward tension, but not a fight. Sure hope it gets better for them from her on out.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

SO glad to see the update! I hope Cordy sets these two straight. Wonder what Angel will think when he finds out A) that S/B were together before B) that they're still hung up on each other.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

Enjoyed the update! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

Ah these two. Sounds as if they need a counselor (arbiter) to talk (things out) without hurting one another.

Reviewer: Duchess Michelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

I really like this story. I'm glad you updated it. I'm very interested in seeing where you take this too. I really hope that they get together, but I like that they're not together yet. The angst is well written and it definitely makes me want to read more to find out how they make amends. Oh, btw, if you need a beta I'd be glad to help you out with glancing over stuff before you post it, just to check for grammatical errors or whatever. I know that I sometimes miss those when I'm editing my own stuff. Its just a thought though. =) Can't wait to read more of this one.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

Almost everything is out... and they do have a way of twisting words.. into hateful and hurtful words.. Sad..
At least Spike has apoligized.. Now for Buffy... my hope she is there when she said ... beautiful..

Hope what has been keeping you and the muse from posting has take that turn for the better.. prefer not waiting another 6 months for an update..

Enjoyed but sad..

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 11:19 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

Poor Spike , one terrible mistake and she's making him sweat for it for years.i think he;s apologized enoughfor it , she should let him off the hook so they can get to the spuffy lovin. Great story.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

These two just can't seem to get it right. It's painful but beautifully written. They really do mean well, so I know it's going to end up with a final heart to heart that clears the air and shows how much they care. I hope.

Reviewer: laur- Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

WOW Buffy really does have a bitch switch lol...there was nothing wrong with what spilke said lol he gave her a compliment and she turned it all around to something it wasnt....he is right she has to let it go how many times does he have to apologize and explain......and he is not an asshole he is just telling her what he is feeling and he shouldnt have to keep beating himself up over it he knows he was wrong she needs to stop throwing it in his face and let it go he is trying now she needs to as well :)

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 16 - It all ends here

I was looking at this story in my favorites yesterday and missing your updates. I'm so happy to see this one! I'm glad he was able to apologize for his behavior for the present and the past however abrupt the apology may have been. I'll be looking forward to seeing her reaction. I'm hoping you'll have another update for us again soon! Thanks again for this one!

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