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Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely love it. There is no messing around with you girl, you just go *bang* right into the action (hehe action... I'm so immature :P). I love Angel's jealousy and pettyness, in which I always like to see with the Angel/Buffy/Spike love triangles. I'd like to see how you get Spike out this, I just hope you didn't let him off too easy (yeah I'm late with my readings lol) xx

Author's Response: Yes I like seeing Spike squirm too. Thankyou for giving this one a try Cate.

Reviewer: wilywiccan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

I remember being so disgusted that Spike did it with Harmony when he got his body back. Ugh. After he had been with Buffy, after Buffy said those three magical words. Even if he was thinking of Buffy while he was doing it. I can't imagine being Buffy and walking in on that.

Author's Response: I agree. I can't really explain that bit of insanity either as you've probably gathered from my fic.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

I saw you use the other name at the BSV; yesterday I saw your update and thought it was time to catch up with his story :)
Uh-huh... no wonder Buffy was pissed off. But at last she was in time before things got too far. If not for Lorne Buffy would have run again... stupid Spike, groveling is indeed in order now. Angel won't help them, more the contrary. (Dawn helpded too I see.)
Spike talked to her! And so far he isn't dust and his nose is well :)

Author's Response: Cordykitten - you are so sweet reviewing all my chapters. Am feeling all mellow and wanted now.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

YOU FIXED THE SPACING , GREAT I JUST FINISHED REREADING IT CAUSE I LIKE IT SO MUCH . YOUR STORY IS GOOD KIDDO NO NEED TO DRINK , ALTHOUGH I COULD HAVE ONE MYSELF,LOL, .I'LL BE CHECKING FOR UPDATES

Author's Response: Thanks Jo, promise to lay off the booze from now on (hides gin and tonic)

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Author's Response: Thanks Dee, I never knew what a kick it is to have someone read and respond. No wonder so many authors beg for reviews.

Reviewer: L Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

hmmm, like

Author's Response: Mmmm, Thankyou

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

well, she said that she was having problems with the spacing. I would be more interested to read if that gets fixed, i think it's a good idea.

Author's Response: Hi Sara, saved it as mac for word and pasted it again so all better now. Would appreciate it if you gave it another read

Reviewer: Gremlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I would like to give you a review but I couldnt read the story.
The wall of text kills the desire do read it.

So add some paragrafs, some spacing and so on. Cause if you dont have those things and simply have a wall of text your story will go unnoticed by many.

Author's Response: dear Gremlin please try again have fixed it now

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Boy does he have some groveling to do . It's a good story , write some more and i promise to read it and don't treat angel to nicely , i hate him.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo, you are my first ever reviewer - and thanks for even managing to read it in the first place. Will post more chapters soon - just need a stiff drink first.

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