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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 11:33 am Title: chapter 3

Ah they got split? Not only Buffy and Spike, all hybrids are separated now? I hope Dawn being away is far enough not to be affected. *phew* Spike isn't taking sides with Angelus, he's on Buffy and William's side. And the slayer. Hopefully they can take Angelus down.

Author's Response: yes poor dawn - wouldn't it have been awful if she'd been in the building!

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:05 am Title: chapter 3

What an inventive story line! Looking forward to the Key side of Dawn making an appearance. Since there was no human side to her before the Key, what's left when the Key is removed? Puzzles, puzzles... can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: Hello Joan and thankyou Yes you're right about Dawn ... and yet. All will be revealed eventually. My world, my rules (which loosely means that you may have to suspend your disbelief quite a lot). Hope you enjoy though.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:35 am Title: chapter 3

great start, can't wait to see how this gets fixed

Author's Response: Thanks daydreamer - you're not the only one! Hope I can live up to your expectations.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:45 am Title: chapter 3

That was a great chapter. Hybrids split in half? Very inventive.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Dee, am going to see just how many hybrids I can shove into the story before I'm done. Suggestions?

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: chapter 3

Love the story. I can't believe that they were all split. What in the world happened to the 'slayer' and where is Dawn. Love Spike and William sticking by Buffy. Angelous just never learned. He always had to go after the unattainable.

Author's Response: The Slayer will be back very soon, and Dawn? well you'll just have to wait and see. I've always believed that Spike's demon must have loved Buffy - otherwise why go through so much for her?

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:13 pm Title: chapter 3

Interesting development , very interesting , keep going i'm here waiting.

Author's Response: Hi Jo, my new best friend! You'll have to wait a few days for the next chapter, but I promise It'll be soon. It's hard without a Beta to know what's ok and what's not and if I miss closing any gaping holes in the plot then I'll have a hard time explaining myself to eagle eyed readers later.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:00 pm Title: chapter 3

I'm definitely enjoying your story thus far.

Walking in on Spike and Harmony was novel and brilliantly done. The comparitive maturity they have both shown thereafter is also refreshing.

As for the most recent developments: you most certainly have me intrigued. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Took ages to think of the best way for them to first meet and then I realised that I could use Spike's moment of lunacy with Harmony to get the ball rolling. Didn't want hearts and flowers from the off or lots of angst and does he/she really love me, at least not for long anyway. Hope I can sustain your interest with the rest of the story.

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