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Reviewer: Cate Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

lol must have been awkward.... you know in a really hot kinda way lol. So sweet, even the feral coupling in it's own way :P

Author's Response: My first sex scenes - my Mum would be so proud (Not).

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Funny that Demon kept the clothes, and Slayer popped out naked. And with the reverse for the "human" counterparts, the four are truly yin and yang.

I can believe that Buffy's feeling possessive and worried she'll lose William. And acting impulsively is very much a Buffy trait. She had to do something as clear as day, or they'd still be going round in circles and not getting anywhere, since William was just trying not to piss her off.

Wonder where Liam is stashed? And where have Wes, Gunn, and Lorne blockaded themselves? Oh, and is Harmony now dead?

Author's Response: Liam is coming up soon and its not a pretty sight. Thank you for your review it is very much appreciated

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Mmmh the old Spike being two persons now to deal with is hard for Buffy to do now (I hope she'll do better when they are all back in their own bodies).
Wow, in a way she does because the slayer is part of Buffy. And this Slayer claimed her demon :) What make Buffy jealous. She forgot that she was jealous of herself! But maybe that will sink in later. ;-)
At last for now it lead to Buffy claiming her William.

Author's Response: Onward gentle reader!

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Slayer and Spike's demon being drawn to each other is really a great way of showing that Buffy and Spike really truly love each other. I loved the way you described their mating. Human-Buffy's possessive words in the end seemed a little too much, though. I didn't feel it was really logical. An exasperated tirade about the skanky Slayer or seducting William would've felt more real. Then again, maybe her actions were meant to be seductive? I felt it was more passionate and possessive and those are not the things I'd expect from Buffy's human side. But then again there hasn't been much time to get the whole picture of this character.

Wow, I guess my thoughts started flowing a bit too far. :) In short, loved it & expecting more!

Author's Response: Dear Ella I'm glad that you like the Slayer/Spike interaction and that you're enjoying it so far. Don't worry about putting all your thoughts down, they've actually been very helpful. I think that I did end that chapter a bit too quickly. I'll try to explain Buffy's mindset better in the next chapter.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 5

WOW, can you say that the Slayer wanted her man. Now what in the world does Buffy think she can do? Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my rather assertive Slayer, and Buffy? well she's in a bit of a spot now I agree. It will all be alright eventually I promise (can't stand miserable endings). Thanks for coming back to review. I may not be getting many responses but the ones I've had have more than made up for it.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, you did great for your fist smut and I am enjoying your first fic. The Slayer is some come of predator!

Author's Response: Shades of Beer Bad Buffy I know but the Slayer certainly isn't shy about getting her man. I'm glad people realised that If she'd wanted Spike dead she wouldn't have tugged him onto the floor first! Thank you Dee

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

You certainly needn't panic: I loved the chapter.

Buffy's rejection was heart-wrenching. Little details really got to me, for example Spike doing up her last button.

As regards Spike and the Slayer, well it was primal and passionate, just as it should be!

Author's Response: tis-kit you do my ego so much good when you review and quote little bits back to me. Thank you so much. I'm glad you caught Spike's feelings of rejection in such a short description. I wanted his actions to speak for him rather than put thoughts in his head. Please stick with my story, I'm writing this for you as much as for myself.

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