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Reviewer: Amanda Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow. Just read it all. Very good so far. At first read of the summary it sounded a bit...dull. And it wasn't until I heard the whole Buffy/William/Slayer/Spike thing did I decide I would give it a read. And I'm not disappointed. I love the slayer aspect...very unexpected. And I love how you describe the slayer and the demon, and how they look. Nice.

And I was wondering when Dawn would come up. I had a feeling early on that she was going to end up being in the building too.

Well... I know it's been a while since you updated but here's to hoping that you do soon.


Author's Response: Well I finally have updated, and sorry to leave you hanging like that. You're right about the summary I'll try to make it a bit more appealing next time round.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 8

Uh oh...that's not good at all. What's gonna happen next? Can't wait to find out! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks Secretguest. Sorry for the delay.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 8

I knew something was going to happen to Dawn, she can never keep out of trouble. Thank-you for the awesome story so far and the much anticipated update.

Author's Response: That my updates could be much anticipated by anyone gives me a warm glow - thanks B

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 8

This update was definitely worth the wait, I loved the new plot twists you've introduced. Your take on Angel's soul is so unique... what a great piece of storytelling! Spike's interaction with the Slayer was fun, the duster skiing was such cute moment between the two. :D Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Am glad you like the skiing Slayer bit. I like her having fun rather than being Ms. Ferocious all the time, a person in her own right rather than just the dark side of Buffy. promise I'll be quicker with my updates in future too.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

great chapter

Author's Response: thanks golddrake

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

Duh.. I meant dead not dad in my review. This just didn't make sense right now *gg*
Yes, you are; you updated now (forgiven).
Oh what a twist with Angelus' first soul he was cursed with! Didn't expect that; yet if gives the 'soulmates' a very new meaning.
Wow, and you're good for surprises indeed. There I was happy that William felt better already, things seemed to be a bit 'lighter' and another turn! If Dawn is stuck there... oh my, they'll better start now finding her.
And yes, loved the update :)

Author's Response: Thanks Cordykitten - and see i'm even responding while you're still online to try and make up for not thanking you last time. Glad you like twists - was waiting for reviewers to start shouting at me. Thanks for Friendy thing too. Now all I need is an LJ worth reading.

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