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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 12:35 am Title: Trouble, Again

Excellent job showing the not very slow at all fracturing of the old gang. Xander's headed off hoping for a suicide mission, Willow's disappeared and Giles has become Big Shot Global Power Broker Guy. Buffy's become redundant and has way too much time to brood. You know if Buffy is feeling nostalgic for Andrew's breathless patter, there's something very wrong going on.

This was excellent: Xander still exchanged passive aggressive emails with her from time to time, occasionally laced with empty threats to “hook up next Spring in Paris or something.” I love that Buffy looks at promises to visit as empty threats. They're all emotionally distant and disinterested. It's fascinating.

Author's Response: "...the not very slow at all fracturing of the old gang." You know, while I was rewriting I was very tempted to change the title of Chapter 1 from "Trouble, Again" to "Fallout." That's sort of how I see it. Sunny-D was the big bomb that went of and all of the Scoobs are suffering from some sort of aftershock poisoning. One thing from the S8 comics that I found unbelievable was how flippantly they treated this event in their lives. Sunny-D was their anchor and their home... and it went all kabloowie!

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Date: 01/12/2010 - 04:30 am Title: Trouble, Again

SO glad I started this story. It's very well written and the characters and spot on. Wonder what Dawn is up to nowadays.

Author's Response: Cheers! Dawn arrives in style, eventually.....

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2010 - 12:43 am Title: Trouble, Again

Erm...Where is the story?

Author's Response: I buggered something up while posting, but all current chapters should be up now. (Explanation in member news).

Reviewer: Júlia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2010 - 10:00 pm Title: Trouble, Again



Author's Response: Yeah, I know, heh heh. There were some screwups on my part trying to post. Everything is fixed now.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Trouble, Again

OMG! It's like they've all lost sight of who they where and what they wanted to become... and it's written in such a magnificent way it's scary!

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: Trouble, Again

Ok, I love that you banished Kennedy to the Russian Steppes. Fine place for her.

I'm intrigued by all of this, Willow's disappearance, Giles' transformation...Andrew's webpage does sound like it would inspire a "giggle-fit"!

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confindence jnharrow! Yeah, for me it was either the Steppes and the middle of the Sahara desert I really didn't much like that brat., lol.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 02:42 am Title: Trouble, Again

Such a dark world it is. And the idea of Willow and the whole Katrina catastrophe. I can only wonder. So much room for change. How I do love the darkness.

Author's Response: Thanks BuffyRat. I love it too. It's gonna be nice 'n' dark in this story for awhile!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 01:20 pm Title: Trouble, Again

How did you know I longed for a darker, more adult Buffy? Seriously, this is BtVS all grown up and walking on the truly dark side. I love it.

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: Trouble, Again

Very much like how you picture Willow and Xander and their descent, into what at this point, I am not sure - but you have certainly given us a great place to speculate from - wonder contrast of Willow and Xander on a downward track vs Giles on an upward track, both however seemingly not to an enviable position. Like you voice of Buffy - seems like a real move toward a more mature woman.



Author's Response: Thanks nmcil! Actually, please read on. Xander and Willow may not have been as easily disposed of as you think!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:03 am Title: Trouble, Again

I noticed that not many were leaving reviews, and I decided that instead of saving my reviews until I read all that you had written since I had just discovered this fic I would review each chapter. This was very interesting plot development. The disintegration of the Scoobies is very real. I love how you made Willow maybe the cause of the hurricane Katrina. Very, very interesting. Also, what is going on with Giles? I look forward to finding out.

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