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Reviewer: LittleMarshmallows Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 01:50 am Title: What the...?

Wow! Im loving this story so much that I had to tear myself away to give you a standing ovation. Brilliant writing style; descriptive yet gripping, choppy & slick. The style makes the story easy to get absorbed in, and very visceral. The plot (as its beginning to develop) seems exciting, original & well plotted. I love what you've done with the characters, & how you've written Buffy's inner dialogue. So far this looks like its a Spuffy unlike any other. I want to devour the whole fic in one sitting! Brilliant story so far - thank you for the entertainment :D

Author's Response: Dear LittleMarshmallows, Thanks so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you were able to stop and leave one (and if you ever feel compelled to do so again, that would be much appreciated, too!). And of course you're welcome. I love these characters very much, and it was fun working and playing with them for a while. Cheers - Lostboy

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 09:54 pm Title: What the...?

What a vivid, brutal fight. The tension was palpable and Buffy was already taking a beating when the slayer came on the scene. I like how quickly you established the new player as an enemy with The leering young face betrayed her intentions with a sinister clarity.

This vivid description is breathtaking: There was something frighteningly painless about it all. The monster did not jerk or growl or thrash her from side to side. Rather, he made subtle, almost tender adjustments to her writhing form, keeping the pressure to a slow, even crescendo as he murdered her. She felt her windpipe gently bend and squeeze shut, felt the strength drain out of her like cool sand. Buffy was in serious trouble until the strange superhero arrived and took both enemies out.

Buffy's pissiness in the face of her savior was in character and amusing. She's sore and a sore loser and she's used to being the hero of the piece. I loved her cockiness here: If only she had a little time with one of them; time to break them, grind out truth. Hmm, how quickly she forgets that if she'd had a little more time with these two foes she'd be well and truly dead!

Buffy's conclusion jumping about who sent the assassins makes sad sense. Giles sent her on that mission. That slayer is one of his wards. Let's see the old man explain his way out of this.

I'd remembered this story was wildly entertaining and I'm delighted to find it just as wonderful in the re-read!

Author's Response: "Buffy's pissiness in the face of her savior was in character and amusing. She's sore and a sore loser and she's used to being the hero of the piece. I loved her cockiness here..." Yes! Yes!! That's exactly what I was driving at.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:18 am Title: What the...?

Seriously got the chills!

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: What the...?

"She had a pleasant thought about poking something pointy into it." hehe

“Okay,” she said. “I give up. Exactly what the fuck are you supposed to be?” Typical Buffy gratitude, heh.

"His mark was there, the lacy Oxford signature unmistakable on her death warrant." Hmm what has Giles given Buffy to do?

Reviewer: Stacie B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: What the...?

Wow! i am sooo enjoying this fic, the writting is fantastic! And the plot is obniously gonig to be in depth and exciting! I know its a good fic when Spike hasnt made an official apperance and im still reading! love it!

Author's Response: Thanks Stacie! So glad you're hanging in there, lol. The S-man's right around the corner... but so glad you're digging it, anyway!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 02:54 am Title: What the...?

Well, that was a few fun and random scenarios. A slayer after her blood and a demon trained like a slayer. Can't say I blame her for being annoyed. Hope they find the bottom to this.

Author's Response: This was a fun fight to write for me. She's still the Slayer deep down, all angsty and fighty. I think that's why I love her, lol.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:21 am Title: What the...?

Very mysterious! Very interesting! Slayer assasins, slayer monster assasins. Creepy Giles.

I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 01:12 am Title: What the...?

sounds mysterious! LOL really like it, cant wait for more

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 01:05 am Title: What the...?

This is great stuff. I can't wait to find out what's up with Spike here. Is it a disguise or has he been fundamentally altered?

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. The answer comes in Chapter 5. I hope you can stick with me through!

Reviewer: Susie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 12:42 am Title: What the...?

Interesting start--so what happens next? Looking forward to it.

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