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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 11:41 pm Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Armani and a Rolex? Here I thought Buffy was just joking about Giles being Big Shot Global Power Broker Guy! You drive that point home beautifully with Giles firing up his network. This man is a far cry from the watcher who once called a computer an infernal machine.

I enjoyed Riley mucking up Giles' well laid plans so spectacularly. The kidnapping was fast paced and exciting and the idea of Giles knocked out in the trunk of a car is extremely satisfying. I think Riley deserves that hug.

This was vivid and intriguing: It was just a moment, a blink-and-you-miss it kind of thing. But it happened. Target taps his ear and the girl looks straight at him. Bang. Her eyes flash, like a miniature sun rolled up behind the curve of her corneas. If he didn’t know any better he’d have thought she was taking the old man’s picture. Shit, maybe she was. The flashing eyes are creepy and Riley's aside about the picture gave me pause. The advanced technology in this story is fascinating.

Author's Response: BP, this chapter is still something I groan over, because I feel like I rushed to post when I should have just combined it with the next chapter. It's probably the shortest chapter in the story, and I'll bet I bled a lot of readers with it. I'm glad you found some things to like about it.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Riley? Oh God, I seriously hope I can stop reading at some point to get some much-needed sleep... but I doubt it! *bites nails*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 03:02 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Riley capturing Giles to save "her." Well there could be a lot of things going on there. I am truly entrigued.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews, BuffyRat! Riley - not my favorite character by a long shot, but got a kick out of writing his army antics.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 07:56 pm Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Wow, this story is really something special! Giles is fascinating here. Great expansion of his season 7 persona; this makes total sense to me.

And I *so* did not see Riley coming!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:13 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Okay, this I did not see coming. Riley was the second phone call. Riley to the rescue? At least you made it fun. And mammajama! I have not heard that in a long time. Love Riley getting the drop on Giles. And what is up with slayers eyes glazing over? What in the HEdoublehockeysticks has Giles been up to???


Author's Response: Haha, thanks! It's funny; Riley was never one of my favorite characters on the show, but I thought I'd give him his due. It was fun trying to internalize him and come up with a believeable voice.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 10:03 pm Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

well I have been enjoying this story but this last chapter left me cold. Didn't understand a word of it. You should have put subtitles with it for the only English speakers among us. I am guessing Giles has been kidnapped by Riley to somehow protect Buffy ???

Author's Response: That's true! Riley was the 2nd phone call., and has come to help BUffy. Sorry if the patter wasn't international enough!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 07:58 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

I love a good journey and this looks to be a heck of a ride!Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Its going to be a long road, yeah. I just couldn't Imagine them getting together easily, given all that had happened. I hope you can stick it out with me.. Thanks for the vot of confidence! It really helps me write.

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