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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 - 12:27 am Title: Nicked

The fight was beautifully choreographed and I love that Buffy is dressed in nothing but a nightgown. Spike getting to play hero, again, was breath taking and the fight was vividly drawn and exciting. I enjoyed the mad dash to freedom and the slayers' dogged pursuit. Spike's plan seemed do-able until that grenade.

Spike gets to play the hero some more. It's fantastic.

After all the fighting and running and Spike blowing himself up, you switched gears beautifully with Andrew. This made me laugh with relief: The dog just made a little grrrr sound through it’s teeth, which was enough to make Spock and Bones hop up onto the kitchen counter and start hissing like a couple of big babies. Babies who hiss. And are cats. Spock and Bones are the best cat names ever!

Andrew being cued in on the action but not understanding a bit of what he's seeing was also entertaining. Mr. Old Hand Man was being pretty cryptic in his silent storytelling.

Spike making robot noises and calling Buffy Human made me laugh out loud. Beep. Boop. Hilarious!

Author's Response: "Spock and Bones are the best cat names ever!" I almost... ALMOST... went with Mulder and Scully. Almost! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:39 am Title: Nicked

Will she realize it's Spike? and what's happened to him? And why is Giles showing the sits. to Andrew of all people? Or wasn't it Giles and his touching something behind his ear?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 04:11 am Title: Nicked

Well that is a bit of interesting, too. All things seem to be coming back together, well, people at least. And and opposing army of slayers? Could that be? Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yeah, the gang can't stay away from each other for long... try though they might, lol! As for the enemy slayers...well, yeah. That part's a bit obvious, I guess ;-)

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Nicked

Wow, a lot going on! What's gotten into these slayers? Angel a Senior Partner? Things have sure changed. This is great - I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Nicked

Dramatic and intriguing, without going to far over the readers' heads. I'm immensly enjoying this fic.

Reviewer: Nancy-Pancy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: Nicked

Angel is behind this? OK--you have to update soon and give us all the dirt! Exciting start--looks very promising.

Author's Response: You know, you really helped me, Nancy. Before you wrote me, I didn;t realize that a certain sentence was coming off that way. I actually revised "Red Falcon" now so it;s clearer. Angel informed Spike about the Slayer uprising, but he's not behind it.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: Nicked

Brilliant first few chapters. Really intense and interesting. This has big potential hope you can keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm rounding chapter 10 at the moment... just want to polish the next few up before I post them.

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