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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2010 - 12:12 am Title: Enemies, Closer

A paralyzed Buffy at the mercy of Kennedy and Nurse Nancy the creepy albino painted a scary picture and you made it more frightening with the experimentation. Buffy slipping into her Spike comfort zone did little to alleviate the tension. The juxtaposition of mentally playing doctor while she's really getting poked and prodded was surreal.

Kennedy's on a power trip of epic proportions and her well oiled military machine is going to be tough to topple. It's a good thing Buffy and the gang work well under pressure.

i love this visceral description: The rage subsided slowly, yielding to the prickly sanity of dread. You could feel Spike's anguish in that line.



Author's Response: Thanks BP. "Well oiled military machine" is a great little phrase, too. I smell good snark-bait there...

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:46 pm Title: Enemies, Closer

Oh, Kennedy makes a good villain. After all, everyone loves to hate her anyway.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 04:27 am Title: Enemies, Closer

Again, the fate of the world rests on Andrew's shoulders... or maybe now for the first time... Hard to tell with all his stories. An irony indeed.

Author's Response: lol. Andrew cracks me up. =) Thanks!

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