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Reviewer: survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 01:15 am Title: Lost and Found

What a satisfying and utterly funny ending to this amazing chapter! I missed the cleverness of this story, thanks for posting! I can't wait to see how the reunion will go...

Author's Response: Thanks survenante! Really jazzed that you liked this one. Still not exactly "puppies and rainbows," but at least they're all together, right?

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 - 03:16 pm Title: Lost and Found

That was delightful. The image of the pulsating horror of Melvin racing to safety with Spike and Andrew as riders was both exciting and hilarious. Melvin's surfer speak is charmingly incongruous, and everyone heaving at the sight of him makes me laugh. Poor thing.

Buffy channeling Nancy is a strange new development. I loved the detail in Buffy gathering her outfit, and this line was wonderfully in character and girly: "A wool military topcoat completed the outfit, and Buffy grunted as she belted it snugly to her waist. She ignored a sudden, embarrassing urge to locate a mirror."

This was another exciting, well written chapter. The reunion at the end was an excellent place to leave it, and Melvin's last line made me laugh out loud. There won't be much time for accusations and arguments with Kennedy on the horizon and Dawn's gadget in play. I'm looking forward to what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks again, BP!! LOL, yeah I was hoping that scene would work for people. Spike's not exactly Prince Charming galloping in on his white steed, but in this world I guess its close enough ;-P And so glad you picked up on Buffy's little Nancy incident. I liked imagining her climbing into an old Soviet army getup too. Costume changes = lotsa fun.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 - 03:30 am Title: Lost and Found

"...like a pile of melted grasshoppers."-- Need I say more, and do I want to know why you have any concept as to what melted grasshoppers are like. Is it even possible to melt grasshoppers? Okay, I digress, another wonderful chapter. Your Goo Demon is rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters, not to mention the way he's so sarcastic he makes Spike seem totally sincere. And the whole comedic reunion at the end was totally priceless. So glad there was an update today and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks BuffyRat! I hear they're actually a delicacy in certain parts of the world that I will never, ever visit... ;-) But seriously, thanks for the great compliment. Mel is becoming one of my favorite characters to write, too, so I'm relieved that some people actually like him.

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Lost and Found

This is the best chapter yet! Evil, evil Kennedy... lots of action... an hysterical ending (seriously ROFL) ... and now our heroes are together. Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks Joan!!!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Lost and Found

I LOVE THIS! I hope you write some more stuff for me to read when you are done with this!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Toni! I actually have a couple of short items in the cooker alongside Clocks... I'll definetly post 'em here when they're done.

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