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Reviewer: Lynnette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2010 - 04:32 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

HEE HEE. I knew it! Excited for the Spike talk and reactions. OH, also loving the interactions between Andrew and Melvin. Hi-larious.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynette! It's been fun to write about these characters.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2010 - 02:28 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

It would seem that something is happening with this story. Editing a chapter... possibly a new one. Haven't forgotten, though it has been like 1.5 years... Still not opposed to more of this story. I kinda miss Mel. Just letting you know people are still out here. :)

Author's Response: I don't know why the site acted like I updated. I was just erasing the old chapters while I figured out how to reformat them. It's just difficult to do here. I have two new chapters done, though, and I've rededicated myself to the story with a (perhaps foolish) New Years rez.

Author's Response: Two new chapters coming today BR. I've just been struggling with getting everything re-formatted and posted. I've sort of rewritten the whole story (no plot changes, though - the changes are more or less cosmetic).

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2007 - 02:39 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

Yes! YES! YES!!! For Buffy seeing the light and the two of them kissing! Now can Kennedy PLEASE drop dead???

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Date: 11/18/2007 - 01:13 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

Okay... so Spike just forgives her for fucking someone he despised more than Angel just six months after he was supposedly dead? I don;'t know about you but that screams to me that she didn't love him.

I love Spuffy but in the ones where she's already fucked the Immortal and everythings hunky dorey with Spike and Buffy... i dunno... if he didn't believe her before why would he would be believe her now.

Author's Response: DoWner, thanks for taking the time to review. I guess I just think forgiveness is an addiction in a creature like Spike.... he used to eat people, after all! I see your point in general, but I don't believe screwing the Immortal counts as an unforgivable crime. Was this chapter really coming off as hunky-dorey Spuffy? Dang, you're tough! Sounds like I have to pull out the old torture rack and string these two up again ;-)

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

Brilliant writing. Wonderful scene with Spike and Buffy on the cliff and such a sweet ending to it. I hope you'll update this again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews. Really made me blush! XOXO

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

ooh very intense and scary, please don't leave us hanging too long

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 03:01 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

This was another exciting, vividly detailed chapter. The comic relief of Melvin and Andrew softened me up for the emotionally fraught clash of Giles, Buffy and Xander. The details of Dawn's spell unspooling were bleak, and understandably left a void in Buffy that she's tried desperately to fill.

Spike's violent rejection was also vivid and heart wrenching. His soulless state is a surprise, but Buffy just accepting it and loving him still is a balm. The fight and reconciliation scene sang. I especially loved this bit: "He kissed with his entire body, a hundred muscles pleading at her like a chorus. She could feel her soul swimming in their mouths. An old door flew open, love pouring out like blood. The world fell up. " It feels like Buffy's rediscovered something to fill the empty places she's been numbing with drugs and alcohol.

Lovely imagery here: "The Immortal had outlived whole empires, floating glacially across an ocean of the Dead."

This story is a brilliant read.


Author's Response: Wow BP! What a wonderful review. I'm so fascinated by the interelationships and history of these characters, and I'm really overjoyed that there are other fans who enjoy the weird tumoil and passions there. Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 05:47 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

And still I wonder, how a supposedly soul-less creature can be so terribly distraught over losing his soul, even if it's for the greater good. Has to prove that our Spike is much more than previously thought. And no real wonder that she'd have to fight him to really bring him back into this world. And Giles attitude, and Andrew and Mel's card game... A truly marvelous chapter that's kept me up way past my bed time. Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks again for being so positive about my writing. Next chapter will be up tommorrow evening, Saturday afternoon at latest.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 01:29 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

That was a very powerful scene with Spike and Buffy. Very well done. And I liked the idea of the monks' spell disintegrating.

And now I'm very nervous for Spike and Buffy with Kennedy after them.

Author's Response: Thanks Carol. I'm glad that scene worked for you.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

I really liked this chapter, but don't like Giles much , (i didn't like him on the show either) . I hope Spike decides to let her in , now that he knows she loves with or without a soul.

Author's Response: Thanks JO. Aw, don't be so hard on the old fart... he's got his good spots :-)

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