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Date: 12/27/2007 - 02:19 am Title: Big Game

Ooooooh.... Come ooooooooon!!!

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 02:01 am Title: The Bloody Cavalry

Awwwwwwwww! And please kill nurse-Nancy, like in right now!!!
Sorry I didn't review a few of the last chapters, was too caught up in the story!

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:39 am Title: Nicked

Will she realize it's Spike? and what's happened to him? And why is Giles showing the sits. to Andrew of all people? Or wasn't it Giles and his touching something behind his ear?

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Red Falcon

Nope! sleep is not an option yet!

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Riley? Oh God, I seriously hope I can stop reading at some point to get some much-needed sleep... but I doubt it! *bites nails*

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:18 am Title: What the...?

Seriously got the chills!

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Trouble, Again

OMG! It's like they've all lost sight of who they where and what they wanted to become... and it's written in such a magnificent way it's scary!

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Date: 12/27/2007 - 12:57 am Title: Prologue

I'm sobbing... this was heartwrenchingly beautiful!

Author's Response: Awwww... Thanks!

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Date: 11/18/2007 - 01:13 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

Okay... so Spike just forgives her for fucking someone he despised more than Angel just six months after he was supposedly dead? I don;'t know about you but that screams to me that she didn't love him.

I love Spuffy but in the ones where she's already fucked the Immortal and everythings hunky dorey with Spike and Buffy... i dunno... if he didn't believe her before why would he would be believe her now.

Author's Response: DoWner, thanks for taking the time to review. I guess I just think forgiveness is an addiction in a creature like Spike.... he used to eat people, after all! I see your point in general, but I don't believe screwing the Immortal counts as an unforgivable crime. Was this chapter really coming off as hunky-dorey Spuffy? Dang, you're tough! Sounds like I have to pull out the old torture rack and string these two up again ;-)

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Date: 11/18/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: RE: Spike

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Yea..... have a chance to kill the fucking mastermind of the this weird slayer army and he doesn't take it... nope of course not... no one ever has fucking common sense... he was killing Slayers by the dozen without a thought but when he has the brains behind the army helpless, somehow he forget to kill her. I like the story but man..... you couldn't find a different way to have to her escape instead of Spike suddenly NOT killing the enemy for some strange reason?

Author's Response: Thanks DoWnEr. I guess I thought the distraction of facing Buffy unmasked was enough to give Nancy time to pull her vanishing act. Spike didn't just want to kill her either... he wanted to drink her blood, which at that moment was also Buffy's blood! Issues galore in there for the poor guy, no?

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Date: 11/18/2007 - 12:39 pm Title: The Bloody Cavalry

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Oooookay... please let this not be another one of those old cliche... "Shoulda killed the bad guy when i had the chance" scenerios where Nancy escapes..... he shoulda fucking killed her.

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Date: 08/09/2007 - 04:57 am Title: Prologue

Oh my God! Bloody gorgeous writing!!! On to the next chappie. Gotta go!

Author's Response: Thanks Victoria! Hope you like the rest of the tale.

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

Brilliant writing. Wonderful scene with Spike and Buffy on the cliff and such a sweet ending to it. I hope you'll update this again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews. Really made me blush! XOXO

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: The Bloody Cavalry

Oh yay and now she knows Spike is alive. Poor Andrew.

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: In the Land of the Blind...

"Everybody’s always knocking him out, right?” --haha nice nod to the show.

"Okay, he mused. If anybody ever asks, you t-o-o-o-tally meant to do that." Too funny. Kickass Xander...still clumsy.

“So, let me see if I have this straight: you didn’t want to take the risk of bringing any army of super-powered warriors to fight another army of super-powered warriors. So you instead decided to storm a castle with an antique rifle, and absolutely no backup whatsoever?”

“Well,” Xander muttered. “That’s not entirely true.” ---bahaha wait until Giles finds out his backup is Andrew.

Andrew rescuing Spike was hilarious. This is just getting better.









Author's Response: Thanks again jnharrow. I'm jazzed that Andrew's little rescue got a giggle!

Author's Response: Thanks again jnharrow. I'm jazzed that Andrew's little rescue got a giggle!

Author's Response: Thanks again jnharrow. I'm jazzed that Andrew's little rescue got a giggle!

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:46 pm Title: Enemies, Closer

Oh, Kennedy makes a good villain. After all, everyone loves to hate her anyway.

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: Red Falcon

Wow, ok, I have no idea what's going on, really, but I'm fascinated lol. I'm sure more will be clear in later chapters.

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: What the...?

"She had a pleasant thought about poking something pointy into it." hehe

“Okay,” she said. “I give up. Exactly what the fuck are you supposed to be?” Typical Buffy gratitude, heh.

"His mark was there, the lacy Oxford signature unmistakable on her death warrant." Hmm what has Giles given Buffy to do?

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: Trouble, Again

Ok, I love that you banished Kennedy to the Russian Steppes. Fine place for her.

I'm intrigued by all of this, Willow's disappearance, Giles' transformation...Andrew's webpage does sound like it would inspire a "giggle-fit"!

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confindence jnharrow! Yeah, for me it was either the Steppes and the middle of the Sahara desert I really didn't much like that brat., lol.

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Date: 07/24/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: Prologue

Oh...she went back for him....and breathed in his dust. Headed to the next chapter :)

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Date: 06/13/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

ooh very intense and scary, please don't leave us hanging too long

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Date: 06/12/2007 - 03:01 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

This was another exciting, vividly detailed chapter. The comic relief of Melvin and Andrew softened me up for the emotionally fraught clash of Giles, Buffy and Xander. The details of Dawn's spell unspooling were bleak, and understandably left a void in Buffy that she's tried desperately to fill.

Spike's violent rejection was also vivid and heart wrenching. His soulless state is a surprise, but Buffy just accepting it and loving him still is a balm. The fight and reconciliation scene sang. I especially loved this bit: "He kissed with his entire body, a hundred muscles pleading at her like a chorus. She could feel her soul swimming in their mouths. An old door flew open, love pouring out like blood. The world fell up. " It feels like Buffy's rediscovered something to fill the empty places she's been numbing with drugs and alcohol.

Lovely imagery here: "The Immortal had outlived whole empires, floating glacially across an ocean of the Dead."

This story is a brilliant read.


Author's Response: Wow BP! What a wonderful review. I'm so fascinated by the interelationships and history of these characters, and I'm really overjoyed that there are other fans who enjoy the weird tumoil and passions there. Thanks so much!!!

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Date: 06/12/2007 - 05:47 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

And still I wonder, how a supposedly soul-less creature can be so terribly distraught over losing his soul, even if it's for the greater good. Has to prove that our Spike is much more than previously thought. And no real wonder that she'd have to fight him to really bring him back into this world. And Giles attitude, and Andrew and Mel's card game... A truly marvelous chapter that's kept me up way past my bed time. Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks again for being so positive about my writing. Next chapter will be up tommorrow evening, Saturday afternoon at latest.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 01:29 am Title: Three Excellent Questions

That was a very powerful scene with Spike and Buffy. Very well done. And I liked the idea of the monks' spell disintegrating.

And now I'm very nervous for Spike and Buffy with Kennedy after them.

Author's Response: Thanks Carol. I'm glad that scene worked for you.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Three Excellent Questions

I really liked this chapter, but don't like Giles much , (i didn't like him on the show either) . I hope Spike decides to let her in , now that he knows she loves with or without a soul.

Author's Response: Thanks JO. Aw, don't be so hard on the old fart... he's got his good spots :-)

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