Date: 02/20/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
So Spike doesn't understand a lot of French but Buffy speaks a bit English too. I really wonder why the rooms aren't video monitored ~ especially with Buffy being Angel's new favorite. They are so sick, doing this to the girls it must be fun for them to re-watch.
This will not be easy for Spike, going through what Angel wants of him. That this is bad for Buffy (and the other girls), that is clear. I hope Angel and his men get punished. Soon and very hard :)
Date: 02/20/2007 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww Poor Spuffy! Good story!
Date: 02/20/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god , I'm so glad that Spike speaks a little french other wise Buffy would be even more distressed....Looking forward to the next chapter soon....
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
more please
Date: 02/19/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Buffy. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Buffy...I hope she gets out of there soon. Update soon please!
Date: 02/19/2007 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how she opened up and talked English to Spike.
Date: 02/19/2007 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
God i hate those sick bastards angel and Parker, you've got to get them out of there and soon . Where does Spike train her , while there in this facility?
Meanwhile ehat she gets to be raped repeatly ,especially by that disgusting animal Angel
(God i hate him).
Date: 02/19/2007 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
clever, by letting Buffy see Spike as he really is if only for a moment, it allows their relationship to develop. I was wondering how you were going to get over that hurdle. It will take her a long time to recover mentally though.
well done
Author's Response: thanks for the review:) x x x
Date: 02/19/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
i have to say that i really like this fic - Spike is obviously in such a difficult positon. You really grabbed everyone's attention with Parker's rape, its not often you see something so graphic written like that if you understand what i mean, like in this context, without spike coming to save her or something. I like the french misunderstanding etc that makes it harder for them to communicate, on top of which of course she would find him hard to trust, i can completely understand her anger and betrayal at finding he worked for the FBI and didn;t help her. but i liked the end where she asked if he'd return, good segwey into opening a connection between them. i really hope to see more soon : )
Author's Response: Thanks im glad your enjoying the story. And im glad you understand the shock factor of that scene it was meant to show just how ruthless and disgusting the situation is and i doubt im gunna use such graphic scenes in the futur of the story