I have to admit that this is already a bit darker than I usually like. I passed it over several times for that reason, scared off by your warnings. But something about it caught my eye, and here I am. Even though it is so dark, I find myself liking it. I am glad that Spike is not going to be evil in this fic. If he was, I probably couldn't handle it. The fact that he already generally cares about her helps alot. I am concerned though about how he is going to keep fooling all the evil men and still be able to do enough to help all the girls. I am looking forward to more of this.

good update

this story is great, really. fab concept behind it.

I think you should think about getting a beta to make it even better, they'll space it all out and fix the grammar, capital letters etc...

If you just ask for one down the bottom of the next chapter someone will respond, I'm sure.

Good luck : ))

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! leaving her to starve...hmmm, so i assume the guys who look after a girl have to look after her the whole time? thats good maybe they'll get more privacy. Really hope to see more soon i cant wait to see how you build up Buffy's trust in SPike.