MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! leaving her to starve...hmmm, so i assume the guys who look after a girl have to look after her the whole time? thats good maybe they'll get more privacy. Really hope to see more soon i cant wait to see how you build up Buffy's trust in SPike.

So Spike doesn't understand a lot of French but Buffy speaks a bit English too. I really wonder why the rooms aren't video monitored ~ especially with Buffy being Angel's new favorite. They are so sick, doing this to the girls it must be fun for them to re-watch.
This will not be easy for Spike, going through what Angel wants of him. That this is bad for Buffy (and the other girls), that is clear. I hope Angel and his men get punished. Soon and very hard :)

Aww Poor Spuffy! Good story!

more please

Poor Buffy...I hope she gets out of there soon. Update soon please!

God i hate those sick bastards angel and Parker, you've got to get them out of there and soon . Where does Spike train her , while there in this facility?
Meanwhile ehat she gets to be raped repeatly ,especially by that disgusting animal Angel
(God i hate him).

i have to say that i really like this fic - Spike is obviously in such a difficult positon. You really grabbed everyone's attention with Parker's rape, its not often you see something so graphic written like that if you understand what i mean, like in this context, without spike coming to save her or something. I like the french misunderstanding etc that makes it harder for them to communicate, on top of which of course she would find him hard to trust, i can completely understand her anger and betrayal at finding he worked for the FBI and didn;t help her. but i liked the end where she asked if he'd return, good segwey into opening a connection between them. i really hope to see more soon : )

Author's Response: Thanks im glad your enjoying the story. And im glad you understand the shock factor of that scene it was meant to show just how ruthless and disgusting the situation is and i doubt im gunna use such graphic scenes in the futur of the story

good update

Author's Response: thank you:D

That was a really great chapter.......very graphic but you did warn us in the beginning. i hope though that it won't be as graphic as this chapter though i don't think i could take that again. i will however continue to read this story and i hope spike rescues buffy soon.

Well, you did warn us. But, can I ask if this kind of thing is going to continue with Parker, or anyone else for that matter? I realize that some fics are rougher than others, so I do appreciate your warnings, but I'd just like to know what to expect if I decide to keep reading. Because, despite the warning, (and no argument on that--your warning was very explicit) that scene was pretty harsh. So I'd just like to know if this is a preview of what is to come or if things or what.

Author's Response: no it isnt gunna get much worse than that and im hoping that all th stuff that is going to be forced onto Buffy is going to be more implied than graphic

this just gets better and better. An horrific chapter brilliantly described

Author's Response: aw thanx :) x x

Wonder what Spike will do about it all.

Author's Response: thanks for the review

That is So not fair! lol You stopped at the best part! Why do I think Buffy is gonna be anything but obediant?



Author's Response: haha you know Buffy's character too well