Date: 03/03/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it already. They are both so cute. Especially Spike with his "not ready" too talk to her yet thing. And Dawn is his twin sister? I've never seen her as his twin before. Can't wait for more.
Date: 03/02/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh these too.. but back to the start. Sorry to see Buffy suffering. Even school (or especially school) can be like hell if you don't fit.
Having money doesn't make happy. Spike is a good example for it. He's so shy (it's cute).
I wonder what it needs for these two to get together ;-)
Loved the update
Date: 03/02/2007 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
i really feel for buffy, i hope spike can help her. loving the story!
Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 2
awww...poor buffy =(...love the story though, can't wait for more!! this is one of the better high skool fics ive read =)
Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Great work, especially the imagery with Spike's nervousness and obsession. Nice twists with Dawn as Spike's sister and Xander as Spike's best friend; that's not really atypical, at least from what I've read, and adds to the story. Thanks for writing! :D
Date: 03/02/2007 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Buffy sure doesn't have a happy life. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03/01/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 03/01/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
more more more more more! did i mention more! i can't wait to read the next chappie! please update soon? i'm looking forward to the spuffyness or if buffy comes out of her shell and starts being real buffy!
Date: 03/01/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!!!! More, more, more please !!!!! :) :) :)
Date: 03/01/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's so sad. And sweet. I also love the fact that Spike shows a lot of his WIlliam qualities in this fic. Keep it coming please! More!
Date: 03/01/2007 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
aw, i feel so bad for buffy. i hope spike talks to her soon, great emotional chapter!
Date: 03/01/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it - very cute. Can't wait to read more. So Xander likes Dawn? interesting.... not quite sure how I feel about that...not totally against it...but still...lol. But interesting idea. You could sway me.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm still trying to sway myself...lol! I'm honestly not feeling Dawn and Xander together. It's a bit weird for me, but I figured since they're both the same age here it wouldn't be as bad. It's also something that I've never done before. Thanks for reading=)
Date: 03/01/2007 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
nice chapter but comeon!!!!! i want them to start talking!!! :) NEED SPUFFY SMOOCIES! NEED SPUFFY SMOOCIES! lol