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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Part VIII

Oh that was thrilling when they did the spell but all went well :)) But why did Buffy call Spike bastard? Maybe I'd missed a thing. Looking forward to more. But then another story is coming to an end. Ah well.. I'll miss them. Good luck for your move and keep that thought (life is great) for a long while in your mind :)

Author's Response: Ha, for some very obvious reasons that everyone will understand in the next chapter.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Part VIII

So hey... I think I may have caught an itty bitty mistake...

"She felt Dawn slip her arms around her waist, and drew her youngest into a hug."

Isn't Dawn not the youngest anymore? Isn't baby Jason the youngest now? Sorry if I'm being annoying or anything... I just caught it and thought I'd mention it...

And dang! You go from really funny to tender and sweet flawlessly! Wonderful chapter! :)

Author's Response: It was supposed to have a daughter tacked on there; I fixed it, thanks. And I'm glad I've got a good balance there, though for me, those two things aren't too far apart ;)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 08:15 am Title: Part VIII

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to find out what sex the baby is. :D

Author's Response: Oh, the Big Mystery ;) lol

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 07:16 am Title: Part VIII

Why the hell is Buffy yelling at Spike?!

And why didn't they do a Cesarean, if the baby is ready to be born. It would make more sense than transferring it to Buffy now. It's just going to come right back out again!!

Author's Response: Ha, when you find, you'll go "Ooooohhhh. Of course!" lol As to your questions...who would do the Cesarean? Giles? Or *shudder* Xander? That would be a Very Bad Idea. And if they waited for the doctor, the baby could go into distress and die. There's not way for Spike to logistically have the baby himself without some serious complications and ick factors, so the only recourse is to transferr it to Buffy.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 02:53 am Title: Part VIII

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: :) Awesome!

Reviewer: . Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Part VIII

what the hell did he do?

Author's Response: Sex is all fun and games until someone gets pregnant....

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Part VIII

Twinlets is 4EVER! hehe

Author's Response: lol. Indeed!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Part VIII

Love it when Men are pregnant.. through birth though.. somehow??

Sounds like life is grand... nice to hear.

Author's Response: As much as I'd like to torture men with actually having to deal with pregnancy...I'm letting Spike off the hook for this one. And right now, my life is pretty charmed. Here's hoping that it stays that way!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:48 pm Title: Part VIII

I wonder why Buffy is made at him, more please.


Author's Response: You'd be surprised how obvious the answer is.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Part VIII

Great chapter! Loved the ending! Can't wait to read the next update!

Author's Response: haha, I'm glad. I went...prefect. Done there, next chapter! ;)

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