Jonathan was almost right.. Spike didn't like to hear the news of Drusilla being insane. ~ I wonder what Drusilla meant with 'will fill you with ashes'.
I thought first that would take place in the past but after Buffy mentioned TV I was sure it wasn't *g*.
All in all? Love the start of this one :)

Author's Response: Hey yeah jonathon was right poor kid imagine having to tell a easily tempered guy who can be known as spike or william the bloody (and not for his poetry) that his wife has gone off the deep end...I'd send him a letter let him kill the mailman....lol and anyway by the ashes thing its kind of just part of the wacky drusilla ness like in the actual show when they are vamps she always said sunshine burns you taste like ashes...well its kind of a refrence to that shes telling him that sunshine which is buffy will kill them all which doesnt mean literally kill but shes gonna change everything that shes gonna fill him with ashes cause she'll get rid of the darkness...not fully but you get what i mean...i just thought it would be an interesting part for the readers...and thanx for the review

Great start and such an original plot too! I hope you get a good beta to help you cos I think this could be very good. Please update soon.

Author's Response: yeah i am in need of a beta i suck at grammer and punctuation and thanx for the great review

interesting start. loved the description of Spike and Dru. looking forward to more
good luck with your fisrt fiction i know how hard it can be.


Author's Response: thank you everyones been great with the reviews though so it makes it easier new chapter by monday latest promise

Oh my...Angelus strikes again it seems. Update soon please! I'd really like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: lol i swear i had to laugh when i first read that and i really dont know why but yup yup...we wont focus on him all too much in the begining just a little guest appearance here and there...seriously im just happy to be portraying him as angelus and not angel omg angel is always whining or feeling sorry for himself but ya know if ya like him am sowwies ^^ stay tuned

Great start! I am anxious to read more!

Author's Response: Thanx for you suport i really was expecting some major flames Im hoping to get the second chapter up by monday the latest im going for kidnapping scene but who knows stay tuned in ^^

great story so far, you're very good with the descriptions of everything, makes it really easy to picture where they are/what they're doing etc...

one thing - it would be great if you could space out the paragraphs a bit, it would just make it heaps easier to read. (not trying to be harsh at all so please don't take this as a criticism)

really liking where this is going, hope to see more soon! : )

Author's Response: yeah Im trying to figure out how to if you could give me a little hint towards it i would love you forever it seems to hate me very much though so i havent been able to it was originally written with space marks and thanx i didnt expect to get such great reviews really so early on and yeah I always feel that describing the scenery sets some kind of a mood thanx so very much