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Reviewer: lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

So beautiful. So sad and yet so promissing. I loved every word, every chapter, everything.

Author's Response: Thank you! I like to leave the promise of hope in my stories when possible. k

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2007 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow, that was great! A very original story. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it. k

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 6

It was really Buffy visiting William. Sad to see Spike so heartbroken because of the missed opportunities know that he remembers. Then later Spike will be the only one who remembers but only think it will be dreams.
Oh I like that The pain you inflict upon each other will be like a fire to metal, make you stronger when that fire is removed. You will become a different person because of choices you will make, choices that will hurt others at the time. The person you become will be unlikely to hurt others in the future. William will cleanse his past and regain his sense of self. The best things in life come at a price.
Loved the end with the poem. And it is so open you could always write more ;-)
I enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Thanks hon. Yes it was Buffy really putting herself in William's dreams. The poem is one that always reminds me of them. K

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2007 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lovely story. Maybe there could be a sequel?

Author's Response: Thank you. I might revisit this one day but too many other plot bunnies are demanding attention right now. k

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