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Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 - 05:13 am Title: The Virus of Life

Great chapter, I just re-found the story. American History X is an amazing movie, glad to see you've found it.

Author's Response: Yes, I've seen that years ago, and loved that film the first time around. Thank you :D

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 02:43 pm Title: The Virus of Life

uhmm... now you are making me partial to harmony too? not sure i like that! lol

jk, you know. this is quite an interesting thought. while spike and buffy's tentative friendship blossoms, harmony keeps riley prisoner in a cave, and tortures him till his last drop of blood... ;P

just one thing... i'm not sure giles would have told joyce the truth. he owed it to buffy, cuz the big shit was her boyfriend and she needed to know for her own sake. but spike needs a little privacy on that 'detail', and buffy's explanation to her mother should have been enough.
clearly, this is just a personal opinion and since i dunno where are u going with your fic, maybe you did just what fit better in your story...

PS i just added this to my fave, cuz i relly love it! :D

Author's Response: Interesting, but I kind of had some of this plotted out... I'll most certainly keep it in mind though ;) And Giles, well, given their history, and other things that will come up in this fic... I needed Joyce to know that "normal" isn't always healthy (or at least, what is perceived as normal). Thank you ever so much for reviewing :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 01:57 pm Title: The Virus of Life

oh riley has some nerve showing up at buffy's house, especially considering the fact that not only did he rape spike but got sucked off by some vamp. ewww...i just....he really needs to be kicked in the balls....lots of times. anyway, great job. loved it lots and lots. more soon.

Author's Response: I totally agree blodiebear. I will have to do something about that... And Riley doesn't view raping Spike as wrong, because Spike isn't real, isn't human, is nothing... etc. Riley's a raping moron. Thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 01:23 pm Title: The Virus of Life

lovin this story-really good. A+++++

Author's Response: Wow- that is truly a first. Thank you profusely :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 11:36 am Title: The Virus of Life

The start was very hard to read for me. I wanted to know first where this is heading before I rally start reading. I'm glad about Buffy's reaction to what Riley did. (Giles being helpful too.) ~ What a coincidence for Dawn just to watch this film. She seems to be suspicious what happened to Spike. Now lets hope that she won't let Riley in. ~ Don't I love protective Joyce :) Riley will be in trouble *hopefully*
Oh! And Harmony found out about it too. Revenge for it? I wonder what she'll do.

Author's Response: Oh of course Harmony wants revenge... It'd be terribly disappointing if she didn't ;) I'm glad you're enjoying this so far, and thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 10:39 am Title: The Virus of Life

Oh goodie Harmony is going to do something, maybe.

I wonder if she has realized yet that Spike doesn't love her, and wants the slayer.

Love it more please.

Author's Response: Yes, she will. The question is *what* will it be? Don't look at me- I'm not tellin' ;) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 08:19 am Title: The Virus of Life

That's it! Harmony can do vengeance for Spike! I will not be satisfied unless it is done!

Author's Response: Okay, I gotta cater to the readers after all :D

Reviewer: MadBrillianT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 06:26 am Title: The Virus of Life

American History X is one of the few truly masterful movies of our generation. the first time i saw the shower rape scene, i was too shocked to react, but every time i have seen it afterwards, i have cried. to imagine someone could do that to someone else is something i will never be able to fathom.
fantastic update!

Author's Response: I totally agree on your assesment of that film. Thank you for your kind review, and kick ass username (I

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