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Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:28 am Title: Goodbye...

Fabulous update, I'm really squirming in my seat for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Lol, okay. I'll try to hammer out an update asap :D Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 08:42 pm Title: Goodbye...

I liked Harmony in this chapter too. Don't know what Buffy will do because of Spike (attempting to drain her)

Author's Response: Buffy's very much confused as to what's expected of her, and what she needs to do... Thanks for your review :D

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Goodbye...

i wasnt expecting this turn of events in this chapter. most of all the harmony who totally and unselfishlly loves spike. i was really touched by her action. after learning the truth she still could think of asking buffy to spare spike. i love her! i hope buffy can love like that without reservations and conditions. I think she already has feelings for him though because she lied to save spike's from giles!

Author's Response: I never had any doubt that Harmony loved Spike, and since this is pre "Crush," before he was a real bastard to her, I saw no reason for her to be... pissed off about the love triangle predicament. Oh, and Buffy, Buffy, Buffy... we'll see :D Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 07:27 am Title: Goodbye...

good for harmony, i hope xander doesn't do anything stupid.
loved the update.
more please i'm greedy

Author's Response: Oh... who can tell with Xander, lol. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 02:39 am Title: Goodbye...

wow. who knew that harmony....wow!!! lol. great job. loved it lots and lots. please post soon. wonder how xander is gonna take the news of riley raping spike. i hope he doesn't make an ass out of himself. and anyway, i thought spike's reaction to this whole mess was totally justified. i wouldn't have had it any other way.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought I should actually have Harm as a character- one who wasn't disposable (though she does exit this chapter). Most cause I've seen her on AtS s5 as a full character. And thanks- I'm glad you approved of Spike's actions :D

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 09:42 pm Title: Goodbye...

I can completely understand why they didn't tell Xander. With him they'd need to tie him down and show a film for him to get a clue and even then he might say Spike deserved it or make jokes.

I find myself liking harmony.

Author's Response: Yeah- it'll be a doozy when I actually get to the part where they have to tell him *something*... I'm glad you liked Harm- I've watched her, particularly on AtS s5, and was able to see her layers. I didn't want her to just be a tool. Thanks for reviewing :D

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