Reviews For I'll Always Come Back to You
Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Two
Date: 04/03/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Two
i really tried to read this, but this is as far as i could get. your writing needs a lot of work. there's too many mistakes and it's a bit too out of character for me. you said you had a beta, but i think you need another one. just a suggestion.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing I'd posted the wrong chapters. I'm working my way through them fixing up the mistakes it's my fault not Eve's she's a great beta.... Thanks for leaving a review
Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Two
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Two
He asked her right infront for Angel that was brave.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review