Date: 01/11/2015 - 06:53 am Title: Is This Real?
Excellent start - one thing that I do have problems with in the early high school timeline is that both Angel and Spike are so much older than Buffy and a heavy sexual attraction and sexual encounters with her at this age seems inappropriate to me. For sure, it's one of those everyone has their own perspective. So kinda hoping your story is not heavy on sex between Spike and Buffy - I will read it all the way through either way.
Date: 09/05/2007 - 03:19 am Title: Is This Real?
Hi there, loving the story! Can't wait to see what's going to happen! I hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism, but I feel sort of compelled to point this out - you seem to be fond of using the word "gunna" a whole lot... in practically every dialogue exchange in fact! Though that's how it's pronounced, it's actually spelled "gonna". I know that seems really finnicky of me, but when it's used repeatedly it kind of stands out!
Date: 04/17/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: Is This Real?
Good chapter!!! I like your Cordy, tons and tons of attitude. ;) Xander, as always, is a jerk. (off) Giles didn't have much to say, which surprised me. I would have thought he would be a lot less accepting of the situation. ??? Spike can't dance, and is shy about it??? Things ARE getting really interesting!!!
Date: 04/15/2007 - 12:32 am Title: Is This Real?
great chapter
Date: 04/14/2007 - 08:15 pm Title: Is This Real?
ooooooooooooohhhhh, Love it!
Date: 04/14/2007 - 07:00 pm Title: Is This Real?
oohh goddie very well i like it so far
Date: 04/14/2007 - 04:15 pm Title: Is This Real?
Bronze.. didn't expect Spike to show so soon. But just as I thought, Xander is jealous of Spike. Loved the dance. Looking forward to more.
Date: 04/14/2007 - 12:27 pm Title: Is This Real?
OH I love it.
Date: 04/14/2007 - 09:40 am Title: Is This Real?
enjoyed the word play looking forward to the update