Loved it!

Author's Response: Good to hear it!! Thanks so much for the regular reviewing!!

Oh, great fun! Love Spike in Sub-mode.

Author's Response: Lol, generally i prefer things the other way round but this hasn't been nearly as hellish to write as I thought so who knows what may happen in the future! Thanx for the review.

Sure hope Spike doesn't screw it up again. I think Buffy's really getting the hang of it now! Very hot and a bit fun as well (I love "cocky" spike.... pun intended). But he better mind his Ps and Qs now or he'll be sorry he messed with the Slayer! More please.

Author's Response: lol!!! 'cocky spike' - you really do HAVE to intend that pun when it concerns Spike............hmmm sorry lost for a moment contemplating his 'cockiness' hehe - glad you're liking it. Hopefully Spike's P's and Q's will be very much watched from here on in but there again it's Spike so who knows? Will have to wait and see i guess! Thanx for the review

*wicked smile* im kinda hoping spike won't be able to control himself..

Author's Response: lol - never mind your smile!! you sound entirely wicked thinking things like that and wanting poor Spikey to get in even more trouble!! hehe gotta admit it might be entertaining though!

That was truly wonderful sweetie. You are showing the intense emotions from both roles so well and making certain that your readers understand the depth of feelings that go into what takes place when these 'games' are played.

So many little lines jumped out at me and they are a jumble because of the hottness of it all as well. Very sensual unertones through it all. Huge foreplay and sexual build up. I loved how Buffy pulled her inner slayer strength though, how she recognized Spike's ability and what he always did and found that same strength in herself. also how she remembered that even though the demon surfaces during the games, the inner man was there and he was the one she needed to reach.

This isn't all about pain and like she said, beating him senseless. That is abuse and has nothing to do with BDSM. It's about emotions and deep release and trust and understanding. You captured it to perfection.

Bravo on a job well done, and of course I can't wait for more smutty goodness. You are writing to perfection here and pulling us all in to see just how hard it is for Buffy to take this role and how much her success mean to them both and their relationship. Just perfect.

Author's Response: awwww ya big schmoozer! You're too kind really ya are!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this hunny. I know you pretty much always 'get' what I'm doing, where i'm going and what it all means and thats always a great help to me!! I love getting really detailed reviews like this - they're the kind i used to leave before I dropped off the face of the earth - I will get back to leaving them again though and I'll be starting with your stuff real soon missy - soon as I get some nasty academic stuff out of the way! Hope you continue to enjoy my little ramblings and that I continue to capture things well. Thanks sooooo much for such a lovely lovely review darlin. x