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Reviewer: An American Mom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 02:01 am Title: First

There truly are not words.... I am not often one for leaving reviews on completed stories, wagering that the writer has long since forgotten the project to an extent that my little bit of opinion won't mean much. This story, however, I could not help but leave a little something to tell you how truly inspiring the writing is, how heartbreaking the characters and their story is. You have captivated things, emotions and events, that too many young people face today. It is a difficult story to read, but the ending is nothing short of perfect. I wish I had better words to impart on the brilliant work you have here submitted, but, alas, such words are failing me where they have so obviously not failed you.

Reviewer: JohnDoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2010 - 05:55 am Title: First

I will read this in its entirety one day, I promise, but tonight is just not the night. The subjects in the story hit really close to home, and while usually I can relate while still staying separate from the plot, I can't at this moment but... I wanted to leave you a review anyway and let you know that your writing is amazing and your characters are so heartbreakingly beautiful in all their pain and the love they hold for each other, it's inspiring...

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2009 - 08:27 am Title: First

This story was awesome. When I read the warnings in the beginning i was weary, but it was a dark story with a happy ending, an endind that made me warm inside :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 - 04:14 pm Title: First

These two damaged people are heart breaking, but them finding solace in one another is beautifully conveyed. Spike's return to Sunnydale and our discovery of the events that haunt him was vividly described and explained his interest in another haunted teen. His immediate reaction upon laying eyes on Buffy was believably explained by seeing her spirited off by his molester.

You did an excellent job peppering in a lot of back story in this chapter: Spike and Buffy have both been violated by the same man, Spike somehow managed to get a pregnant Buffy away from the molester, and that man, thankfully, was arrested and is now dead. I'm off to see how all of these events unfolded.

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 07:02 pm Title: First

Wow. What a chapter. Your writing is just impeccable. The mood you set right from the first sentence is so brilliantly chilling. Just Perfect. Of course no one (well at least I know I don’t!) likes reading such horrific stories, but you’ve compelled me!

Author's Response: I wanted to grab my readers by the throat and it seems I've managed that. Thank you for braving the subject matter. I very much appreciate it.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 12:46 am Title: First

I noticed there was a her AND a baby? There's a baby? Who's is it? I hope it's Spike and Buffy's. Not that monster's. Loving this!

Author's Response: All will be revealed, just bear with me a bit longer. Thanks for reading and being kind enough to leave a review. I really do appreciate it. (Somehow saying I'm glad you're enjoying this feels weird, but I hope you know what I mean.) Thanks again!

Reviewer: Samantha_78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 06:05 pm Title: First

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapter =)

Author's Response: Glad you're reading. Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 04:36 am Title: First

wow, great start, very intense.

Author's Response: Yup, it's gonna be an intense ride. I hope you're willing to stick it out. Thanks for reading and also for leaving a review. I really do appreciate it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: First

I saw this story in your LJ but I thought t was pure Spangel and I don't have time to read that yet being behind my Spuffy stories. I was surprised I saw this here and read your A/N. So it is Spuffy too...
I'm not much for the angst so maybe I fall behind when it gets too much. The start is very intense. But it seems to have an 'happy end' as much as is possible under the circumstances if this is indeed where the story will head.

Author's Response: I'm sorry about the confusion with the author's note. I guess I just expected everyone to realize it was a spuffy story without me having to explain that bit also. I was wrong. I'm sorry about that. And to rest your fears -- the main thrust of this is a spuffy relationship. It just so happens they both had a horrific experience at the hands of the same man. It's actually what brings them together. And yeah, as much as these characters can have in this story, there will be something of a happy ending.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 12:11 am Title: First

This is interesting, I am trying to figure out how old Buffy it and a baby, I am assuming it is the bad mans, who we have no idea of a name.

More please, love it


Author's Response: At the start of this story, Buffy is nearly 17 -- in the flashback moments she's only 15. The bad man's name and his connection to both of them will be revealed. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 12:11 am Title: First

Fabulous start. Very heartbreaking. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon. So glad to see another of your fics. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you for reading and leaving a review. Knowing that you're looking forward to more makes my day.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 12:00 am Title: First

Interesting start. More please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I appreciate it. There's more on the way.

Reviewer: Alyxandria Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: First

Um...Wow. I mean, truly. I don't really know what else to say. You just broke my heart with this and we're only one chapter in. I am *hooked*. I can't wait to read more of this. It's amazing.
-Alyx

Author's Response: Thank you. I've tried really hard to evoke a certain feeling to this story and I hope it's being conveyed. I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you so much for being brave enough to read and also for leaving a review

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