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Date: 12/10/2009 - 04:47 pm Title: Third

This was another taut, tightly written chapter. Gunn is treading lightly, not wanting to spook the injured woman. His concern and care are lovely to read. I like that he recognizes the signs of abuse in Buffy's sister, too. The vividly drawn, bleak image of her and her silent baby ushering Buffy out of the hospital was haunting. It gives me hope that now that this family is on Gunn's radar, the abuse will be found out. Too bad we already know Darla doesn't survive it.

Spike feeling he's to blame for Buffy's injuries due to his inaction years before makes sense, though he was just doing what was necessary to save himself. If he hadn't fled, he might have been the one to die at his abuser's hands. Buffy's thoughts of suicide on the way home from the hospital made it clear, if Spike hadn't been there to save her, she might not have survived either.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Third

Hope Buffy can get away in time! Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: All that will be revealed. . .the how and when. . Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2007 - 07:58 am Title: Third

This fiction really intrigues me. I could tell that this will be full of angst but i dont care. As long as it is well written and necessary for the storyline then it is fine. So far i like it. i wanted to know more about their story so please continue.

Author's Response: Thank you. There are glimmers of happiness, tucked away amid all the angst and heartbreak. And like I said, there is something of a happy ending in site. More of their story is about to be revealed. I hope you stay with me until the end. I promise to do my best to keep the quality as it's been. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Jaesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2007 - 03:02 am Title: Third

I don't normally review, a fact that bothers me to no end. But I wanted to show support for this wonderfully intense, emotion-wrenching story.

This is some of your best work, Nia. It evokes such a response from me that I can't quite put into words. It's a very different and difficult story, yet you managed to keep the intergrity of the characters with all of their tender emotions and strengths.

Brilliant, just brilliant! I will patiently (HA!) be awaiting another update from you.

Author's Response: Thank you. I certianly could use the support for this one. I'm so proud of how this one is turning out and the fact it's not getting much recognition brings me to tears. I've tried so hard with this one, and I think it shows, and everyone who's left a review has been so positive, which just makes my day. Thank you. Really. I think you know what it means to me.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: Third

So Darla is her sister and it looks like the baby her niece. It’s so sad…that monster must be her sister’s boyfriend or husband? Darla knows too. They’re all stuck aren’t they. Thank god for Spike. I can’t wait to see how it continues on. Poor Buffy and Spike. You’re doing an amazing job. I know it must be hard to write something of this nature. I’ll be looking for the next chapter.

Author's Response: They are stuck. At the moment, there's no way for any of them to escape. Thank you, for reading and leaving me a review. I really do appreciate it. It does mean a lot and it makes my day.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 08:00 pm Title: Third

OH I like that, so the man lives with her and Darla and her sister doesn't seem to care.

Author's Response: Darla is caught also -- he's not a nice man at all. All that will be revealed. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me a review. I very much appreciate it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 06:42 pm Title: Third

Intense lyrics for an intense chapter.
After hearing Spike having talked to Gunn I get the feeling that Spike knows now who did this to Buffy. It sounds almost as if it was the same that did things to him, abusing him. Can be I'm wrong just because he was abused and knows what she feels.
I fear Gunn didn't have a choice, only to let Buffy go. It's the law...
Yeah, it's the same abuser, right? And Darla knows but doesn't help.
I'm glad for Buffy that she has at last this: Feeling safe being with Spike. She doesn't have much.

Author's Response: He has his suspicions, but no proof. That will come with time. Darla knows, but she's caught also. There's many secrets the girls keep, and mostly from each other.

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