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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 - 05:24 pm Title: Six

I like the way you opened and closed this chapter with Gunn looking at case files. In the beginning we see that he's determined to find the truth of Buffy's injuries, and in the end we see that Spike and Buffy escaped the abuser Gunn was determined to find.

These scenes bookending the two in the hotel room, waking to one another, revealing their shared abuser, worked beautifully and was emotionally satisfying. Spike and Buffy joined forces and slipped Liam Angelus' leash and now he's dead. He can't hurt them any more. Nicely done.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 10:50 pm Title: Six

Gunn digging deeper who hurt Buffy? Must be good :) One that cares for her (what happened to her).
Loved the scene with Buffy and Spike, very moving.
And yeah, still reading.

Author's Response: Well, Gunn wants to put closure to the story and the files. . . And I'm glad you liked the scene, it was really difficult to write. Thanks, as always, Cordy, you're the best.

Reviewer: Manda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Six

Hey,

I just saw your name and a new story I didn't have the time to read till now . It's difficult to find a good author today and since I think that you have beautiful writing skills I started reading a WIP, which I normally don't do.
What can I say...I understand that this is a piece that is hard to write but it is a beauty and I intend to give you all the time you need to update or finish your work.
sorry, english isn't my native language and I'm shy about writing reviews but I wanted to let you know that I really appreciate your work. I hope I'll read more from you in the future.

take care Manda

Author's Response: Don't ever be shy about your English, it's very good. Thank you for taking the time to read this, and review. I know it's difficult, I know it's a hard story, believe me I understand and I appreciate it all the more when someone does read it. Thanks.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 03:05 pm Title: Six

Still with you! I've been waiting for a new chapter on this story and I was so happy when I saw you had updated. This chapter was just as beautiful and sad as the others and I loved it from the beginning to the end. No matter how long it will take, I just hope you'll try to finish this amazing story. I absolutely love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still reading. Oh, no worries, while this may take a while, it will be finished. I just have no idea how long it's going to be. . . Only time and the characters will tell.

Reviewer: dawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 02:08 pm Title: Six

plyyyyyyyzzz write sme mre...this is reali...sad..wt happens 2 darla???

Author's Response: It is sad. . . but there's also hope. You'll learn Darla's fate in the coming chapters. Thanks again for reading and leaving a review.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 09:57 am Title: Six

Still gut wrenching but Will and Buffy are beautiful together. Oh and I can't write for toffees (hence the reading) but maybe I should try writing for lemons because this is good - you have nothing to worry about in the writing department really.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sooo glad you see the beauty in them together. I have to balance that so carefully, and I'm really glad you've seen it. ~laughs~ I don't know. I'm not pleased with any of my writing lately. I think it's all crap. . . . ~sighs~

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 06:16 am Title: Six

Definitely with you! (though my previous reviews on this story were on another site)

So much raw emotion, so much pain, and yet glimmers of hope shine through when the two of them are together.

And I like Gunn's attitude towards the case!

xxx

PS. If this is your writing sucking lemons, maybe I should start feeding my muse lemons instead of chocolate!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're sticking with this. The emotions are tough (hence the delays) but I'm plowing through and trying to get it all down. My muse, unfortunately, doesn't respond to either chocolate or lemons. . .

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 05:22 am Title: Six

Wow! So very intense. And great.
So glad to see you writing and updating again.
I'm interested to see where Gunn takes the story. I'm guessing that even if he finds our lead characters, he will figure it was "street justice" and turn a blind eye.
Keep writing! Just the other day I looked at this again and wondered if it was going to the fic-that-petered-out pile, and hoped it wasn't. You spin words like a web and just draw the reader deeply into the tale. Your words seem so subtlely descriptive that it is almost like watching a film noir, done all light & shadows...
Thanks...impatiently awaiting the next update already.
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: Nope, no fic-that-petered-out. . . I promised myself that if I ever started posting something, I'd finish it. And I have to say, with this, it's really hard sometimes to remember that promise. But I will finish it. As for what's going to happen and how much Gunn will learn, that's to be determined . . . and revealed. Thanks so much for reviewing. (oh, and I'm sooo pleased you caught the film-noir feel -- because that's the mood I was trying to evoke).

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:43 am Title: Six

I can really feel the emotions running off Spike and Buffy. More please!

Author's Response: Well, that's good, because that means I'm doing my job correctly. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Cara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:21 am Title: Six

I've just started reading, and I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for leaving a review, it really makes my day.

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