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Date: 12/10/2009 - 07:38 pm Title: Eleven

You painted a vivid, horrific picture of the devastation Spike walked in on and it's no wonder he slipped into a fugue state with the monster who molested him laughing at the fact he'd killed them all. Buffy's injuries may not have been life threatening, but the terror that they sparked in Spike, thinking he'd lost her, believably spurred him into action.

The picture you painted of that haunted baby is in marked contrast to the toddler he's become. He's been raised with love and security and soon he'll have a sibling. Like Spike and Buffy, he's healing. It's lovely to read how happy he's become.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Eleven

This story is very well written, you took many difficult subjects and made them into a good story. dark, but good. This story dealt with the subject matter in a sensitave way. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to give the subject matter the respect it deserves.

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 04:07 am Title: Eleven

Awww Connor is too cute. I love this stroy and I can sense a conclusion soon! Can't wait!!

Author's Response: I'm actually working on it, so hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2009 - 07:50 pm Title: Eleven

Loved the chapter. Painful but good if you know what I mean. Hope your muse will keep cooperating.

Author's Response: For the longest time it hasn't. It seems to be stirring -- albeit lazily.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2009 - 06:08 am Title: Eleven

Love the characterizations in this story. Really enjoying it. Unique story line.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 12:46 am Title: Eleven

Wonderful! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Date: 01/13/2009 - 10:41 pm Title: Eleven

Awesome but sad chapter. You're an amazing writer.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Date: 01/13/2009 - 10:41 pm Title: Eleven

I know the song but reading the lyrics the music isn't distracting from the meaning (hope that makes sense).
*sigh* Sounds as if Darla didn't make it, Angelus killed her. (When I imagine Darla I see her how she looked in 'Dexter'.) A strong fighter but even if the fight was won, she lost.
They (Buffy and Connor) were lucky that they got out (escaped) both.
~ Good to see an update :) Enjoyed it even if the chapter was tough.

Author's Response: It does make sense. No, Darla didn't make it. Both Buffy and Connor were lucky to make it out with their lives.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 03:38 pm Title: Eleven

You are very good at tugging at the heartstrings - Spike's first encounter with Buffy at her grave in Origins as just one case (out of many) in point - but this ...... this does exactly that, but there is no sentimentality or history that impacts on the coming together of these two young people. They are compliciit in that they both suffer from the scorching identity of 'victim' at the hands of the same bastard, but really the struggle, at its most poignant, is happening years in future, when they are safe and together, but still struggling. Will some crisis have to be reached, confronted and dealt with, or are you going to still their troubled waters some other way?

Lovely is the wrong word to use for this story, but your competent, deliberately short-sentenced narrative makes their random thoughts and gently diverse points-of-view (and you manage to give us both) into a strangely uplifting and compelling read. Well done, Niamh.

Author's Response: I don't think there's anything I can say to this but -- thank you. And for the most part, the storm has past. They must deal with the aftermath. I think they've been through enough. . .

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